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Got my eyes on you : Abhi Nikki FF COMPLETED (Page 17)

mitzification Goldie

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Next morning , she barged into his cabin even as he was busy with his laptop '

"What are you staring at so intensly in your laptop ''. Is that .. is that a picture of some girl? Is it? Who is it ? I'll go and kill her. Wait , its Shelly. It's  shelly Isn't it ? , she said in a single breath and rushed towards him and peaked at his screen . But what she saw there was her own pictures . She stood there , completely frozen . Abhi looked up at her and touched her hair. Embarrassed , she tried to go away from him, but he quickly got up and stopped her form going away. He walked towards her and backed her up against the wall  ,his gaze was intense and he moved his face close to her as she looked at him caught in his gaze. She was blushing as she stammered

"A Abhi I have to go .My duty '.. "

"Doesn't start till another half an hour, you are early ..." , he interrupted her and came even more closer to her. Nikki got flustered and looked away and said.

"Abhi  I am sorry , I misunderstood you so many times but you were only  nice to me "

Abhi moved back and smiled at her "Its ok nikki your pranks pierced the tough wall I had built around my heart. You pranked me but I never got angry with you. Had it been anyone else  I would have fumed the modi anger but you , you broke the wall and entered my heart."

Nikki looked at him , amazed and delighted  with everything he had said .


Next day Nikki took extra efforts in dressing up ,they were celebrating Christmas in the evening in Sanjeevani ..maybe today was the day they could dance together . She had carefully dressed in her red dress wondering if he would remember to wear black as that was the boys dress code.

But it was a day of disappointments for Nikki as Abhi did not even give her a good look before he ordered her about some files and left for a meeting. The whole day he didn't even call once to check on her , even though she got Ridhhima to call him reminding him about the party. Finished with the work and very angry at Abhi , she wasn't even left with enough enthusiasm to attend the party and left for home. If she was expecting him to magically turn up at her house , she was majorly disappointed as she did not even receive an sms from him . Talk about loving her 'ha! he didn't even miss her. Done with all her work at home ..freshing up, eating dinner and going through her books, she couldn't stop herself from calling him  . Did she expect him to enquire about her mood , the same guy who hadn't bother giving her a look in the morning or apologizing for missing the party ? if she did she was the biggest fool because his only question to her was about his work ' was his work done , could she come in early so that he could go through it once. The beautiful party hall with its red and white balloons flashed in front of her eyes '. And anger rose '.

" '.you are still asking about your files Abhi 'what about the party '..I missed the party because of your work '.."

" this work is important Nikki .. and am badly struck here in this meeting'.Don't tell me nikki u want go out for a party with your friends..

   Not with them.. with you ! She said in an inaudible voice.

 sorry? What did you say ?

.. never mind.. any other order sir? Nikki asked by now totally frustrated.

" Look Nikki , i..."  but before he could continue someone called from behind-

Dr. modi, shall we resume meeting?'


Nikki I got to go '.see you tomorrow'.

Nikki opened her mouth to protest but the line got disconnected from the other end and Nikki went to sleep angry and frustrated.


 When Abhi  came to give duties the next day .Nikki smiled a false smile at him

"Good morning sir" , she said sarcastically and  Abhi looked around at the group of Interns afraid that she would end up doing  something silly but she did nothing like that .

Later in his cabin she stood aloof and with hands crossed in front of her as he went through the files she had completed so painstakingly yesterday'..

" if you are finish with your scrutiny of my work , shall i leave?

 abhi read her anger and smiled to himself , She had done the work perfectly and he was pleased with her . Also he had heard her last night 'about wanting to go to the party with him. He understood her emotions but work came first. He couldn't just  change his attitude towrds work..

 sighing ,a naughty smile on his face ,he got up and rounded the  table to stand in front of her

 Dr. malhotra has anyone told you that anger suits your complexion..

 color startd creeping on her cheeks despite her anger

  why did he have to play with her when she was so angry ? or trying to be especialy now as his proximity shot up her heart beats , she fought hard to stay in control and not melt in front of him.

She stepped back from him ,gave him a sarcastic smile "  dr.modi, as you have rightly said 'work comes first, it's 8:30 already  .. so shall i leave? i hv gt duty to perform.. "

She walked past him and out of his office no longer angry at him ,  ..she was nothing but putty in his hands , one close encounter with him and all her carefully brewed anger had flown out of the window. But she had walked away from him as she didn't want him to know that.


That evening Nikki had a small fight with one of her patients. Abhi scolded Nikki and sided by the patient.

Later she caught up to him in the corridor and confronted him

 "Abhi how can u blame me?" , asked him , her tone hurt and accusatory .

Nikki , what do you expect , I was surprised you were fighting with a patient like that  , I had to take the patients side .

Arman who Was passing by , was shocked on hearing her argue with him.


"Tumhe hamesha main he galat lagti hoon naa Abhi  nikki  asked  him .


Nikki I am the administrator I cannot be biased '.

Nikki was hurt as Abhi instead of being apologetic for talking so rudely to her ,was still so professional and unconcerned about the anguish she was going through. She had fought for the benefit of the patient himself , cldnt abhi see this , shdnt he side with his own staff , shdnt he side with her ? instead of a stranger ? was the stranger more important to him? Hurt at Abhi's total indifference to her , she moved away from him angrily.

Armaan stood frozen at his spot .They were fighting like a couple , on a first name basis . Why  were they fighting as if they were seeing each other ,? he thought to himself. He would have to find out  .


After duty, Nikki still fuming with anger, hurt and frustration walked up to the terrace. Abhi foollowed her in no time.

"What are you doing here Nikki?" , he asked her tenderly

"Why do you care Dr modi , its after duty hrs ? I can do anything I wish." , she said angrily and then began crying. Abhi pulled her close and she willingly went into his arms. As he soothed her back while she tried to stop crying.

"Don't ever shout at me like that Abhi . You have no idea how much it hurts me." , she said against his chest as his hold on her body got more protective in response.

They stood like that for some time. After a while she rose her head and smiled at him

"Chalo Abhi mere ghar chalte hain '." , she said cheekily , waiting for his response. Wsnt she sweet crying one moment and instantly forgiving him in the next moment just like a kid .

" No nikki I have a conference call '." , he said and she found herself majorly disappointed." Ohfo he worked so much" , with him everything was about work ''and wasn't this the reason they had started this long drawn out fight in the first place'.. uff !

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mitzification Goldie

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 4:26am | IP Logged

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Next day once  Nikki got to Sanjeevani , she came to know it was Abhi's day off  . She felt suddenly angry and stormed off straight to his cabin and angrily punched his numbers .


His voice laced with sleep answered but today her heart wont melt '

"Abhi don't u dare, don't ever  dare keep ur day off when im on duty" , she said still furious. Not allowing him to say anything after the sleep laden Hello.

" where u caling from?" , his calm voice asked her . he seemed to have had woken up now.

"Your cabin...No one will catch me here " , she responded and then burst out laughing at her own smartness.

Abhi shook his head at her pertness ,God she drove him crazy. They talked for a while and Nikki reluctantly disconnected after realizing how Abhi had ended up staying late the previous night and had missed out on his sleep .

In the evening Nikki checked her phone and was surprised to see no call or messasge from Abhi "She consoles herself but yet can't help feeling sad

After work she listlessly got out of the hospital but She brightened seeing his black car , slightly hidden from normal view , he got out of the car barking an order "jaldi karo koi dekh lega ." , he tells her and she happily obeys him.
"Lets go to ur place I want to see ur pics where u look like a roly poly kid ," ,she tells him excitedly as she sat down " I wanna see ur albums .."

" no nikki I don't have ne albums ," , he tells and she looks at him surprised ,

"Abhi don't lie '. " and he shakes his head in defeat . ITs impossible to stop her once she sets her mind on anything , well he should have learnt that a long time back.

Both sit in his drawing room as Nikki looks at his albums. Abhi points out to his picture where he is 3 yrs old , hes holding a toy gun , see this gun Nikki I had kept it preserved , I have nicely preserved everything of mine nicely '. But '"

"But ?... abhi u lost it .."

"No not me , mom , she lost it while shifting but never me iam very careful abt my things."

Nikki rolls her eyes at this kadoos guy and mutters sadu but its drowned by the ring of dinner arriving , they go through more  albums ,  the last album is his college '.

"Bas nikki iske baad I stoped posing for pics ' my brother had picked up a fascination for photography so all pics after that are with him , and as it is nowdays '.. no one takes out pics ,,,, u know facebook n all"

Nikki smiles and is abt to close the album in her hand when she notices another bright pic at the end of the album , for a second her blood freezes 'what if '.. , then she opens the page and is overwhelmed to see her pic from armaans roka there , she had the exact pic and many others at home in her album ' abhi gives her a smile '. I had taken the photographers number and got the pic from him , Nikki gives him a grateful smile , comforted and delighted by this piece of news .

"Lets have dinner " , she tells him and he agrees ,

After dinner nikki insisted she wanted to watch a movie and after a fight a reluctantly agreed to a rom com , halfway  through the movie Abhi was shocked to see Nikki sobbing .

 Abhi gulped , what was he supposed to do  ?loving her was one thing, but consoling her for this stupid movie was a tough task , he tried to give it a shot

"'nikki don't cry!,  its just a movie ' "

"tum ladke bhe naa ' " she shouts aat him '" totally heartless "


He was shocked at her angry retort '. ooops wrong answer .. better he kept quiet and watch the movie ..trying to stop her crying wasn't such a bright idea/somewhere in the movie abhi got too tired and leaving her engrossed in the movie , went to his room ,

 he got up in the morning and realised he had fallen asleep when he had lain down to rest last night, chalo at least he had sucessfuly escaped that movie. He needed to check out how Nikki was doing and walked out only to she her sleeping peacefully on the couch.

He got ready and made coffee and took it to the couch and kept her cup on the table and woke her up.

"Nikki get up ' here's coffee for you , I need to leave now ''."

Nikki sat with the coffee mug in her hand sighing happily seeing him leave, a small contended smile on her face.


In the hospital muskaan was furious and restless .

"Kya hua muski yaar?" , Nikki asks her .

"Wo sadu macchar has given me night duties "

nikki feels bad  and wrings her hands absent mindedly, she looks at ridzy pleading  for some help '

 ridzy shruggs "muski u urself come late for duty and blame him .. now come on get to work ."

Frustrated at her friends , Nikki goes to his cabin .. Abhi is on phone ,but he still motions her to close the door .else all interns will come to know she hits him shyly ' She obeys and sits down silently . Once he is done with the call , Abhi comes to her and stands beside her, observing her sad face "koi pareshani hai Nikki ?" , he asks tenderly and Nikki looks up at him.

"Haan interns were abusing u '. And I don't like it one bit . Abhi when can we tell them '. I really can't take all this mahabharat between them and you anymore. Lets tell them Abhi."
" No Nikki Not before ur exams 'dheere dheere unhe pata lagne do .."

"But ..."

"No Nikki . I am used to that abuse by now . And if it means you being so concerned for me and so hurt for me , I really don't mind it " , he said honestly and Nikki stood up from her chair and rushed into his arms .


Edited by mitzification - 02 November 2012 at 4:54am

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mitzification Goldie

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As weeks went by , Abhi and Nikki came even more closer to each other .Abhi had started to trust her more and more and started to even share his problems with her a little bit . Nikki was grateful for this change. The trust he placed in her to open up like that , being a closed person who mostly kept to himself he was now becoming comfortable showing his vunerable side to her , she was delighted with this all , because this meant that their relationship was not just based on love now , but it was now both love and trust they had in each other .

One evening Abhi sends her a pager , asking her to come to his cabin . When she reached there , she sees him a little distressed , his hand on his head , staring blankly into the laptop screen.

"Abhi , are you alright ?" ,  she rushed to him worried .

He looks at her and she finds that its more confusion and less worry .

"What happened Abhi ? Is something bothering you ?"

He makes her sit down on his chair and leans against the table , all the while holding on to her hand .

"yes there is a problem . But I am not sure if you will understand ."

"Why ?"

"Because you are too young ..."

"Abhi , please . I am not too young . Tell me , what's bothering you ?"

"I have just recieved an offer from my previous employer ." , he says and abruptly lets go of her hand .Nikki looks up too , surprised herself .

"Offer ?"

"Yes and its a damn good offer too .", he stopped and caught both of her hands again.

"Do you want to take it up Abhi ?" , she asked gingerly , worried that he might end up telling her something she that she did not want to hear and yet knowing that it was her responsibility to give him the strenth to come up with the right decisions even if that meant not being able to see him in Sanjeevani anymore.

"I am not sure Nikki and that's what is so confusing . I mean this was always my dream job and now I have a chance to have it. The pay is better , so many facilities , I really don't know what I should be doing ."

Nikki presses his hands with her own and looks up at him tenderly .

"Abhi , just listen to your heart when your mind doesn't seem to guide you in the right direction. Because your heart can never go wrong."

Abhi smiled at her . "My heart says that I need to be where my love is , where you are . "

"No Abhi , that's just the romance in you speaking . I shouldn't be the only reason that is holding you back from better career prospects . "

"Nikki  , you are right . Its not just you . Its Sanjeevani too. I think I don't want to move out of Sanjeevani and that is the reason I am so confused . I don't want to leave . At least not before I deliver everything that I had promised I would ."

Nikki saw tears well up in her eyes as she felt proud of the strength of his character . She was in love with such an amazing man.

"Thanks Nikki " , he said and bent down to kiss her gently . He saw a new side to Nikki and it filled him up with even more love for her .

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wow123 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Hi mitzi,

All three updates are awesome and amazing. I have read AN ff after long time.
All AN fans are busy in their life and hardly come here i guess.
Even i left my AN ff as no one appeared there to comment.
But I m happy you have completed your FF.


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mitzification Goldie

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
yes dear just one part left  
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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
hi Mitzi,  coming back to this site after almost a year and imagine my surprise that a few writers are still continuing abhi-nikki FFs. i thought ppl would stop one the show is off air.
have a lot to catching up to do on this FF. 

P.S. - would appreciate if you could suggest some good abhi-Nikki FFs to read after i'm done with this one.

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mitzification Goldie

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It was Armaan and Riddhima's engagement and Nikki was happily involved in the proceedings when Abhi approached her carefully avoiding getting noticed by any of her friends . He asked her to meet him outside immediately , slightly hassled yet dying to meet him  , Nikki went to Riddhima and requested her to somehow delay dance sequence as Abhi apparently had some urgent work with her.

Nikki was slightly frustrated as she had to be away from her friends but she didn't want to upset abhi also and went up to the balcony . Her heart ached dully as he came in view , moments with him were so precious and few , how she wished she could always be with him . It was a beautiful feeling to be with him and she wanted more of it . She was lost in these thoughts when she realised Abhi was handing out something to her ………… she could not believe her eyes as the diamond sparkled in the moonlight . It was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen in her life.All she wanted was to jump in his arms and stay there for the rest of the night but duty to her friends was calling … just trust Abhi to give her a ring in the most rushed time when she didn't have the time to cherish the moment. She hurriedly slipped the ring and rang back to be with her friends.

Later as Abhi dropped her to her house , they walked up to her door hand in hand she invited him in………… 

Abhi woke up with a jerk in her bed , he was  going to be late for hospital ….. he was agitated …… his agitation woke Nikki up

He jumped out of bed and groaned  " Im getting late …. "

Nikki got up and tried to comprehend the situation

 "Nikki give me a towel … "

 Nikki rushed to her cupboard and hands him a towel

" pink towel nikkki ….? "

Nikki is irritated " Leave some of your clothes here then … " she replied proptly , their eyes met for the briefest moments , but there was no time for embarrassment...  Abhi moved to go for his shower .

"ok now u shower and ill make you some breakfast ..

"no nikki I will get late"

 "Abhi Please 5 minute ki to baat hai  ..

"nahi .. nikki …"

Exhasperated at his stubbernous but not the one to give up Nikki replied

ok take it wid u …fine ?


Nikki reached the hospital and was confronted by armaan and the gang , she knew her secret was exposed or would be soon.

" I saw u leave wid dr modi .. "

" Haan … nahi Armaan who …."

" what is it Nikki ….  Crush? infatuation …. "

"Haan … who "

"Haan ?  but you hated him …..shubankar ki wedding se dekh raha hoon  , wahi se shuru hua tha naa?"

Ridzi shouts out  " No  no after panchgani …?" and then bites her tongue

The gang turned to her "ridzi .. u knew …?"

Muskan : kya pata hai ..? what is going on between you people

Ar :  yes Niki answer why did you go away so early after our eng , your seen wid that abhi modi all the time , nikki gets nervous

rdz : its her choice guys

Nikki : yes abhi and I ..

"abhi' everyone shouts nikki fidgets with her ring

Ring …..? and ruckus breakes again in the hospital and everyone starts the questioning again.



 She goes to abhis cabi agitated , he was working totally unaware of  nikki anguish .. abhi tum kahan they …she cried angry to see him so unaffected by what she had gone through

Confused , main to yahin tha nikki , why? ,  his concern melted her frustration

Kuch nahi they came to know about us , she said toning down voice , her frustration almost gone  abhi smiled a sly smile

Why are you smiling  ?

Do you know what this means ,,,, Abhi asked looking into her eyes smiling a sly smile

She nodded a no looking back into his eyes

This means they cant pull u away from in front of me now ….

She broke into a smile at his words and went closer to him , but he moved away …

Nikki ..actualy im going away to delhi for 3 days ..

3 days abhi .. but why ,she cried disappointed ,  ill miss you abhi ,

Abhi smiles at her sweetness ..goes near her .. you need sumthing from there Nikki

She hugs him and nods a no

Oh thank god nikki ur pratical enough …mujhe laga you will ask for some silly stuff , but you aremature enuf to  know you can get everything over here in Mumbai.



In her house three days later nikki remembered that scene and sighed with him wont be about balloons and gifts , no cards and no stuff toys . it would be lot of practicality and lot of love too ..and out of the blue maybe some flowers , a gift

The ringing of her doorbell roused her out of her thoughts , she rushed to open it and was surprised to see Abhi standing in the door way slightly wet in the rain. She hugged him and together they came and sat on the sofa.

But Abhi seemed slightly agitated , Nikki looked at him questioning and he

" nikki there is a new development ..delhi is coming up with asias largest hospital …and they r offering me a position 30 % increase in salary ..

Nikki was surpised and her mouth hung open .. where was this coming from

"It's a good deal ..perks..they are asking me to join immediately."

Good deal ?...what about her ….where did she figure in all this  ? he had not asked her anything ?  she was a fool to fall for him…..Aarmaan had warned her but he had warned her late … ofcourse Mr modi , why wldnt he want to grow …she got teary thinking this but Abhi continued unaware

 "But maine unhe bol diay ..not for 3 months …. "

Nikki opened her eyes .. confused stoping her tears

"I want your internship to get over and we can go together …. Whats the point I go there alone and you come later …..what do you say ….." he added the last words a little unsure   

She hugged him in response . She was such a fool to doubt him and think of all such nonsense and he was such a sweetheart he wanted them to go together and had said so point blank to his seniors

She was crying but he wldnt even know why ..he wldnt understand a woman's heart but still he was the best ..

He ranted on,unaware of all the emotional rollercoaster Nikki had gone through since his entry " lekin ek baat hai nikki I hate all the drama cant we have a small wedding (her heart stilled as she heard this and then soared and she laughed inside ) .. getting no response from her he tries to convince more

" I m sure you will like it in delhi ..people say girl die for designer clothes there …"

She shut up his ranting by sealing his lips with a kiss.

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Awww such a cutielicious part... Embarrassed

Niceee...Big smileBig smile

My fav parts... 

Nikki is irritated " Leave some of your clothes here then ' LOL" she replied proptly , their eyes met for the briefest moments Embarrassed, but there was no time for embarrassment...TongueLOL 

mujhe laga you will ask for some silly stuff , but you aremature enuf to know you can get everything over here in Mumbai SmileSmile

The best...

She was crying but he wldnt even know why ..he wldnt understand a woman's heart but still he was the best .. Day Dreaming


After a long time I enjoyed reading, stuff about AN... Thumbs Up

 Thanks so much for writing.,Mitzi.. :) 

Edited by ANrucha - 12 January 2013 at 5:35am

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