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~~~MayUr OS/SS Gallary...#2~~~MN OS updated pg143 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

i think u said too much throught the gazal...y u always choice my favts

 
 
Mera naam tak jo na le saka, Jo mujhe qaraar na de saka
Jise ikhtiyaar to tha magar, Mujhe apna pyaar na de saka
Wohi shakhsh meri talaash hain, Wohi dard meri hayaat hain
Jo chala gaya mujhe chodkar, wohi aaj tak mere saath hain

very well done

aww you too love this ghazal its awesom yaar...
 
i loved these lines
 
Kare pyaar lab pe gila na ho, Ye kisi kisi ka naseeb hain
Ye karam hain uska jafaa nahin, Wo juda bhi reh ke kareeb hain
Wohi aankh hain mere rubaroo, Usi haath me mera haath hain
Jo chala gaya mujhe chodkar, Wohi aaj tak mere saath hain

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

nice ending maria,but i cant cope up with the fact that life goes on,neither do i believe in it...anyways mayank's death was undigestable..so plz try not to make such situation occur in ur future updates...plzz.luv u loads..🤗🤗

aww sis...sorry i made you sad🤗
u r right in ur place..but its life n whatever happens in our lifes,we have to live..we have to live for those who loves us...
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Posted: 12 years ago
liked it alot maria...u gave a perfect end...😃

tczz
loads of love
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFEUL ENDING...

SHE STILL LOVES HIM...SWEET...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice end
thanks 4 da Pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful end..maria...
finally dey confessd...
luvd it!
luv ya sis!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aweome ending hun
nups still love mayu
but she moved on her life which is goon
thanks sis
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending maria...nupur still loves him
and she also knows that she has to move on...as life nvr stops..
lovely SS👏
thanx for PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update wid nice ending...

yup rght...

Life does not stop with someones death we have to move in our life..its bitter truth but its truth...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely End Maria

Loved it

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