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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Loved the next part.
Maan accepted the offer
No ways he could not since his geet was requesting.
Though Geet was happy she had to convince her friends.
Maan had his own problems of finding time.
The way both of them tried to work around was beautiful.
Geet hid the truth from friends and maan got his required time.
I am sure they will rock on the dance floor.
waiting for the next part
Sorry for the late comment.

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
awesome part...and don't worry about the length sweetie...i know there are times when we are short on time...Maan has a big task on hand...to handle GF and his friend Geet---let's see how he pulls it off...
and poor Geet...she's got it harder with Pari and Nupur...they will just rip maan's throat out...good thing Geet has Mayank's support...really liking their friendship...
can't wait for the next one...fun is on it's way :D

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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Hey Swati M again late...sowieee...sowieee...sowieee...sowieee...read last 4 part nw...n very well written...brilliant updates...so maan n geetz fship getting closer day by day...woha dance partner gr8...whoz dat Mr. Kapoor's daughter ??? tell her dunt cum between ma bro n bhabhi...2 biggest bomb Pari n Nupur Shocked hope maaneet will b safe frm diz bomb LOL  Chalo at least Mayank iz with dem...update soon dear n again sowieee...

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Hello all! I am back again, too soon is it? Well, I was guilty for having given you two completely crappy updates and wanted to make up for that through a (hopefully) better and LONGER update, and so here I am!

Rest of my bakwaas at the end. For now, read on!

 P.S-the lyrics are pretty messed up...dunno why they are coming this way...will set them right laterCry

Part 10

Geet rested for a while and then made her way to Nupur's place where the rest of the people had already gathered. Pari introduced all of them to her partner for the act-Sameer. They all started practicing their respective parts. Geet all the while was nervous yet happy thinking she was going to perform it with Maan, while Maan felt in a similar way. They practiced really well respectively, yet there was a fear of messing it up-of not getting the chemistry right….they hadn't practiced together at all!

They had decided to make up for it on the final day by practicing with each other an hour or so before the final performance. While the gang still got an off on account of the practices, Maan hard to work extra-his office work becoming more and more hectic and the practices that went on for more than 3-4 hours on both the days. But, never once did he ever complain, because he knew that Geet would back-out instantly if she found out about it.

They all had really put their heart into the preparation, and their teachers also had full faith in them and hence, had placed their performance at the end as the most awaited performance. Nerves were running really high.

Finally, it was the day of the performance and they were all geared up. Their performance was scheduled for 7 o' clock. They all had decided to reach at 5 to get ready. Maan was supposed to join them at 6, already dressed. Maan was really busy that day. He was trying really hard to finish his work in time. He had reached office earlier that day. Mr. Kapoor's daughter had incidentally been busy for the past two days and hadn't been coming to office. However, today, Mrs Kapoor had sent her to give him an important file which Mr. Kapoor had forgotten at home and was too confidential to be handed over through anyone else. She was in a hurry and made her way to his office hastily. The office was pretty empty since it wasn't yet time for employees to arrive. Mr. Kapoor had gone early because he had to prepare for a very important meeting that day and Maan had reached early to finish his work. Mr. Kapoor's daughter reached office cribbing and went straight to his cabin to give him the file and leave. Maan was also in the cabin regarding some accounts and Mr. Kapoor was once again impressed by his dedication for coming early since he wanted to leave early. Finally, Mr. Kapoor introduced his daughter to Maan and they exchanged pleasantries before Maan left to continue with his work.

Mr. Kapoor then again told his daughter about his diligence and she was thoroughly impressed by the good-looking man, especially after hearing about the amount of work he was handling. She went back totally in awe of the young man.

Evening

It was 6 pm. All seven of them-Mayank-Nupur, Atul-Rids, pari-sameer, and Geet were all decked up for te show. All of them looked looked stunning in their respective dresses. They all decide to go for one final practice. But, Maan was still not there, and that had all of them worried. They tried reaching him, but to no avail-his phone was not reachable. Geet was getting worried-they hadn't practiced together even once, and now he was missing. She was also getting worried for his safety, shooting prayers to Babaji every now and then. Mayank, who knew who her partner was tried to pacify her while the rest were just going on and on about how irresponsible the guy was. (Uff…another negative they found against him! Swati worried now!)

As the clock was ticking away, Geet was getting nervous.

6:55pm

It was now time for their performance. Geet wanted them to let go of her part and go ahead without her, while they all were telling her to go for her part without Maan. Geet was confused, worried and scared. The only reason she thought she could perform in front of so many people was that Maan would be there with her-to calm her, to soothe her frayed nerves and now she wasn't in favour of taking the stage without him. Finally it was time for their performance.

They had decided to depict a story through their performance. Though theirs was a group performance, they were going to do it in pairs. They all took their positions-all the four pairs were to enter from a different entry, so all of them separated to their respective positions, wishing Geet and each other good luck a final time!

Please listen to all the songs to get the feel!

 

The song started:

Music playing in the background, and pari and sameer enter from opposite sides of the stage, oblivious to the other's presence, with the song tanha dil!

Music….

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__qkzfWhi6g

 

aankhon mein sapne liye

ghar se hum chal toh diye

jaane yeh raahe abb le jaayengi kahaan

mitti ki khushbu aaye

palkon pe aansu laaye

palkon pe reh jaayega yaadon ka jahaan

manjil nayi hain

anjaana hai kaarava

chalna akele hai yahaan

(tanha dil, tanha safar

dhunde tujhe phir kyun nazar) - 2

tanha dil...

 

dilkash nazaare dekhe

zhil-mil sitaare dekhe

aankhon mein phir bhi tera chehra hai jawaan

kitni barsaate aayi

kitni saugaate laayi

kaano mein gunje phie bhi teri hi sada

waade kiye the, apana hoga aashiyaan

waado ko jaane hoga kya

(tanha dil, tanha safar

dhunde tujhe phir kyun nazar) - 2

tanha dil...

 

tanha dil...

 

aankhon mein sapne liye

ghar se hum chal toh diye

jaane yeh raahe abb le jaayengi kahaan

mitti ki khushbu aaye

palkon pe aansu laaye

palkon pe reh jaayega yaadon ka jahaan

manjil nayi hain

anjaana hai kaarava

chalna akele hai yahaan

(tanha dil, tanha safar

dhunde tujhe phir kyun nazar) - 2

tanha dil...

 

Towards the end, they encounter each other on their safar and get to know each other, striking a chord and the scene changes.

They exit the stage and now Atul and riddhimma enter with the song O re Piya, depicting the turmoil in their hearts-slowly falling for each other, yet denying their feelings-trying to run away from them, yet failing badly

O re piya….  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9WJMUHV084

O Re Piya Haye-3Udne Laga Kyon Man Baawla Re?Aaya Kahan Se Yeh Hosla Re?O Re Piya Haye -2Tanabana Tanabana Bunti Hawaa Haaye Bunti Hawa?Boondein Bhi To Aaye Nahi Baaz YahanSazish Mein Shaamil Sara Jahan Hai?Har Zarre Zarre Ki Yeh Iltiza HaiO Re Piya?O Re Piya Haye -2?O Re PiyaNi Re ,Re Re Ga?Ga Ga Ma?Ma Ma Pa?Pa Ma Ga Re Sa?Sa Re Re Sa?Ga Ga Re?Ma Ma Ga?Pa Pa Ma?Dha Dha Pa?Ni Ni Sa Sa Pa?Pa Sa Ma Pa Dha Ni Sa Ni?Re Ni Sa Sa Sa.. . . . ..Nazrein Bolen Duniya Bole?Dil Ki Zaban Haaye Dil Ki Zubaan?Ishq Maange Ishq Chahe Koi ToofanChalna Aahiste Ishq Naya Hai?Pehla Yeh Vada Humne Kiya HaiO Re Piya Haaye 2?O Re Piya?Piyaaa...Yehhh PiyaNange Pairo Pe Angaro?Chalti Rahi Haaye Chalti Rahi?Lagta Hai Ke Gairo Mein?Palti Rahi Haaye?Le Chal Wahan Jo?Mulk Tera Hai?Jahil Zamana?Dushman Mera HaiHaayeO Re Piya Haye 5

 

 CONTD. IN THE NEXT POST...TOO LONG FOR ONEOuch

 

 

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As the third song was about to start, nervousness took the better of Geet and she decided to go and get her part removed from the person who was handling the music section. She tried to make her way to the person, but was surrounded by a lot of people backstage, who were tring to calm her and giving her touch-ups (as if she needed any-she looked beautiful anyways!)

Meanwhile, Mayan and Nupur had taken the stage, showing a dream sequence on the song saathiya!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MZWIBBoaXzg

 

Saathiya ... Saathiyamaddham maddham teri ye geeli hansisaathiya ... saathiyasun ke ham ne saari pee li hansi hansti rahe tu hansti rahe hayaa kee laalee khilatee rahezulf ke neeche gardan pe subah-o-shaam milatee rahehansti rahe tu hansti rahe hayaa kee laalee khilatee rahezulf ke neeche gardan pe subah-o-shaam milatee rahesondhee see hansi teree khilatee rahe milatee rahe peelee dhoop pahan ke tuum dekho baag mein math jaanabhanware tum ko sab chhedenge phoolon mein math jaanaamaddham maddham hans de phir sesona sona phir se hans detaazaa gire patte ki tarah sabz lawn par lete hueysaath rang hain bahaaron ke ek adaa mein lapete hueysaawan bhaadon saare tujh semousam mousam hanste rahnaamaddham maddham hanste rahnaasaathiya ... saathiyamaddham maddham teri ye geeli hansisaathiya ... saathiyasun ke ham ne saari pee li hansi kabhee neele aasmaan pe chalo ghoomanein chalein hamkoi abr mil gayaa to zameen pe baras lein hamteri baalee hil gaee hai kabhee shab chamak uthee hai kabhee shaam khil gayee hai tere baalon kee panaah mein is siyaah raath guzareteri kaalee kaalee aankhein koi ujalee baath uthareteree ik hansee ke badale meree ye zameen le le meraa aasmaan le lesaathiya ... saathiyamaddham maddham teri ye geeli hansisaathiya ... saathiyasun ke ham ne saari pee li hansi barf giree ho vaadee meinoon mein lipatee simatee huyeebarf giree ho vaadee mein aur hansee teree goonjeeoon mein lipatee simatee huyee baath kare dhuvaan nikalegaram garam ujlaa dhuvaan naram naram ujalaa dhuvaan

 

 

 

 

Before Geet could make her way out of the crowd, Nupur Mayank's sequence was coming to an end and she knew she would have go on stage to save her college's reputation. She was shaking badly. The song began,                     and she put her foot on stage, only to find another foot matching her step-she looked around to find Maan-lookimg into her eyes, pleading apology and rendering strength-she was lost in those eyes, forgetting everything-her feet moving on their own accord.

Bolna Halke halke'..  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZKENqXoZ0o

(dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor keghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke) - 2sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein loho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halkehonth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2 aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab leik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye taleinkitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halkehonth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2 umarein lagi kehate huve, do labj the ik baat thiwoh ik din sau saal ka, sau saal ki woh raat thikaisa lage jo chup chaap dono, ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaayeinbol bol na halke halke, bol na halke halkehonth se halke halkeo dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor keo ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor kesharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein loho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halkehonth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

 

 

 

While they were in a trance-moving into a rhythm of their own, the audiences were mesmerized by the sight in front of their eyes-setting the stage on fire with their chemistry-making it look as if that how they are-meant to be in each other's arms. A prince looking dashing dressed in black shirt and black jeans with a princess looking heavenly in a white gown which was making her look angelic.

The song changed to Baahon ke darmiyaan, and they were completely lost-two bodies one soul weaving magic-while all looked on spell-bound, fearing looking away, fearing to blink lest they miss this divine pair.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f6gENVGJoSY

 

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe HainBaahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe HainJaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke BadanDhadkan Bani Zubaan Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe HainJaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke BadanDhadkan Bani ZubaanBaahon Ke Darmiyaan  Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye AnkahiKhulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye AnkahiMujhse Keh Rahi Hai Ki Badhne De BekhudiMil Yoon Ki Daud Jaayein Nas Nas Mein Bijliyaan Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe HainJaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke BadanDhadkan Bani ZubaanBaahon Ke Darmiyaan  Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai PasandAasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai PasandUljhi Uljhi Saanson Ki Aawaaz Hai PasandMoti Luta Rahi Hai Saawan Ki Badliyaan Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe HainBaahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe HainJaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke BadanDhadkan Bani ZubaanBaahon Ke Darmiyaan .

 

 

 

They were so lost  that they didn't realize when the song ended'when they stopped dancing, when the auditorium drowned in to thunderous applause'.

 

 

 Part 11- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1678478&TPN=60&#45338027

 

So, guys, that's it!

How was it?

I am sorry, I have two left feet and hence didn't ake any attempt to describe the dance steps, though I think all of you will be able to visualize them swaying on the songs.

I will be away from IF till 24th now!

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   Precap: pari took Geet away from Maan and they spoke for a while.Confused

After that Geet came to maan and said-I am very disappointed in you!Ouch

Geet angry!Shocked



Edited by princess163 - 18 September 2011 at 10:49am

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So Maan did come to the dance show. Precap sounds like some mu coming their waY.

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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 5:29am | IP Logged
hey swati , awesome update  Smile,beautiful song selection esp 'o r piya' n 'bol na halke halke' , u dont worry we can imagine maneet dancing on the songs Wink, waiting for ur reply as u didnt replied to my first comment CryCry
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fabulous update

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