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LOVING LAMENTS... MAANEET... THREAD 1 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update . i loved the title of the story "loving laments".after knowing the meaning it added up more emotions to it . loved the way maan is repenting but as says samay rahete hi humein insaan ka importance pata chalna chaiiye . maan did not realised that what he did . we still did not know ,what was the reason but maan always says "meri wajah se geet chali gaye"
"aksar kab aur kahan aur kaise man apne ko har baitha hai,yeh khud ki maaloom nahi chalta .maloom tab hota hai jab jab jiske kadam par hum sar rakhe hai,wah jhatke se apne kadam ghasit le,aur us vakht hamari neend toot jati aur humein ehsaas hota hai ki arre ,jis kadam ke upar hum sapna dekh rahe the ,so rahe the woh to kab ka jaa chukha hai . aur hum bas uski raah hi bat rahe the "
 this for maan .use pata hi nahi chala ki usne kya kho diya ,jab pata chala bahut der ho chukhi .
touched me zoha. fabulous update . this for you.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
please let us know y she left where is she right now
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
hey i love both ur updates...
u know v fans get cranky @ times when reading an ff with maaneet and their painful relationship but this ff is awesome...
just a req pl dont change wat u hv already thought bcoz i want this a longer ff...
just few more updates with the suspense might build up a lot of curiosity u know...
pl do consider it
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part.
loved it.
 feel sad for khushi and maan.
 update soon.
 well dear I read ur note and my point of view is u should go with ur story line,
 it's ur story dear.
 I'm with u.
I love u r story and both ffs.
 love
rakhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
do continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited by sweety.2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!
 
i just hope that sameera's plan will work!...
 
continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... hope geet comes back... wnt to knw more abt their past... thanx a lot for the update.. continue soon