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SR-FF LOVE WINS (IMP NOTE Pg-117) (Page 12)

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged

Part 5

A few days have passed but there was no change in Armaan's behaviour. Riddhima was feeling very sad because of Armaan's behaviour towards her. She couldn't understand why he is behaving like this. She hadn't ever seen him so angry. Every time she tried to talk to him but he don't even wanted to listen any excuse.


Riddhima(thinking): Armaan aisa kyu kar raha hai. Wo janta hai ke is waqt main kis dor se guzar rahi hoon phir bhi wo mujy is tarha force kyu kar raha hai. Meri life main itna kuch hua hai,(tears filled in her eyes) Papa ki death ho gayi, Maa mujh se nafrat karti hain aura b Armaan'.. Pata nae Armaan ko achanak kya ho gaya hai is waqt main jab mujy sab se zayada us ki zaroorat hai wo mere sath aise behave kar raha hai. Mujy samajh main nae aa raha main kya karoon, main puri tarha se toot chuki hoon. Mujh main kuch sochne samajhne ki himmat nae hai. Kash Armaan tum mujy samajne ki koshish kartey. Is waqt mujy ek pati se zayada ek dost ki zaroorat hai jo mujy samaj sakey meri himmat barhaey jaise Sid(a smile draw on her lips). Sid ne har mushkil waqt main mera sath diya mujy har museebat se bachaya.  ''..(she cut her thought) main Sid ke bary main kyu soch rahi hoon. Mujy Armaan ke barey main sochna chahiye'.Armaan mera pati hai. Mujy Armaan ke sath zayada se zayada waqt betana chahiye. So that hamre beech ke sarey differences clear ho sakain. Pichley kuch dino main jo bhi hua us ki waja se wo bhi depressed hai shaid is liye wo us  raat thora hyper ho gaya tha. Mujy is baat ko le kar zayada nae sochna chahiye. Humain phir se ek nae shuruwat karni chahiye. (Then she thought for a minute) how about candle light dinner.(she smiled)


Then she went to her room. She grabbed her hand bag and went to Super Market which was quite near to their house. She bought some candles n a few other thing for decoration. Then she came back. She decorated the whole house with candles. After that she went to kitchen to prepare dinner. She cooked Armaan's favourite dishes. After that she went to take bath n got ready before Armaan came back. Now every thing was done n she was waiting for Armaan. After some time Door bell rang. She opened the door and smiled at Armaan. Armaan just gave her an angry look and moved inside the house.


Armaan(in angry tone): Lights kyu off hain'


Riddhima: Maine off ki hain. Actually'.. I have planned a candle light dinner for us.


Armaan: Candle light dinner''. Oh to tumharey pass itna time hai ke tum apne pati ke bare main soch sako'..Nice I m impressed.


Riddhima: Armaan tum aise kyu baat kar rahey ho. Maine''.( Armaan intrupted)


Armaan: Just stop it Riddhima. Yeh achi biwi hone ka dikhawa band karo. Mere pass ane ke khayal se hi tum kamp uthti ho. To yeh sab kyu kar rahi ho.


Riddhima: Armaan aisi baat nae hai. Its just that'..mujhy thora waqt chahiye.


Armaan: Riddhima tum kabhi kisi cheez ke liye ready nae hoti.


Saying this he started moving towards his room.


Riddhima: Armaan maine itne pyaar se tumharey liye khana banaya hai.


Armaan: Pyaar''..(he started laughing)You know what Riddhima'.Mujy lagta hai k shaid tum mujh se pyaar hi nae karti'..


Riddhima(eyes widened): Armaan''yeh tum kya keh rahey ho'..


Armaan: Sahi keh raha hoon Riddhima'..(tears filled in Riddhima's eyes).I think tum mujh se pyaar hi nae karti. Agar tum mujh se pyaar karti to us raat mujhy apne kareeb ane se nae rokti.


Riddhima: Tum mere pyaar par shak kar rahey ho''Armaan tum aisa soch bhi kaise saktey ho maine tumharey liye kya kuch nae kiya. Aur tumhain mere pyaar par yakeen nae hai.


Armaan: Riddhima sach main tum mujh se pyaar karti ho''.


Riddhima: Haan''


Armaan: To tum mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho''..


Riddhima: Haan.


Armaan: Then take your shirt off.


Riddhima(shocked): WHAT?????


Armaan: Tum ne hi to kaha na tum mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho to'..just do it.


Riddhima: Armaan PLZ''..try to understand'''


Armaan: Kya hua Riddhima'..(he came and stood infront of her) Mere liye pyaar kam par gaya''..(he pulled her closer by her waist)Abhi to tum keh rahi thi ke tum mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho.


Riddhima: Armaan tum mujy force kar rahey ho'''..


Armaan: Pati hoon main tumhara haq hai mera tum par. Main jo chahey kar sakta hoon.


Riddhima(involuntarily blurted out): Armaan Sid bhi mera Pati tha. Magar us ne kabhi Pati hone ka faida nahi uthaya. Mujy kabhi Physical relation ke liye force nahi kiya.


Armaan(become angry after listening Sid's name): FOR GOD SAKE RIDDHIMA'''.MAIN SID NAHI HOON.


Riddhima: Haan Armaan tum Sid nahi ho''.or na hi kabhi Sid ki tarha ban saktey ho''''..


Saying this Riddhima ran towards her room crying. After entering the room she locked the room , she bend on her knees and cried her heart out.


 Hey everyone thank you so much for your comments. I hope you like this part but I know you don'tLOL as you all are missing Sid. Sid will be there soonWink.I know you want to kill Armaan after reading this part n I'll join you to do this mahan kamLOL but right now you have to bear him. 

Edited by sonia1000 - 11 May 2011 at 3:24am

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aamirkhanfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
awesome update...riddhima is now realising the difference between armaan and sid...

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jyoti_wahian Senior Member

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
nice update...

armaan is such a  pathetic guy...loser...AngryAngry

update soon..Smile

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-veena.shona- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged

heyyy Sonia

tht guy is so disgustingAngry

he tld tht on her faceShockedAngry

gud tht riddhima is realising how gud sid wsEmbarrassed

vo bhi ab kar rahi hai, besharam auratAngryLOL

plzzz cont soon


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Ovi_Tanni IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Hi  sonia...HugHug


 amazing part as very short...Unhappy...tat haram is really disguting and luking forward to next part...continue soon...Smile

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superxuberant Senior Member

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
the lady is nw realising the worth of the man who gave his everyrhing 4 her happiness
armaan's anger towards her is worth it
actually speaking neither she deserves sid nor is she even worth deserving armaan
okey hope nw the things strikesss her straight in her heart
and she realises wat a big loss she has incured in life...

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RestlessWriter Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged


Its a personal rule of mine that I never have and never will use swear words or abusive words, but after reading your update, for the first time, I had this urge to do so to describe you-know-who.. *Phew.. Breathing in breating out to calm down*
God.. That guy disgusts me.. I mean, I know he thinks with his b***s but come on man, that girl has just been through a divorce, has lost her father and he asks her to take her shirt off just like that???????? What does he take her for? A stripper? Well, I guess when it comes to him, you just cannot expect anything else...
At the risk of getting murdered, the scene reminded me of SR's holi seduction and the difference was so obvious.. Sid too had been trying to prove a point then but what he did was still more.. I don't know how to put it.. Sophisticated? Humane? way of proving his point rather than this.. I dunno.. cheapo kind of act.. God.. I would most definitely have slapped you-know-who.. beaten him up black and blue...
Okay... I seriously need to calm down coz I'm getting so riled up.. Sorry but I don't think even Riddhima deserves to be metted such a treatment.. No woman deserves to be talked to so trashily...
Great job dear.. You are doing a wonderful job bringing out the stark differences between Armaan and Sid in an in-your-face kind of way to Riddhima..
Keep up the good work..

Edited by neet06 - 11 May 2011 at 10:21am

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Mrs.Dravid Senior Member

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
finally she realized!!! serves her right
nice update btw
post d next part soon
n bring sid back

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