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~~~MayUr OS/SS Gallary...#2~~~MN OS updated pg143 (Page 26)

Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
pt 1...23
Part 2




They pulled themselves apart to get some air..Nupur was blushing hard..she lowered her head  and Mayank enveloped her in his arms




"Nupur tum breakfast kyun nahi ker rahi"Mayank asked her taking a glass of juice


"who..Mayank main ne breakfast ker liya hai"she replied giving him assurance look


He had his breakfast


"Nupur do take care of take your medecine on time and if there is any me"he said giving her instruction..


"ok..Mr.Sharma..ap ka hukum sar aankhon per"she said dramatically giving him his violet and some files


He smiled..


"Mrs.Sharma you are forgetting something"he said leaning his face towards her


While naughty smile was playing on his face'


She understood which thing he was taking about..

She blushed


Mayank kissed her'she too kissed him on his cheeks'then he left for office




"ye shaam kab ho gi"she was blabbering looking towards the was just 4,o clock..


She was felling dizzy due to her pregnancy'she knew when Mayank get to know about her fast..he will scold her..




The half day passed'


Mayank was too busy in his work even he forget to take his lunch'

"sir you did not eat anything..can I bring something for you"Dev asked him


" need..i will eat later"he said without looking at him as he was doing some important work on his laptop


"sir its seems you too have keep fast for your wife"he giggled


Mayank glared her


"what do you mean"he asked him


"sir..dont you is karvachauth"he told him


"today is karvachauth..but why Nupur did tell me'"he was confused


"subha Nupur ne breakfast bhi nahi kiya'who subha jaldi bhi udth gaye thi kahin us ne varath toh nahi rakha'ye Nupur bhi na kabhi meri baat nahi sunti..Nupur ne subha se kuch nahi khaya ho ga.."he was bit angry at her as he do care for her


He knew she needs rest as she was pregnant'


"sir can I send something for you to eat"Dev again asked him as he saw him in his thoughts


"nahi'mujhe bhook nahi hai"he said


He was getting tense for her


"mujhe jaldi ghar jana ho ga"he thought and completed his work


He left for house'''.




Nupur decorated pooja thali'


She opened her cupboard and took out red saree which Mayank gifted her on their first marriage anniversary..


She took the saree and towel and went up to washroom to take shower




Mayank entered in house..he looked here and there in search of her but she was nowhere to be seen..


An idea struck in his mind


"She kept fast for me now its my turn..i have to do something for her"


He thought and smiled


He walked towards the tiaras'he decorated the tiaras with flowers and candles




Nupur came out of washroom after wearing red saree'she brushed her wet hair and let them open..she put sindoor in her maang and tied mangalsutra around her neck'sindoor and mangalsutra both are the symbol of their marriage which always reminds her she is his wife and he is her


She looked herself last time in the doubt she was looking gorgeous like fairy..she turned her face other side when her eyes fell on a note


She took it and read


"Mrs. Sharma..Mr.Sharma is waiting for you on tairus"she smiled


The door of tairus was opened'she took steps towards the tiaras and was amazed to see the sight in front of her the whole tiaras was decorated with flowers and candles..she was surprised..she smiled to see him'he was lost in her beauty..she was looking beautiful and he was unable to take his eyes off from her face'she noticed his intense,passionate gazed on her..she blushed..


Mayank came close to her and pulled her towards him'she bumped onto his chest..

"You are looking beautiful"he whispered near his ear


She was blushing she hid her head in his chest'


"do you like surprise"he asked


She nodded her head and smiled..


"I love you Nupur"he said lovingly..tightened his gripped around her waist


"I love you too Mayank"she said with same affection,love


He held her hands in his hands and kissed them softly


"Nupur why you did not tell me about your fast'you know you need rest..why you kept fast for me"he asked her while his eyes became moist


Nupur cupped his face in her hands


"i am fine Mayank..i am perfectly fine..I am sorry  for not telling you about my fast"she was feeling guilty to not telling him


"don't say sorry'lekin tumhain mujh se promise kerna ho ga..tum meri her baat mano gi"he said


"ok' kaneez ap ke her hokum ki tameel kare gi"she said dramatically and both started laughing


"Mayank mujhe bohat bhuk lag rahi hai..ab jaldi se mera varat khulvao.."she said making sad face


He drank her water'they had wonderful dinner




"Nupur"he said while hugging her




"There is another surprise for you "he said leaning towards her


"Which surprise" she asked impatiently


"bata don"he said coming more closer to her..she could feel his breath on his face


"haan"she said shyly


"theek hai"he said while naughty smile was playing on his face


He took her in his arms'she encircled her arms around his neck..she knew what next was coming on her way'she could feel his passionate gaze on her


She was in his arms and he made his way towards their bedroom'''..


She submitted herself to her Husband,Her Love'''.




here is next part i hope u ll liked it...plz do comments n press like tab if u liked itEmbarrassed


Edited by maria-soniarti - 03 June 2011 at 1:31pm

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
really liked it alot maria...Smile
it ws soo beautiful ...Big smile

loads of love

Edited by cutiepie12 - 03 June 2011 at 12:58pm

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shruti_luvs_msk IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
so sweet 
loved mayanks surprise 

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
a very cute os... Nupur kept a fast for him, and he surprised her with dinner on the terrace... Very romantic... Nice oneshot Maria do write more.. :)

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priya_27_23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
beautiful update dear

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-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Maria it's so so romantic n verry beautiful
MAYUR adorable as always
loved to core sis
thanks for the pm
DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Lovely Os dear
Mayank is so Sweet husband 
Love Mayur so  much
Thanks for pm
cont soon

felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS
loved it loadz
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Edited by kashndsel4eva - 03 June 2011 at 3:00pm

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