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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Guys I wanna ask that if you think that the story is not good and I m butchering Sid's character than PLZ tell me I'll stop writing it. As I have told you all that I really don't know anything about writing, its first time I wrote something, so I m sorry if I have hurt your feelings. I seriously don't know if the story is good or not. I asked one of my friend and told her the whole concept and she said it is good, so I wrote. Again I m saying sorry if unintentionaly I have hurt any one of you.
@karan_sidmodi...I m sorry that you didn't liked the concept n its not my frustration, I just thought to write a story, I never wanted to hurt anyone's feeling.

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia1000

Guys I wanna ask that if you think that the story is not good and I m butchering Sid's character than PLZ tell me I'll stop writing it. As I have told you all that I really don't know anything about writing, its first time I wrote something, so I m sorry if I have hurt your feelings. I seriously don't know if the story is good or not. I asked one of my friend and told her the whole concept and she said it is good, so I wrote. Again I m saying sorry if unintentionaly I have hurt any one of you.
@karan_sidmodi...I m sorry that you didn't liked the concept n its not my frustration, I just thought to write a story, I never wanted to hurt anyone's feeling.

iam loving which story line is going on Smile

update iam waiting Smile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sonia1000

Guys I wanna ask that if you think that the story is not good and I m butchering Sid's character than PLZ tell me I'll stop writing it. As I have told you all that I really don't know anything about writing, its first time I wrote something, so I m sorry if I have hurt your feelings. I seriously don't know if the story is good or not. I asked one of my friend and told her the whole concept and she said it is good, so I wrote. Again I m saying sorry if unintentionaly I have hurt any one of you.
@karan_sidmodi...I m sorry that you didn't liked the concept n its not my frustration, I just thought to write a story, I never wanted to hurt anyone's feeling.


Hi Sonia,

I have been wanting to comment and hence also reserved my post in this thread But before I could get down to writing my thoughts about the story I see that you have posed a question to all us readers here.

Point to be noted I am just putting down my thoughts about character and story here

Story and Characterization - overall the plot of the story is going great till now. The characterizations have been maintained well by you and kudos on that.

As the story progressed Riddhima due to that one incident of meeting Sid out the mall got her pining for more time with him and wants to be friends.

It is possible reaction that a person may have. She felt the need for a person with whom she could spend some time being herself and she is just fulfilling it. As for Sid agreeing also does not look out of place.

Riddhima's gradual realization about her feeling was also shown quite naturally. Yes, Riddhima did have feelings for Sid and for it to re-surface is possible. And as you have shown she does feel it's incorrect but then goes with the flow of emotions. Riddhima's character is appropriately caught by you. She wants to be right always hence is always being torn between the right and wrong. Also she is weak by nature due to which she tends to take the easy way out. She knows what she feels for Sid is incorrect but goes with the flow of her feelings cause that is easier for her it brings her comfort.

Further when they do get into an awkward situation, both their defences go up and are avoiding eachother. Possible behavior.

The way the characters were behaving till now was perfect. Very much in sync with the actual serial characters

Then comes the instance where Riddhima goes to Sid's house and Riddhima initiate a physical relationship with Sid.

Riddhima I felt wanted to feel secure. And as Riddhima herself has portrayed she does feel secure with Sid. Hence here going to his house was not out of the way.

Secondly when she did ask him to hold her I feel that was more for the reason of being comforted. The comforting touch of a person with whom one feels secure works better than just comforting words.  

 

Then when she questioned Sid about being  a bad person and that is why no one loves her Sid affirmed that he did love her. Sid has always accepted Riddhima for what she was good bad worse whatever and he is just affirming that.

Yes she is a married woman hence he is trying hard to keep his distance. But Riddhima gave into her feelings. Why ... my feeling is that Riddhima always wanted that assurance from Sid that yes she mattered hence in flow of emotions with that assurance also coming her way she confessed and let her emotions take control.

In case of Sid, it was not much different. He wanted Riddhima to be comfortable always with whatever she shared with him. She confessed and initiated the relationship. Considering she was now married to someone else he did try to resist. But for him the turn of emotions were so strong for many reasons -


1. Riddhima's vulnerable state which he cannot handle ever.
2.Riddhima confessing her love for him Some thing he always craved to hear.
3. Riddhima initiating the relationship without any inhibitions which he always wanted.

As many say we are humans and hence he too let his emotions get better of him. They were too strong.


Going forward Riddhima upset with herself cause she blames to have forced Sid into this. She did not force persay but she did initiate which if she did not initiate Sid would not have.

So all in all your story I feel is going perfect in terms of flow characterizations etc  So I think you should carry on.

Also one of the most important thing is ... the story is what the writer perceives, envisages and wants to portray hence I think you should tell what you think and we are here to read and read intently Embarrassed


PS ... I completely forgot to mention ... your VM nice ... Embarrassed


Edited by DJ.. - 31 May 2011 at 7:15am

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia1000

Guys I wanna ask that if you think that the story is not good and I m butchering Sid's character than PLZ tell me I'll stop writing it. As I have told you all that I really don't know anything about writing, its first time I wrote something, so I m sorry if I have hurt your feelings. I seriously don't know if the story is good or not. I asked one of my friend and told her the whole concept and she said it is good, so I wrote. Again I m saying sorry if unintentionaly I have hurt any one of you.
@karan_sidmodi...I m sorry that you didn't liked the concept n its not my frustration, I just thought to write a story, I never wanted to hurt anyone's feeling.


DONT YOU DARE ABANDON THIS! Shocked Sonia honey... trust me... you are doing a FAB FAB job with this FF of yours!! I have no idea how you are gonna take forward the story but I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO IT!! I love ur FF cos it's different from all other FFs! We all show Sid as this guy who has got immense will power and well we almost treat him like a god... i mean all of us...! Your Sid is more human! I mean he is definitely no god but just a mere human who can do mistakes!

I mean imagine... his ex-wife... the one whom he loved dearly came to him... confessed her love for him... kissed him... hugged him... being a human he's bound to do what he did... it's not like he stalked and planned this  moment or anything... well it just happened... And i am not justifying Sid here... cos as i said earlier what he did is a mistake even though he was pulled towards it...

All i wanna say is don't abandon this ff just cos of few harsh comments!! I mean everyone cant tell the same story and urs is different in a different way! So please please continue this FF i am super curious to know what happens next...! and please update soon!!

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
SoniaHug
 
Dont you dare stop writing! You're a really good writer and Ive really  enjoyed reading your FF.
 
First of all this is your story and you can write it however you want.  We are just your audience and if we dont like it then we should simply stop reading. Ive read stories where if i havent liked them, Ive just not carried on reading them.
 
In fact you have had the guts to take the story in a completely different direction. Its because we all love Sid that we want to believe he can never do anything wrong. But at the end of the day he's human too and makes mistakes just like the rest of us!!
 
Dont you even think about stopping! Plus im desperate to know whats going to happen next...especially with Sid.
 
Your doing a great job sweetie!Hug

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia1000

Guys I wanna ask that if you think that the story is not good and I m butchering Sid's character than PLZ tell me I'll stop writing it. As I have told you all that I really don't know anything about writing, its first time I wrote something, so I m sorry if I have hurt your feelings. I seriously don't know if the story is good or not. I asked one of my friend and told her the whole concept and she said it is good, so I wrote. Again I m saying sorry if unintentionaly I have hurt any one of you.
@karan_sidmodi...I m sorry that you didn't liked the concept n its not my frustration, I just thought to write a story, I never wanted to hurt anyone's feeling.
 
Sonia..
 
I totally understand your feelings.. Criticism and negative feedback can seriously dampen your spirit but the thing is, like I said earlier, none of us out here know the big picture. If you are sure you can justify all thats happening, then go ahead with it. No two people think alike and some ppl may find your justification good enough while some may not. Its hard to please everyone. All we can do is try our best to write as best as we can.
 
As for butchering Sid's character, I'd like to say its a different perspective, thats all. Again as I said in my comment, all of us have an angelic perspective of Sid and you are just saying a more human side to him - one which is prone to commiting mistakes. Just because we have a perfectionist, angelic perspective of Sid, does not mean we cannot tolerate a more human perspective of Sid. Even if we find it difficult to believe, its just a story yaar. Bear with it. When we can watch all the crap thats shown in soaps involving multiple marriages and what not, then I do not think we should take a harsh perspective on a story as engaging as this one, coming from a first time writer with lots of potential.
 
I say Sonia, continue the story the way you have planned.
 
To people who think Sid's character is getting butchered, I understand your perspective too guys. Even I firmly believe Sid can never do anything wrong. Lekin lets wait for the justification guys. If you are unsatisfied with the justification, we'll discuss the shortcomings then and help her for her next time. But, with the way she is handling the story, I am sure Sonia will come up with a really good justification. So lets not jump our horses.. Lets wait for the story to progress..
 
Don't worry and continue the story the way you planned Sonia Smile Eagerly waiting to know what happens next. Smile I can't wait to know you-know-who's reaction and Sid's reaction Smile
 
 

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged
hey sonia
plz dont think of abandoning this FF
this story is ur baby,so u can raise it the way u like 
till the tym u justify all d characters n all d situations everythng is perfect n everythng is alright
so sweetie dont get dishearten n pl contd writing
waitn 4 ur xt update 

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Hi Sonia
I can understand how you're feeling at the moment!!!. But don't worry... everything would be fine... just carry on with the story line as you've planned... i'am sure you'd be able to justify the characters in the end... As far as Sid is concerned, i totally agree with Dj... (me too i mentioned about some similar reasons for his reactions in my comments)...At that moment Sid's emotions were too strong and he got carried by them... But we all know that when Sid does something wrong he'll correct it in the end... And also as we all love Sid you too love him, and we all know that you can't even think of butchering his character... So plz plz plz Sonia don't ever think of abandoning this FF... I think writing a story for the first time, you're doing a great job... So continue soon with what you've in your mind.

Tc


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