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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

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Originally posted by ginny09

cute sweet amazing teriffic part 
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Originally posted by cutiepie12

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yahan pe b party tym banta hai...LOL
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Originally posted by Xx_fehmida_xX

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 9:19am | IP Logged

Thank u sooo much friends for liking,appreciating my previous OS...HugHugHug

I thought to write b part of my previous OS,,,as some readers req me...
 specially..aysha-mayur and Ruchi...Embarrassed

Mayur OS….. (b) Part


A new beautiful morning in sharma house…..Nupur opened her eyes and found herself in his arms…she hugged him tightly and hides her face in his chest…


Mayank….what are you thinking?She asked as she found him lost in deep thoughts


She raised her head and looked at him…


Nupur…main soch raha tha,,,kitne din ho gaye maa se miley hue...maa se milney ko bohat jee chah raha hai…


She knew he loves her mother so much..She knew how much he miss her mother…they requested her many times to shift in Mumbai…with them but she did not want to leave her she was senior employ of that company  and it was not easy for her to leave her job…she talked with them daily but Mayank wanted to live with them as she was not his mother she was his father too….

She worked hard in her life to provide him every essential thing of life……


Mayank maa se baat ker lo…tumhain accha lage ga…she said


Main ne kuch der pehle un se baat ki hai…janta hoon who mujh se bohat pyaar kerti hain…main chahta hoon ke Maa hamare saath rahain per Maa meri baat nahi manti…unhain toh apni job ki parvah hai…he was sad


Nupur cupped his face ….Mayank un hon ne hamesha hamari khushi ka khayal rakha hai…hamai bhi un ke her decision ki respect kerni chahiye……..she was trying to understand her Pov…….


Tum theek kehti ho Nupur…..he said with smile while giving her kiss on her forehead.if she is happy then I m too happy..


Ab jaldi ud jao…tumhain office ke liye der ho rahi hai…she said and got up from bed..


Mayank too got up from bed and went to washroom to freshen up……..






The whole sharma family at breakfast table……..



Maa why papa is shed(sad)…Pari whispered in her mother's ear…Nupur looked towards Mayank who was silently eating his breakfast

Nupur picked up Pari in her lap and said in her ears…he is missing her mother…your dado(grand mother)..While feeding her sandwich..


Papa is missing her mom…she again asked her for confirmation..


Nupur nodded her head…


Papa se kaho dado se baat ker lo….she was felling sad to see her father upset..


Papa ne baat ker li hai….per who chahte hain kea p ki dado yahan aa jaye….hamare paas…Nupur gave her detailed while kissing her cheeks…


Pari…too kissed her mother back..


Nupur I m getting late…Mayank said ..getting up from his chair…


He gave good bye kiss to Nupur…Parnav and Pari and went  for office…….



Pari dialed Shilpa number…..


Hello Dado…I m Pari….Pari said


Aww mera bacha meri par I kaisi hai…Shilpa was surprised,she loves Parnav and Pari a lot…


Dado..i m fine….she said with a smile on her face


Pari..where is your mama..mama ko phone do……….shilpa said


Dado..Mama is in kitchen mujhe ap se shecret (secret)baat kerni hai…she whispered


Shilpa smiled..she knew there must be some some plan in her mind..


Kaisa secret….she replied in low they were talking about some important plan..


Dado..papa missing you…please come here na…please dado…she requested


Shilpa smiled she can never rejected their little,small requests as they were her life…


Mera bacha…sirf itni si baat…main aj hi aa jaon gi…she said a huge grin on her face… secret kishi(kisi) ko pata nahi chale…she again whispered….


Shilpa laughed…theek hai…ye secret kisi ko pata nahi chale ga…






Mayank returned back home…he entered in his house.. Nupur…..where are you…he was calling Nupur …he placed his bag on table and threw himself on he was very tired..




Mayank opened his eyes as he heared his mother voice..


Maa..ap..he hurriedly stood up…went towards her and hugged her…


Happy Mothers day maa…I was missing you…he said while hugging her mother


I missed you too beta…she said while giving him kissed him on his forehead…


Nupur ,Parnav and Pari also came there…


Maa subha toh aap keh rahi thi kea p nahi aa rahi...he said


Beta ana pardha kyun ke kisi ne mujhe bataya ke …mera beta mujhe bohat miss ker raha hai..she said looking at Pari…


Pari ne…Mayank asked for confirmation


Shilpa nodded her head………..


Mayank picked up her in his arms…and kisse her cheeks…


Papa  shurprised (surprise)kaisa laga…she asked innocently….


Bohat accha……….he said with huge smile on his face


Pari tum ne mujhe kyun nahi apna plan bataya…Parnav asked her angrily as she did not told her about her plan…


Main hamesha apna plan bata ta hoon…he was sad…Nupur picked up him in his arms…


Aj se hamari party change…main aur Parnav apna plan kisi ko nahi baytaye ge…she said and kissed his cheeks


Main neb hi party change kel (ker)li hai…ab papa mere partner hain..


She said hugging her father


Aur main tum sab ki leader hoon……..Shilpa declared and everyone laughed





Happy Mothers day to u allHugHug



here is next OS...I hope u ll like it..plz do comments n press like tab if u like itEmbarrassed

Edited by maria-soniarti - 08 May 2011 at 9:23am

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