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~~~MayUr OS/SS Gallary...#2~~~MN OS updated pg143 (Page 66)

J.LO IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 4:22am | IP Logged
nice part do continue and plzz do happy ending  NURPUR KO HAPPY RAKHNA...

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-SupriyaluvsMN- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
nyc start maria!
me sooo happy ... new MN ss
luvd it!
rush 2 read d further updates!
luv ya sis!Hug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Writer note
hello friends...
Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful comments n responceHugHugHug
i am really happy to see ur responce..Hug
here is another Os from my side...
Maria...remember me in your prayersEmbarrassed

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-SupriyaluvsMN- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
part 2 interesting
so... arnav isnt nupur's child...
ab mystery.. ko jaldi khatam karo maria ji...
cant wait ... 4 d next update...
jaldi update karo ji...Big smileBig smile

Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 25 June 2011 at 6:05am

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged

Mayur OS



Our Love


I heard many times. Love is blind, you can mad in Love. When you love someone you can do anything for her. You can't live without her. Well I always laughed at these silly things. How can someone fall in love with someone so deeply, madly that he even can do anything for her? I always thought Love is Temporary madness. I did not think Love can exist in this world where most of the people are selfish'


But..i was wrong..yeah I never thought I will fall in Love with someone so deeply that I will forget everything..i did not think a girl will come in my life and will change everything..


I remember the day when I saw her first time..i entered in my sister Gunjan's room..when my eyes fell on her...sitting on bed,reading some book..her book fell on floor when she noticed my presence..she adjusted her duppata..she was feeling uncomfortable as Gunjan was in washroom and no one in room except us..i was feeling embarrassed as I did not know she was alone in the room and moreover I did not knock the door..


I steal glanced at her she was standing there lowering her eyes.. She was very shy girl..her long silky hair was spreading on her shoulder'I Love her hair. What I say about her eyes. They were beautiful, black dove shaped, her trembling lips'I was lost in her..


"Gunjan washroom main hai"she said with hesitation lowering her eyes ..

Firs time I heared her voice,her voice like cukoo..i came back to my scenes as I heared her soft voice I scolded myself for looking at her like fool..what will she thinks about me?but seriously it was the first time when I noticed any girl or you can say she was the first girl whom I admired..


"I am sorry I should knock the door"I said and looked towards her..she raised her head and looked towards was the first time our eyes met..there was magic in her eyes who captured my heart in just one look


We had an eye lock..i did not want to break our eye contact


"Bhaiya..what are you doing here"Gunjan asked as she saw me standing in her room starring her


I was feeling embarrassed I came back into my senses..


"Gunjan 'ac..t..ually"




"What bhaiya"


Gunjan said with little irritation


"I forget"finally I said and looked towards Her and see her smile..


Seriously I forgot everything'I was so lost in her that I forgot everything'


Gunjan too smiled..


"Bhaiya jab yaad a jaye toh bata dena"Gunjan said trying to vanished my embarrasement'


"bhaiya meet her..she is Friend"Gunjan introduced me with her


So her name is Nupur.".lovely name"..i thought


She was feeling shy may she noticed my intense gazed on her''


It was Our first meeting and I fell in Love with her..Deeply,Madly


I dreamt of her everynight..she snatched my heart..ahh My fate..i was so duffer I did not tell her I love her madly deeply..but I wanted to tell her I Love you Nupur I cant live without you..its true..i cant live without her''..



Today is the most important day of my Life when I will tell much I love her..yeah today I will confess to my Love,my Wife Nupur


She is waiting for me in our room''.


I opened the door,the whole room was decorated with Red flowers even I can see lots of flowers on our bed..beautiful aroma was spreading in our room..

I entered in my room and I have seen the most beautiful sight of my life..


She was sitting on our bed wearing Red fish Lehnga,she was looking breathtaking..i could not believe on my fate..she was mine now


I went up to her and sat beside her..i took off her veil and looked at her


"You are looking beautiful" the first sentence came out from my mouth..i saw red colour crept on her face'as she was blushing


My life was so close to me..i was the luckiest person in the world


"Nupur"I called her name and she shyly turned her face towards me


"I want to say you something which I could not tell you before"I said and she looked at me with confused eyes


"I Love you"finally I confessed my Love to her


"I love you our  first meeting you captured my heart and I couldn't do anything..i always dreamt of you..i really love you"I said and looked into his eyes and I was surprised to see the same amount of love in her eyes too..its means'..I was so happy..i was waiting for her answer


"I love you too too take my heart in our first meeting"I was shocked,surprised,happy,was flying in the air..she too love me..her confession was unexpected without wasting time I captured her lips,firstly she was she was surprised but then she started responding to my kiss..i wrapped her in my arms and pulled her more closer'our kiss turned into passionate one..her hands were in my hair while my hands were exploring her tongue was exploring her was most beautiful moment of my life...i wanted to tell her how much I love her,how much I wanted her in my life..


We broke our kiss..we both were breathless..she was blushing and I gave her another peck on her lips..


That night I made her mine  for forever'''''.





here is another Os..i hope u ll liked it...plz do comments n press like tab if u liked itEmbarrassed 

Edited by maria-soniarti - 26 June 2011 at 2:05am

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Maria i am blushing like Hell, it is so BeauTiFul and Romanctic..Blushing
Awesome os Yar...Embarrassed

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
awesome update.
its shocking that nupur cant conceive.
then who is arnav???
which truth mayank wanted to reveal????
i thot, their second honeymoon going tob a bad phase of their life! 
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Fantasy. Senior Member

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Beautiful Os...lovely Romantic
do write more

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