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manjiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sacred shrine
Oi kamini...thursday taak mijhe saare updates chahiye...vaaarnaaa😉

will do it till last thursday of this month😉... pakka 😆

Originally posted by: neha-rockss
manju🤗
its such a cute cute part😳😳😳
stip underestamatng urself😡
d part was very cutely romantic👏
i luvd d arsh romance in it😉
nd was dis big😕
hahahaa nd ananya pov is correct ,,as a mother
hope se understands shona😳
good job manju...update soon😃
nd thanx 4 d pm😃

aww thanks neha... she will understand shona soon 😳

Originally posted by: krazy4kash
hey

nice part

that romantic scene was sooo cute...loved it

update soon
thx 4 d pm
luv
kj

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal_u
hey
just started reading your ff..
the concepts really nice and do continue soon!!!
would love to see a lot more of arsh!!!
thanx for the pm!!

thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Very nicely written...

Awesome it was !!!

Don't say that you suck at writing as it was superbly romantic and totally adorable...

Lmaaoo...Armaaan forgot their first confession anniversary and she gives him a tough time...

and now who is Alisha?? don't leave at a cliffhanger rey ...

waiting for next one...

diii thanks for the sweet comment...😳...alisha will enter in next part 😛 will update soon...

Originally posted by: zara-20k
Awe...sum uptd&
Love scene was so cute

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: dashingtusha13
awesome part!
luved it!
it was too cute!
i wonder who alisha is...
continue soon!

thanks 😳

Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago

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manjiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Laila.N
Completely loved it ! :))
Sweet part

Please do continue soon. Can't wait to find more about their relationship.

aww thanks...will continue soon😳

Originally posted by: sammy4u
great part yaar
that arsh moment was so cute

thnaks sammy 😳

Originally posted by: AR-kash
awesome part
loved it
more suspense who is alisha now
can't wait for the next part
cont soon

thanks 😳alisha will enter soon 😛 ...

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X
great part!
their flashbak was soo cute!
i wonder wot tht alisha girl did...
continue soon x

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: preet09
Wow!!! Beautiful part...

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: SlickSamosa
Such a cute scene! Loved it! I'm wondering what this Alisha did now... Darn her for separating ArSh! 😡

And now I feel like going and listening to 'Chalte Chalte' 😆 Haven't heard it in sooo long.

Thanks for the PM! 😊

lol u gonna hate alisha so much...and yeah chalte chalte is my personal fav too...thanks for the comment 😳

Originally posted by: Crazy4KaSh
awww it was very sweet the scene between ArSh ☺️
very nice part 👍🏼

thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
Awesome update
loved it loadzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

thank u 😳

Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago

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manjiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyanki
nice part...
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: cute-aish
nice update
Continue soon

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: fri42911
awesome part. loved ARSH moments.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
superb update!

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
that was really amazing...
loved hw armaan manaofy her..
alisha...nw who is she...
thnx for the pm...

aww thanks anu 😳

Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian
Heyaa Manju!!

That was sweet, n u do not suck at riting romance! It is cute!!

thanks jinzi for the sweet words 😳

Originally posted by: KaShforever06
Beautiful Part.. I Hope ArSh get together soon.. I can't wait to see their romance..

thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: MaNaLoVeKaSh

👏PARTS👏
😃THANX FOR PM😃
😛CONTINUE SOON😛

thank u mona😳

Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago

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manjiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: amaniM
do you know how a drug addict feels when they don't get their daily fix. I do! so hurry up and give me my fix. update soon. stop worrying and keep writing

aww thanks so much amani😳 coming this comment from such an amazing writer urself means alot to me 😳

Originally posted by: _Afrin_
beautiful part!!!!!!!!!!loved it...
but I didnt find it long ha...may be 4 pgs with double space...😛
so all of the main characters of this story are in the airport...our ArSh and the culprit...
now eagerly waiting for the next part...
cont super soon with a long part...
thanx for the pm...

thanks 😳 lol i tried writing a long part re 😆 and no "culprit" alisha is not there at airport ...u will knw soon 😛

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8
hey the part waz beautiful... the flashback i totally loved it... waz cute... arsh moments were so lovely... anywaz pls continue soon ...n thanks for pm...take care...love aish

thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: sweet_shilpa
nice update...add me to your pm list

thanks 😳 will add u 😊

Originally posted by: MaNaLoVeKaSh
continue soon😊

will try 😊

Originally posted by: anamika2010
actually shilpa looks so beautiful in her anger face..."how to win over anger of his angel"...loved this sentence so much...and liked their romantic parts...plz write more romantic parts of "arsh"..
punam

aww thanks punam... 😳 will write soon 😊

Originally posted by: ilyasesha
awemmm😊

thanks 😳

Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago

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saraaa.

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Posted: 12 years ago

HUGEEE RES! 😳

This is gonna be a LONG post😈 .. Just finished part 1 .. will come back to edit once I finish reading part 2 & 3 😛

-edited-

OMGG merii Vampy🤣 im soo happy you've started to write FF's 😳 You write beautifully and I hope you write many more like these, of course on KaSh❤️ The way you've started it all out, really brought lots of suspense! And I love suspense😆😆 I must say, you're quite creative with such stories .. would have never thought that she would be raising Sapna's child😉 Whenever you mention about how their heartbeats beat at once (b/c you say that in part 1 & 2) 😍 Really shows how bonded they are despite being separated for years!! Gossh this really feels like ArSh .. heck I could totally see KSG and SA playing each part.. 😊 I really liked how you showed Shilpa's place in Armaan's life .. within his family and all .. Oyee hoyee part 3 was ☺️ Youu have no idea how crazy I went reading your part 3 .. especially since its on KaSh im in like fairy tale land ... Perhaps the best part YET! Ahaha Shilpa and her 'fake' anger .. she was always bad at that as Riddhima 🤣 Ya know, being 'angry' at Armaan .. not that I blame her 😳😍 Oyee hoyee .. 😉 The part where Armaan mentions about their first kiss .. that was soo freakinn adorable! PERFECT song choice .. the chalte chalte onee .. signifies their current situation and I really like that songg ..

Ohh great .. now we've got Alisha 😡 Who the heck is she? We are getting an introduction of her in the next part right??

Yaa so this wasn't really a long post, was it? 🤣 If I hadn't read all 3 parts at once, this would have been longer 🤣 I was kinda in a hurry 😕 Anyways lovee yaa Manjuu .. x Im suree im not the only one liking this right now

Edited by KaShBaarish..xx - 12 years ago

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komal samdariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

wich idiot said u sucked in writting romantic stuffs...

infct u rocked it janemaan...!!

wow i so loved the manaofyinf part...

i jus hope all their misundrstndings gets over n they live a happy life...

n hu d hell is aalisha yaar...plz update soon...

i jus am too eager to noe wats next...

n thnx fr d pm!

love

komal

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey awesome startingg!!

lovelyy...r4ealllyyy lovedd it a lott...

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manjiri

@m4manju

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShBaarish..xx
HUGEEE RES! 😳

This is gonna be a LONG post😈 .. Just finished part 1 .. will come back to edit once I finish reading part 2 & 3 😛

-edited-

OMGG merii Vampy🤣 im soo happy you've started to write FF's 😳 You write beautifully and I hope you write many more like these, of course on KaSh❤️ The way you've started it all out, really brought lots of suspense! And I love suspense😆😆 I must say, you're quite creative with such stories .. would have never thought that she would be raising Sapna's child😉 Whenever you mention about how their heartbeats beat at once (b/c you say that in part 1 & 2) 😍 Really shows how bonded they are despite being separated for years!! Gossh this really feels like ArSh .. heck I could totally see KSG and SA playing each part.. 😊 I really liked how you showed Shilpa's place in Armaan's life .. within his family and all .. Oyee hoyee part 3 was ☺️ Youu have no idea how crazy I went reading your part 3 .. especially since its on KaSh im in like fairy tale land ... Perhaps the best part YET! Ahaha Shilpa and her 'fake' anger .. she was always bad at that as Riddhima 🤣 Ya know, being 'angry' at Armaan .. not that I blame her 😳😍 Oyee hoyee .. 😉 The part where Armaan mentions about their first kiss .. that was soo freakinn adorable! PERFECT song choice .. the chalte chalte onee .. signifies their current situation and I really like that songg ..

Ohh great .. now we've got Alisha 😡 Who the heck is she? We are getting an introduction of her in the next part right??

Yaa so this wasn't really a long post, was it? 🤣 If I hadn't read all 3 parts at once, this would have been longer 🤣 I was kinda in a hurry 😕 Anyways lovee yaa Manjuu .. x Im suree im not the only one liking this right now

OMG! this was what i cld sy reading ur comment Sara...i LOVED reading it 😳 thanks dear...

m glad u liked arsh here 😳 and alisha seems to be quite popular already 😆

anyways yeah this wasn't the long post... longest maybe 🤣 looking forward to ur long comments in next parts too shaitaan 😛

Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago

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manjiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: thithutop14
wich idiot said u sucked in writting romantic stuffs...
infct u rocked it janemaan...!!

wow i so loved the manaofyinf part...
i jus hope all their misundrstndings gets over n they live a happy life...

n hu d hell is aalisha yaar...plz update soon...
i jus am too eager to noe wats next...

n thnx fr d pm!

love
komal

aww thank u so much for the sweet words 😳... alisha is entering in next part... 😃

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manjiri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArShSaJan
hey awesome startingg!!
lovelyy...r4ealllyyy lovedd it a lott...

thanks a lot dear 😳

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