I can feel ur heartbeat-ArSh mini FF pt5 page 25 - Page 14

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sacred shrine


Oi kamini...thursday taak mijhe saare updates chahiye...vaaarnaaa๐Ÿ˜‰

will do it till last thursday of this month๐Ÿ˜‰... pakka ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by neha-rockss


  manju๐Ÿค—
its such a cute cute part๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
stip underestamatng urself๐Ÿ˜ก
d part was very cutely romantic๐Ÿ‘
i luvd d arsh romance in it๐Ÿ˜‰
nd was dis big๐Ÿ˜•
hahahaa nd ananya pov is correct ,,as a mother
hope se understands shona๐Ÿ˜ณ
good job manju...update soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
nd thanx 4 d pm๐Ÿ˜ƒ
aww thanks neha... she will understand shona soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Originally posted by krazy4kash


hey 


nice part

that romantic scene was sooo cute...loved it 


update soon
thx 4 d pm
luv
kj
thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by mayur_eternal_u


hey 
just started reading your ff..
the concepts really nice and do continue soon!!!
would love to see a lot more of arsh!!!
thanx for the pm!!
thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Originally posted by -Manita-


Very nicely written...

Awesome it was !!!

Don't say that you suck at writing as it was superbly romantic and totally adorable...

Lmaaoo...Armaaan forgot their first confession anniversary and she gives him a tough time...

and now who is Alisha?? don't leave at a cliffhanger rey ...

waiting for next one...
diii thanks for the sweet comment...๐Ÿ˜ณ...alisha will enter in next part ๐Ÿ˜› will update soon...


Originally posted by zara-20k


Awe...sum uptd&
Love scene was so cute
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Originally posted by dashingtusha13


awesome part!
luved it!
it was too cute!
i wonder who alisha is...
continue soon!
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ 
Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Laila.N


Completely loved it ! :))
Sweet part

Please do continue soon. Can't wait to find more about their relationship.
aww thanks...will continue soon๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by sammy4u


great part yaar
that arsh moment was so cute 
thnaks sammy ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by AR-kash


awesome part

loved it
more suspense who is alisha now
can't wait for the next part
cont soon
 
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณalisha will enter soon ๐Ÿ˜› ...

Originally posted by zARqaa_X


great part!
their flashbak was soo cute!
i wonder wot tht alisha girl did...
continue soon x
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by preet09


Wow!!! Beautiful part...
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by SlickSamosa


Such a cute scene! Loved it! I'm wondering what this Alisha did now... Darn her for separating ArSh! ๐Ÿ˜ก

And now I feel like going and listening to 'Chalte Chalte' ๐Ÿ˜† Haven't heard it in sooo long.

Thanks for the PM! ๐Ÿ˜Š
lol u gonna hate alisha so much...and yeah chalte chalte is my personal fav too...thanks for the comment ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Originally posted by Crazy4KaSh


awww it was very sweet the scene between ArSh โ˜บ๏ธ
very nice part ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by kashndsel4eva


Awesome update
loved it loadzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
thank u ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by priyanki


nice part...
thnx 4 d  pm
cont soon

thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by cute-aish


nice update 
Continue soon
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by fri42911


awesome part. loved ARSH moments.

continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by lil_desi_goddes


superb update!
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by anumeha_rajat


that was really amazing...

loved hw armaan manaofy her..

alisha...nw who is she...

thnx for the pm...

aww thanks anu ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Originally posted by Klutszy_KaShian


Heyaa Manju!!

That was sweet, n u do not suck at riting romance! It is cute!!
thanks jinzi for the sweet words ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by KaShforever06


Beautiful Part.. I Hope ArSh get together soon.. I can't wait to see their romance.. 
thanks dear๐Ÿ˜ณ
Originally posted by MaNaLoVeKaSh




๐Ÿ‘PARTS๐Ÿ‘ 
๐Ÿ˜ƒTHANX FOR PM๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ˜›CONTINUE SOON๐Ÿ˜›


thank u mona๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Riddss


nice part
continue soon
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by amaniM


do you know how a drug addict feels when they don't get their daily fix. I do! so hurry up and give me my fix. update soon. stop worrying and keep writing
aww thanks so much amani๐Ÿ˜ณ coming this comment from such an amazing writer urself means alot to me ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by _Afrin_


beautiful part!!!!!!!!!!loved it...
but I didnt find it long ha...may be 4 pgs with double space...๐Ÿ˜›
so all of the main characters of this story are in the airport...our ArSh and the culprit...
now eagerly waiting for the next part...
cont super soon with a long part...
thanx for the pm...
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ lol i tried writing a long part re ๐Ÿ˜† and no "culprit" alisha is not there at airport ...u will knw soon ๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by aisha_ranbir8


hey the part waz beautiful... the flashback i totally loved it... waz cute...  arsh moments were so lovely... anywaz pls continue soon ...n thanks for pm...take care...love aish
thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by sweet_shilpa


nice update...add me to your pm list 


thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ will add u ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by MaNaLoVeKaSh


continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š
will try ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by anamika2010


actually shilpa looks so beautiful in her anger face..."how to win over anger of his angel"...loved this sentence so much...and liked their romantic parts...plz write more romantic parts of "arsh"..

punam
aww thanks punam... ๐Ÿ˜ณ will write soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by ilyasesha


awemmm๐Ÿ˜Š
thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
HUGEEE RES! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
This is gonna be a LONG post๐Ÿ˜ˆ .. Just finished part 1 .. will come back to edit once I finish reading part 2 & 3 ๐Ÿ˜›
 
-edited-
 
OMGG merii Vampy๐Ÿคฃ im soo happy you've started to write FF's ๐Ÿ˜ณ You write beautifully and I hope you write many more like these, of course on KaShโค๏ธ The way you've started it all out, really brought lots of suspense! And I love suspense๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I must say, you're quite creative with such stories .. would have never thought that she would be raising Sapna's child๐Ÿ˜‰ Whenever you mention about how their heartbeats beat at once (b/c you say that in part 1 & 2) ๐Ÿ˜ Really shows how bonded they are despite being separated for years!! Gossh this really feels like ArSh .. heck I could totally see KSG and SA playing each part.. ๐Ÿ˜Š I really liked how you showed Shilpa's place in Armaan's life .. within his family and all .. Oyee hoyee part 3 was โ˜บ๏ธ Youu have no idea how crazy I went reading your part 3 .. especially since its on KaSh im in like fairy tale land ... Perhaps the best part YET! Ahaha Shilpa and her 'fake' anger .. she was always bad at that as Riddhima ๐Ÿคฃ Ya know, being 'angry' at Armaan .. not that I blame her ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ Oyee hoyee .. ๐Ÿ˜‰ The part where Armaan mentions about their first kiss .. that was soo freakinn adorable! PERFECT song choice .. the chalte chalte onee .. signifies their current situation and I really like that songg ..
 
Ohh great .. now we've got Alisha ๐Ÿ˜ก Who the heck is she? We are getting an introduction of her in the next part right??
 
Yaa so this wasn't really a long post, was it? ๐Ÿคฃ If I hadn't read all 3 parts at once, this would have been longer ๐Ÿคฃ I was kinda in a hurry ๐Ÿ˜• Anyways lovee yaa Manjuu .. x Im suree im not the only one liking this right now
Edited by KaShBaarish..xx - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
wich idiot said u sucked in writting romantic stuffs...
infct u rocked it janemaan...!!

wow i so loved the manaofyinf part...
i jus hope all their misundrstndings gets over n they live a happy life...

n hu d hell is aalisha yaar...plz update soon...
i jus am too eager to noe wats next...

n thnx fr d pm!

love 
komal
Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome startingg!!
lovelyy...r4ealllyyy lovedd it a lott...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by KaShBaarish..xx


HUGEEE RES! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
This is gonna be a LONG post๐Ÿ˜ˆ .. Just finished part 1 .. will come back to edit once I finish reading part 2 & 3 ๐Ÿ˜›
 
-edited-
 
OMGG merii Vampy๐Ÿคฃ im soo happy you've started to write FF's ๐Ÿ˜ณ You write beautifully and I hope you write many more like these, of course on KaShโค๏ธ The way you've started it all out, really brought lots of suspense! And I love suspense๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I must say, you're quite creative with such stories .. would have never thought that she would be raising Sapna's child๐Ÿ˜‰ Whenever you mention about how their heartbeats beat at once (b/c you say that in part 1 & 2) ๐Ÿ˜ Really shows how bonded they are despite being separated for years!! Gossh this really feels like ArSh .. heck I could totally see KSG and SA playing each part.. ๐Ÿ˜Š I really liked how you showed Shilpa's place in Armaan's life .. within his family and all .. Oyee hoyee part 3 was โ˜บ๏ธ Youu have no idea how crazy I went reading your part 3 .. especially since its on KaSh im in like fairy tale land ... Perhaps the best part YET! Ahaha Shilpa and her 'fake' anger .. she was always bad at that as Riddhima ๐Ÿคฃ Ya know, being 'angry' at Armaan .. not that I blame her ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ Oyee hoyee .. ๐Ÿ˜‰ The part where Armaan mentions about their first kiss .. that was soo freakinn adorable! PERFECT song choice .. the chalte chalte onee .. signifies their current situation and I really like that songg ..
 
Ohh great .. now we've got Alisha ๐Ÿ˜ก Who the heck is she? We are getting an introduction of her in the next part right??
 
Yaa so this wasn't really a long post, was it? ๐Ÿคฃ If I hadn't read all 3 parts at once, this would have been longer ๐Ÿคฃ I was kinda in a hurry ๐Ÿ˜• Anyways lovee yaa Manjuu .. x Im suree im not the only one liking this right now
OMG! this was what i cld sy reading ur comment Sara...i LOVED reading it ๐Ÿ˜ณ thanks dear...
m glad u liked arsh here ๐Ÿ˜ณ and alisha seems to be quite popular already ๐Ÿ˜† 
anyways yeah this wasn't the long post... longest maybe ๐Ÿคฃ looking forward to ur long comments in next parts too shaitaan ๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by m4manju - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by thithutop14


wich idiot said u sucked in writting romantic stuffs...
infct u rocked it janemaan...!!

wow i so loved the manaofyinf part...
i jus hope all their misundrstndings gets over n they live a happy life...

n hu d hell is aalisha yaar...plz update soon...
i jus am too eager to noe wats next...

n thnx fr d pm!

love 
komal
aww thank u so much for the sweet words ๐Ÿ˜ณ... alisha is entering in next part... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ArShSaJan


hey awesome startingg!!
lovelyy...r4ealllyyy lovedd it a lott...
thanks  a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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