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~~~MayUr OS/SS Gallary...#2~~~MN OS updated pg143 (Page 46)

mayur_eternal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Feeling bad for both Mayank and NupurOuch
Hope Nupur accepts Mayank's feelings soon..she has already suffered so much..
Cont soon..Tongue

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-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Awesome confession
i hope mayu make her happy
coz she's so sad
n d precap seems mayu got to know his past
lovely update sis
thnx 4 d pm

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_ArTi4ever_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 4:22am | IP Logged
exceptionally well written...cant wait 4 the next part...continue soon sisHugHug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful responceHugHugi am back with another Mayur OS...i hope u ll liked itEmbarrassed
Maria...remember me in ur prayersEmbarrassed

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged

Mayur OS'''.



How will I ask her for date?if she refused to go with me?Mayank thought..resting his head at the back of chair..


I am Mayank the cool,hansom hunk of excel college..and the most confused soul of excel college too'don't laugh at me..i know why..i love a girl for past four years..first two years I take to accept my year I take to is love,I love her deeply,madly..and now I am scared to tell her about my feelings..


I want to tell her I love her..She is my life,my love'Nupur..yeah Nupur Bhushan,my best friend..

She is very beautiful,sensitive,loving girl..


"Mayank what are you thinking?"Nupur asked him while sat beside


He came out of his thoughts when he heard her beautiful  voice..he turned his face towards him..


"Nupur will you go on date with me "he asked her looking into her eyes..she was in shocked..her mouth was hung open  for a moment..


She was in shocked after listening my question..she did not expect such a weird question from me..

I was feeling embarrassed..


"Mayank are you in your senses"?she asked in confusion


"yeah I am in my senses..i want to listen your answer"I said with confidently


She looked at me with surprised and after thinking sometimes she said"yes"


I was so happy..finally I was going to spend some quality time with her..




Nupur opened her cupboard and select a red dress for her..


"Di where are you going"Gunjan asked her coming close to her


"guess"Nupur rolled her eyes while a mischevious smile was playing on her lips'..


"you are going with Dia on shopping"?Gunjan gussed




"I am going on a date with Mayank"Nupur said happily and looked towards her shocked face..


Gunjan's eyes got big


"really Di"she asked in disbelieve


"yup"she replied


"So where you have to go "she asked in teasing tone..


"I don't know"Nupur replied while a red crept on her she was blushing hard




I never thought I would go on a date with I was waiting for him



A door bell rang and she opened the door'..


He was standing in front of her starring her continuously'''.she was blushing..his intense gaze made her conscious..


She was wearing red colour anarkali dress with white and red embroidery on its border..

Her hears were spreading on her shoulder..


"are you ready"Mayank composed himself and asked


"Yeah I am ready"she said with smile



"Mayank where are we going"Nupur asked with questioning eyes after twenty-five minutes drive


"surprise"he said


The car has stopped on a beach..they came out of car..


There was a was decorated with flowers and candals..we sat on chairs..

We both feeling awkward..


He offered me a glass of juice..i took from his hands..


"Mayank can I ask you something"I asked with hesitation..he looked at me ans said




"why did  you want to go on a date with me"?Nupur asked and looked towards him waiting for his answer


"because"he paused a bit


"I love you"finally I said those three words now I was waiting for her reaction


She was shocked'''


She stood up from her chair'I was confused


"what if she reject me?

"what if she don't accept me"


I was afraid'..


I came close to her..


"I love you Nupur..i really love you..i wanted to confess my feelings..i am sorry if I hurt you"he said waiting for her answer


She looked at him and smiled


"I love you too Mayank'I was waiting for this day for so long"


He looked at her in disbelieve


"She loves me too"


He immediately hugged her'she hugged him back''' finally the two lovers confess their love'


They pulled themselves apart..she was feeling shy'


He pulled her towards him and she collided with his chest..he cupped her face in his hands..she closed in her eyes in was new feeling for them..he pressed his lips with her..she responded her kissed it was their first kiss full of love and passion'



here is OS...i hope u ll liked it..plz do comments n press like tab if u liked itEmbarrassed

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 June 2011 at 7:34am

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tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
thanxc 4 d pm

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
a cute Romantic confession MariaEmbarrassed

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 June 2011 at 7:55am
.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Aww such a romantic os... Mayank's nervousnes, he so adorable..
The date was sweet, and the finally the confesson... And the kiss of love... Awesome os, very romantic...

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