I can feel ur heartbeat-ArSh mini FF pt5 page 25 - Page 9

Originally posted by: -Manita-

First of all Congrats...for the first FF !!!!

and what an FF...Girl you write awesome...

Part 1 -

I loved the concept as such...Armaan and Shilpa FF is a automatically a sure shot hit !!! So no worries there...😉😉

I can relate to Armaan and Shilpa very well through your writing !!!

Shilpa was carrying Sonu and she met Billy and Ananya at the airport...couldn't have been better...
I am waiting for story to unfold...

Loving it totally !!!!

can you increase the length of update.??.😃...plzzz...I know I am being greedy, but at least after the exams...😆...

Hope Armaan sits next to her in the aircraft...😍😍😍...

By the way,,,,plzzz remove this mini in the title and make it a looongg one...

Muahhh !!!!!

PS - Off to read part 2 and will comment next !!!

Originally posted by: cute-aish

nice update...
Plzzz add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

awesome part!

so sonia aint shilpas child...cant wait to kno more bout arsh past :)

continue soon x

plzz add me to yur pm list :)

zarqaa x

Originally posted by: SlickSamosa

Hey Manju!

This is a lovely FF! I'm loving the story line so far; so interesting. Can't wait for the next part. 😊

PM me if you can!

Originally posted by: Crazy4KaSh

wow it's very intresting 👍🏼 ! i want to read more add me in pm list 😊

Originally posted by: neha-rockss

 heyya manju🤗
oyye y r u nervous...chill maro😉
all ARSH ffs r waise bhi hit😆😆
nope but seriously...ur ff plot is quite intrestng...😳😳
wanna se more nd more of ARSH...😃
nd now dat its revealed shilpa isnt at fault...
clear d misunderstandngs fast😉
nd give u all good scenes🤣
i kno u luv my comments hainaa😆 so here u go😳
nd wooo sabzz encouragd u to write😲
lol i had encouragd her 2 write😛
i kno shes a wonderful friend...a littl lesser dan me😛😆
k k enuf let oders too speak😃
update soon nd i want pm😈

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Wonderful Story!!! Please continue soon.. can't wait for there meeting..

Originally posted by: vidu87

hey nyc ff

liked it

plz add me 2 ur pm list

cont soon

Originally posted by: palakjain

hey..

nice part...

updte soon,,,..

add me 2 ur pm list..

palak..

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Wow me loving this ff
Loved it loads
Can't Wait 4 da next part
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx