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~~~MayUr OS/SS Gallary...#2~~~MN OS updated pg143 (Page 34)

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Lovely OS...
But i cant support mayank here...Though he loved her he didnt trust her...And that cant be a selfless love...
If this ws a ff then i shud say make mayank wait and nupur to not forgive him so easily...But here i cant say anything...I think this one part ws enough to show their love, emotions and regretion...And u did very well in that...
Now lets see wat comes nxt...

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Awesome OS
loved it loadz
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Nice os mariaSmile..
and misunderstandings ego clashes are common between two individuals from different background..but to repent as well as forgive a mistake makes a human equal to God..so Mayank deserves a chance and I'm sure that Nupur will forgive himWink...
update soon
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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS Maria
 
very well written..u portrayed Mayur feelings very well..hats off to u..
 
i think Mayank deserves a chance...
 
do continue soon

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
WonderFul Part Maria

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
nice one...ya nupur should give him a chance...but not so easily...Wink

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

i think first it should be clarify tht in wht circumstances mayank didnt trust her...than v can answer u properly tht either mayank deserve another chance or not...

so do write 2nd part...
@maha
Thanks for liking it..
well it was OS..so i tried my best to tell u both Mayur POV..their love to each other,Mayank regret,seperation,their lonliness..in just one part
they r seperate because Mayank did not trust her..he just listen n belive what he saw or listen to others...he did not trust her,her wife,her love
 
thats why she left him...
 
my question is..he did mistake?but what do u think..his mistake is forgattable or not
 
 
 


Edited by maria-soniarti - 07 June 2011 at 2:18pm
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Though Mayank is repenting n regretting but he has to win her back...he has to confess his heart out...n yes Nupur should give him another chance...as we all do mistakes except God...Nice Os...cont soon...!!!

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