Originally posted by: Jenny_KaShianJust caught up with ur FF...
I love the FF..Pls do PM me the next part whenever u update k...
Dying to read further..:)
Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddesloved the update, and omg, i hate Alisha, she is soo horrible, sticking to Armaan like that!
Originally posted by: illa8nice =)
Originally posted by: AR-kashnice update
loved it
Originally posted by: priyankiawesome part...
loved it...
thnx 4 d pm..
Originally posted by: meow23gr88 update manju..
luvd d flashbak n d minute details which u mentioned.. ryte frm d way armaan waited 4 shilpa.. d bond btwn d frnds n d bro-sis relationship.. wonderng y did alisha had 2 mke an appearance nw.. jus spoil stuff..cmng bak 2 d present wht is gng 2 do in d flight...thnx 4 d pm
Originally posted by: HoneyLimeUshaalisha is so annoying!
such a pest!feel bad for shilpa!continue soon!
Originally posted by: aish_loves_KaShnice update...
Originally posted by: rising_angelNice ff..continue soon
Originally posted by: sacred shrinehey manjzi...i am loving the arsh romance so much..but u have to devote more words and expressions to make them more real...and the lines shd be more sttronger..as in their dialogues need more depth...becz u r using such a stronh title...otherwise its superb...
Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fanhiii
awesome ssloving itloved ArShcant wait 2 read morewhat broke ArShcon soonplz do add me u ur pm listthanksss
Originally posted by: vidu87superbbb
Originally posted by: amaniMgood one yaar! but make the update longer. keep up the good work and waiting for the next part
Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShianOmg!!
That Alisha is a HUGE PISS OFFF!! i loe shilpa's trust though! Really u r writing beautifully !!!
Originally posted by: MaNaLoVeKaShnice part😊
Originally posted by: zARqaa_Xawesome part!i dont like alisha already :( i hope she doesnt break up ARSHcontinue soon x
Originally posted by: pinderddamazing, loved it so far, keep it up and cann you plz pm😃
Originally posted by: kashndsel4evaAwesome updateloved it loadzughh hated Alisha sooo muchcant wait 4 da next partcon soonthanks 4 da pmMuahhhXxx
Originally posted by: swetiepie_angelmajnnnuuu...🤗🤗😆
huh...just now i found ur FF!!! its so awesome!!!u write so welll!!! :D :Ddo write more...n change ur mini FF 2 very big FF!!😆lukin fwd to more ArSh moments!!n yeah do pm me!! :D :Dand..i miss talkin with ya! its been so long!!
Originally posted by: SlickSamosaI hate Alisha alreadyyy! Huge pain in the ***! Ugh! I guess you were right about me hating her 😆
Funny thing is I had a similar situation with my fiance a couple years back. But I'm not quiet like Shilpa here, haha. I told her off and she looked so horrified when I did. 😛 This part reminded me of that so I've been laughing since I read it lol. And I really needed that laugh after this past week. Overall awesome part!Continue soon & thanks for the PM!
Originally posted by: _Afrin_nice part!!!!!!!!!!!
I just feel like slapping Aisha...😡
cont soon...
Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8hey nice part... hated alisha ...too much chipko ...anywaz i hope everything goes fine in arsh relationship... anywaz pls continue soon ... n thanks for pm...take care...love aish...
Originally posted by: kashifiedkashsuperbbb
Originally posted by: glyn_dvai want more..:(:(:(...
awsaome piece...thnx a mill 4d pm...:*:*:*continue soon...:):):)
Originally posted by: thithutop14awsm part ...
argh i hate tht alisha...uss alisha ki bachi ka band bajane ka maan kar hai...u plz update fast...im w8in to noe wats next...thnx fr d pm!lovekomal
Originally posted by: aish_loves_KaShupdate soon!
Originally posted by: ilyaseshaawesssmmm...::P
Originally posted by: KaShforever06Wonderful part.. please update the next part soon..
Originally posted by: Rapunzzelnice ff
continue soon
Originally posted by: ammy_amnahey awesome ff plz continue soon and plz pm me the next parts thankx 😊
Originally posted by: KaShBaarish..xx😆Reserved Will be first to comment now
-edited-Sorry it took soo long for me to UNres the post .. But don't think I forgot 😆 Aww im glad you're showing flashbacks .. because currently ArSh are not together but in flashbacks we'll get such romantic moments 😛 and im soo darn curious to know why they aren't together but all im sure about is that I hate Alisha 🤣 ya ya ill imagine her as Mogambo 🤣Awweeh ArSh in college ☺️ Something besides doctors 😆 Wow I can imagine Armaan blabbering to himself in a parking lot .. 😆Eww Alisha totally ruined the moment for me ..'Just then someone came from behind and a pair of hands closed his eyes.' (im smiling cuz I think its Shilpa 😃) 'A minute passed like that but he couldn't recognize the person.' 😡 The description you used for her wasn't very pleasing 😆 Nice way to shape your villain .. dark shaded lipstick too.. this isn't Mogambo anymore 🤣What the heck? She's a model but she don't sound pretty 🤢 Awww I lovee what Shilpa was wearing .. I can totally imagine it in my head 😛 Oye only a side hug .. im sure if Alisha wasn't there, they would be lost in a long passionate hug 🤪 Hmm you should add in the next chapter why Rahul hates Alisha .. though im sure its obvious 😕'Shilpa knew what he was feeling at that moment but she assured him through her eyes to go on. This was the beauty of their relationship. No words needed. They understood each other that well.' thats why their hearts beat as one ☺️ Aww I love Amit and Shilpa's bonding .. should show some of Sapna bonding with her too
Hayee their kiss is soo enchanting 😍 was this their first kiss kya? and I lovee how you wrote that part aswelUggh now Alisha is making Shilpa jealous 😡 Haww and now she's here to watch the movie with them .. she's totally ruining things .. and the way you ended this post was scary 😆 ..Hmm ya know this happens alot where a boyfriend and girlfriend have problems because a friend is interfering in their relationship but Alisha is definetly doing this unintentionally 😡overall I loved this update jaan .. even though we had to tolerate Alisha 😆😆
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