I can feel ur heartbeat-ArSh mini FF pt5 page 25 - Page 5

hey awesome part..
loved it..
plz  cont soon...
want to their past...
thnx 4 d pm...

hey manju...sorry if  i late...nice starting...arey yaar! tum nervous keun ho? mujhse to achcha likhti ho...loved the whole part...plz.cont soon...

 

good going yaar! want lengthy update. waiting eagerly for the next part.

hey

Lovely parts ! Loved all the concept, please do continue soon :)

sad part. feeling bad for the new born and  ARSH. I hope soon they will get together.

First of all Congrats...for the first FF !!!!

and what an FF...Girl you write awesome...

Part 1 -

I loved the concept as such...Armaan and Shilpa FF is a automatically a sure shot hit !!! So no worries there...😉😉

I can relate to Armaan and Shilpa very well through your writing !!!

Shilpa was carrying Sonu and she met Billy and Ananya at the airport...couldn't have been better...
I am waiting for story to unfold...

Loving it totally !!!!

can you increase the length of update.??.😃...plzzz...I know I am being greedy, but at least after the exams...😆...

Hope Armaan sits next to her in the aircraft...😍😍😍...

By the way,,,,plzzz remove this mini in the title and make it a looongg one...

Muahhh !!!!!

PS - Off to read part 2 and will comment next !!!
Edited by -Manita- - 12 years ago

do pm me! for the next part :)

Part 2 -

Awesome part 2...like part 1...

Now, they have met and thousands of emotions are running across them. Hope they get to talk and clarify soon about their misunderstandings and their past !!!
Eagerly waiting for part 3

love

nice update...
Plzzz add me to ur pm list