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I can feel ur heartbeat-ArSh mini FF pt5 page 25 (Page 23)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
edited page 19 Big smile

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Just caught up with ur FF...
I love the FF..Pls do PM me the next part whenever u update k...
Dying to read further..:)

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jenny_KaShian

Just caught up with ur FF...
I love the FF..Pls do PM me the next part whenever u update k...
Dying to read further..:)
hey m glad u liked it... will add u to the pm list Smile
working on the next part... might update tonight or tuesday morning Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lil_desi_goddes

loved the update, and omg, i hate Alisha, she is soo horrible, sticking to Armaan like that!
lol i knw...i hate her too... dont worry everything will be ok soon Embarrassed
Originally posted by illa8

nice =) 
thanks Smile
Originally posted by fri42911

fantastic update. please continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
thanks Smile
Originally posted by AR-kash

nice update

loved it 
thanks Smile
Originally posted by priyanki

awesome part...

loved it...
thnx 4 d pm..
thanks Smile
Originally posted by meow23

gr88 update manju..
luvd d flashbak n d minute details which u mentioned.. ryte frm d way armaan waited 4 shilpa.. d bond btwn d frnds n d bro-sis relationship.. wonderng y did alisha had 2 mke an appearance nw.. jus spoil stuff..
cmng bak 2 d present wht is gng 2 do in d flight...
 
thnx 4 d pm
m glad u liked the part... thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by HoneyLimeUsha

alisha is so annoying!
such a pest!
feel bad for shilpa!
continue soon!
alisha...i knw LOL dont worry she will be served right soon Tongue
Originally posted by aish_loves_KaSh

nice update...
thanks Smile
Originally posted by rising_angel

Nice ff..continue soon 
thanks Embarrassed



Edited by m4manju - 29 May 2011 at 11:51am
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sammy4u

loved the part a lot
and hated that alisha a lot
thanks...Embarrassed 
Originally posted by sacred shrine

hey manjzi...i am loving the arsh romance so much..but u have to devote more words and expressions to make them more real...and the lines shd be more sttronger..as in their dialogues need more depth...becz u r using such a stronh title...otherwise its superb...
hey sabz... i knw u r always there to guide me...wil try to improve in the emotional lines... thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii
awesome ss
loving it
loved ArSh
cant wait 2 read more
what broke ArSh
con soon
plz do add me u ur pm list
thanksss
will add u ...thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by vidu87

superbbb
thanks Smile
Originally posted by amaniM

good one  yaar! but make the update longer. keep up the good work and waiting for the next part 

will try long parts amani...thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by dimpledsmile

hey,,
nice part..
continue soon..
 n thanx 4 da PM!!!
thanksEmbarrassed
Originally posted by Klutszy_KaShian

Omg!!


That Alisha is a HUGE PISS OFFF!! i loe shilpa's trust though! Really u r writing beautifully !!!
alisha i knw right LOL aww thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by luv_kash

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plzzz add me to your pm list
do cont soon
will add u...thanks Smile


Edited by m4manju - 29 May 2011 at 11:52am
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaNaLoVeKaSh

nice partSmile
thanks Smile
 
Originally posted by zARqaa_X

awesome part!
i dont like alisha already :( i hope she doesnt break up ARSH
continue soon x
thanks Smile arsh are made to be here together dont worry Embarrassed
Originally posted by pinderdd

amazing, loved it so far, keep it up and cann you plz pmBig smile
wil pm u surely...thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

Awesome update
loved it loadz
ughh hated Alisha sooo much
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4  da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
aww thanks for the comment Embarrassed
Originally posted by swetiepie_angel

majnnnuuu...HugHugLOL

huh...just now i found ur FF!!! its so awesome!!!
u write so welll!!! :D :D
do write more...n change ur mini FF 2 very big FF!!LOL
lukin fwd to more ArSh moments!!

n yeah do pm me!! :D :D

and..i miss talkin with ya! its been so long!!
laylaaa Hug lol...hw r u? i knw its been long time... yup i just started this fic... and its meant to be mini... LOLaww thanks for the comment dear...loves Embarrassed

Originally posted by SlickSamosa

I hate Alisha alreadyyy! Huge pain in the ***! Ugh! I guess you were right about me hating her LOL 
Funny thing is I had a similar situation with my fiance a couple years back. But I'm not quiet like Shilpa here, haha. I told her off  and she looked so horrified when I did. Tongue This part reminded me of that so I've been laughing since I read it lol. And I really needed that laugh after this past week. Overall awesome part!

Continue soon & thanks for the PM!
omg its nice to knw what i wrote is close to reality Embarrassed and abt ur experience, i think u did right thing LOL shilpa just didn't got chance maybe...or more convincing explanation will cum soon...thanks for the comment dear Embarrassed
Originally posted by _Afrin_

nice part!!!!!!!!!!!
I just feel like slapping Aisha...Angry
cont soon...
lol alisha will be gone soon... thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by aisha_ranbir8

hey nice part... hated alisha ...too much chipko ...anywaz i hope everything goes fine in arsh relationship... anywaz pls continue soon ... n thanks for pm...take care...love aish...
thanks for the comment... everything will be fine soon Smile
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashifiedkash

superbbb
thanksEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by glyn_dva

i want more..:(:(:(...


awsaome piece...
thnx a mill 4d pm...:*:*:*
continue soon...:):):)
thanks...will try Embarrassed
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

yeh alisha na...

kabab mein haddi...

thnx fr the pm...

thanks for the commentEmbarrassed
Originally posted by thithutop14

awsm part ...
argh i hate tht alisha...
 
uss alisha ki bachi ka band bajane ka maan kar hai...
u plz update fast...im w8in to noe wats next...
 
thnx fr d pm!
 
love
komal
wil try to update asap...thanks Smile
Originally posted by anamika2010

nice ud...loved it totally...
 
punam
thanks poonam Embarrassed
Originally posted by aish_loves_KaSh

update soon!
wil do Smile
Originally posted by ilyasesha

awesssmmm...::P
thanks Embarrassed
Originally posted by KaShforever06

Wonderful part.. please update the next part soon.. 
thanks...updating nw Embarrassed


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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rapunzzel

nice ff
continue soon

thanks Smile
Originally posted by akshad

loved it
add me in ur buddy list
thanks...will add uSmile
Originally posted by ammy_amna

hey awesome ff plz continue soon and plz pm me the next parts thankx Smile
thanks...will add uSmile

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