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FF-M&G I LOVE U updated on page 49 (Page 12)

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonali_N

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ur most welcome l

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged

amazinh update

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
wow awesome... nice to c geet developing feelings for him.. very curious to knw abt her past.. continue soon
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
awesome updte
love it
pls cont soon
thanks pm

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged

part 7

Maan smiled and they continue to walk

Maan:geet kuch apna bare me btao me to subha uthate hu office ata hu ghumta hu tafri karta hu aur mjh ko martial arts ata ha aur mein office se ghar jane ke baad gym jata hu….

He kept on blabbering and she was just listening him

Geet:bas bas tumhre mouth me koi car he jo non stop chalti rehti he

Maan:nhi

They continue to walk for atime and then decided to go back when they turnes some goons gathered around them

Maan:in low voice geet mere sath chalo aur apna mu neecha kar ke

Geet:maan me in se nhi darti tum darte ho to aisa chalo .

She went ahead of him one person said

Person 1:baby kaha ja rhi ho me chor du

Geet:just shut up and get lost

Person 2:buhat bol rhi he hum jayenge par tjh ko le kar

Geet:aik thapar lagao gi dimagh hil jai ga niklo apnio shakal le kar F*** off

Maan:bhai dekhiye ye meer sath he ap chale jaiye

Geet:maan tum chupp karo 

They were 4 guyzzz and one of them grab geets hand.geet ws trying to get free of the grip.she ws wearing a stone watch which hurted her and blood started to ooze out . maan was angry now how dare anyone hurt and touch geet'

Maan:hath chor us ka

Paerson2:kyun kiya kare ge

Maan:sharafat se msajha rha hu samjh nhia arha tum ko

Person 3:yaar ghussa mat kara bath leyenge

Maan:kiya kaha tu ne

Paerson 4:aba itna bhao mat kha

Maan:hath chor

When they didn't leave geets hand maan give a punch on the 3rd person who was holding geet hands he drop on the ground and was bleeding the other person hit maan.maan hides geet behind him.then other guy came and hit on his nose

Geet:screamedMAAANNN

Maan:he looked at her and first time he saw something for him in her eyes

Maan started to beat him theer were 2 more guyzz those attack maan.he fought bravely he was really very badly injured but if he stoped fighting geet would be in dangeri.he hit those guyzz very badly he punch them in there stomach he was also bean betaing up .when there was only  maan and 4 person left he punched him so hard that he could never get up .geet was just standing stunned.maan was very badly injured his nose was bleeding his hand have beet cut his head was bleeding he was very badly injured after when he defeat all the guyzz he hold geet hands and started to move when the 3rd person got up and kept knife on geet neck

Person 3:ab hum tjh ko nhi chorein ge is larki ko hum mar dalein ge

Geet tried to go away from the grip but she cant

Geet:maan plzz help me plz\

Maan:choro us ko

He was getting closer and suddenly he grabbed his hand and throw the knife away.he again fought and maan and geet started to walk again to home geet was carrying maan he kept his hand on her neck and was supporting him

Geet:maan tum ko buaht lagi u sure tum itni dor tak c

Halo ge

Maan:geet me sahi hu

Geet:maan meri wajah se tum ko buaht chot lag gaai I m sryy

Maan;shhh geet chup is me sorry ke koi baat nhi meer samne tus ne tum se bataamizi kaisa ki

She hugged him she didn't knew what to do he was slowly loosing his consciousness. Lucky house was near. She entered the house everyone was present there

Geet:crying dadimaa

Dadimaa:came running with everyone.kiya hua

Roshini:maan

Dev came running

Dev:ye bro ko kiya hua

Annie:bro bro

Arjun:geet kiya hua tum dono ko

Yash was not present at that time

Geet:dadimaa wo hum wapis araha the kuch gundo ne hum par hamla kiya wo to maan tha he saved me

Maan:me theek hu

Dadimaa:arjun rahul is ko le kar jiye

Arjun :jee

Geet:nhi me us ko apna kamre me le kar ja rhi hu ap log doctor ko boliye

Arjun:geet hum le jate hein

Geet:nhi agar baar baar is ko pakro ge he will get hurt more

Rahul:sahi he did me aur arjun bro doctor ko le kar ate hein

They reached geet room

Roshini:geet tum to sahi ho na

Geet:bas thori se chot lagi ha

Roshini:geet tmhre hath se oitnablood nikal rha ha

Geet:pehle maan phr baad me jo ho ga wo dekh lenge

Geet laid maan on her bed he was unconscious.roshini sat there rubbing maan hands and .annie dev and dadimaa were standing there.arjun brought the doctor

Geet:aiye doctor

Doctor:app log bahar jiye me is ko check karta hu

Geet:ji they all were standing out.when doctor came

Roshini:maan sahi to he na

Dadimaa:koi serious baat to nhi ha

Geet:is maan alright

Doctor :he really got very serious wounds I have bandage his wounds he will get better..these atre some medicine make sure he eats them

Geet:app log  kahan kha lein me maan ke pas hu app mere aur maan ka khana kamre me bhejwa dein

Dadimaa and roshini smiled:acha thek he tum apna hath ko to bandage karwa lo

Geet:ji.

Rahu:me kardu

Geet:kardo

Rahul and geet sat and everyone left .rahul and geet were there

Rahul:di aj ap ko dar lag rha tha na

Geet:kyun arjun joined them

Arjun:lag rha tha ya nhi

Geet:ha to

Rahul:di ap bas kar do

Geet:kiya matlab

Arjun:tum aisa bol rhi ho jaisa tmhe kuch nhi pata

Geet:tum dono kiya bakwas kar rhe ho

Rahul:di maan ap se buhat pyaar karta ha

Geet:bas buhat hogaya

Arjun:plzz geet kab tak kab tak

Geet:acha aik bar ye ghalti kar chuki hu

Maan was awake and listening to them but he pretended he was sleeping

Arjun:par geet

Geet:aik bar pyaar kiya tha yaad he kiya hua tha me ne apni behen ko kho diya aur phr apne dost ko aur kiya chateh ho mama papa ka wada bhi nhi rakh pai apni behen ko kho diya jis ko itne pyaar se pala tha.she started crying

Arjun and rahul hugged her

Arjun:geet plzz aik bar jo hua he wo zarrori nhi dooara ho

Geet:dar lagta ha mjh ko tum log ko na kho doon

Rahul:di

Geet:shh jao khana kha lo me thori yahi hu

When they left maan opened his eyes

Geet:maan tum theek ho na

Maan:yupp.he tried to get up

Geettum leet raho uthne ki zaroorat nhi ha

Maan:par mjh ko pani pena ha

Geet:me pelati hu . she didn't want him to get up

She took the glass and very carefully give him sip he was soo happy that this was his bets moment of the life he wanted this yuppy

Geet:bas

He said yes she said tuma ram karo me ati hu fresh ho kar kuch chaiye to mjh ko  bta dene

 

Precap:geet:maan ab yahi reh ga

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
awesome!...
 
loved the way how geet took care of maan!...
 
i hope that maan will be able to gain geet's trust!...
 
continue soon!
 
thnx 4 the pm!


Edited by sweet scorpio - 12 May 2011 at 2:49am

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
wow nice update sweety

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awesome part.
loved it.
 continue soon.

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