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~~~MayUr OS/SS Gallary...#2~~~MN OS updated pg143 (Page 18)

Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged

Thank u sooo much friends for ur love,ur appreciation and beautiful comments..HugHugHug

ur comments,appreciation means a lot to me...
sorry friends for delayEmbarrassedas i am not well..i have pain in my arm...Cry..Inshallah ll try to give u next update soon


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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Part 2



Dia entered in Nupur's room ..she came to meet her as Nupur's mother told her about Nupur's health..Dia was MayUr's childhood friend..



Nupur opened her eyes as she heard the knock on the door ..


"Nupur what happened... Aunty called me and told me about ur health"she came close to Nupur and hugged her


"I am fine Dia..i was just scared bcos of my dream..dont worry I am fine now"she pulled herself back and told her


"Shut up !"Dia said angrily


"Don't try to lie..look at yourself in mirror..your pale face,your swollen eyes says everything..i know you Love cant forget him" she said loudly


Nupur was numb,silent..

 she was feeling helpless and hurt to say those words to her

"  but Nupur its truth Mayank is no more"she said in soft tone while some tears came out of her eyes

She said holding her shoulder..


"enough is enough could you say that he is no more?he promised me he will wait for my confession how could he forget his promise?he said he is with me in every step of my could he not  fulfill his promise?how can I accept..he is no more..he promised me he wil wait for me..why did he leave me alone?why he did not wait for me..why?"


Nupur cried her heart out and hugged Dia'


Dia was trying to console her but she knew  it is impossible for Nupur to forget Mayank..Dia was feeling sad to see her friend like this..



"I have to do something to make her understand that Mayank is no more..Nupur has to forget Mayank and move on in her life"Dia thought



"Nupur get up..we have to go mall"Dia said pulling her arm.


"Dia I don't want to go anywhere..mera mood nahi hai"she took off her hand and again lied down on her bed


"Nupur please get up yaar..i have to buy dresses for party"she requested with pleading eyes


"which party"Nupur asked while got up from bed


"yaar today our boss gave us a party for getting a big I have to go there"Dia told her


"Hurry up Nupur"


"Wait Dia I have to change my clothes"she said taking out her clothes from her cupboard


"ok"Dia replied


Nupur got ready in 10 minutes..she was wearing a white colour and churridar


She was tieing her hair in clip but Dia requested her to let them open'

They left for market




They entered in mall..they visit many boutiques n shops but Dia could not select a suitable dress for she was very choosy about her dresses


"I am tired Dia and also feeling hungry.."Nupur exclaimed


"ohh sorry Nupur..i know I hvnt been able to select anything yet even after visiting many must be you are not well..ok you go and take juice or sandwich for yourself and I am waiting for you in this shop and "Dia said



Nupur said and went towards the food stall while Dia was busy in selecting dress for herself...


Nupur took juice and sandwich for herself and mango juice for Dia..she was about to turn her face when she bumped onto someone..her juices fell down from her hands


"I am sorry"both said at the same time...

It was well known voice'her heart started beating fast


She raised her head and looked at him '.she was shocked,surprised,happy..tears started brimming in her eyes'


"Mayank"she murmered


"I am sorry..i could not see you..its my mistake"he apologized but Nupur was lost in him she could not even utter a word


Mayank was surprised at her behaviour'something was in her eyes which was hurting him..he did not know but why were her tears  hurting him??


"I am Mayank and your name"he said looking at her while she was continuously staring him


Her pale face,her eyes,its seems they wanted to tell him something but he was unable to understand anything


"Mayank"finally she called his name..tears were in her eyes but smile was playing on her lips..


"mujhe kyun itna ajeeb lag raha ki zuban se mera nam kitna ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai..aisa lagta hai ke us ne dil se mujhe bulaya ho..but how it can be possible..i don't know her"Mayank thought


They were lost into each other eyes'


He came back into his senses when someone called his name


"Mayank are here and I was waiting for you on payment shopping is completed..i have bought even a beautiful dress for our engagement"a girl said coming close to him

But he was looking at Nupur..he could see hurt,pain in her face and it was hurting him


"ye mera Mayank nahi toh kisi aur ka Mayank hai..mere Mayank ke dil main Nupur ke elava koi reh nahi sakta..woh sirf Nupur se pyaar kerta hai..sirf mujh se pyaar kerta hai..he can not be mine Mayank"


Nupur turned her face away and ran towards the outdoor


Mayank wanted to stop her but he did not'he did not...but why was he feeling pain to see her in tears..







Why I am thinking about her?who was she?what was in her eyes which is hurting me?

He was restless


I want to meet her,to see her..i have to find her..please GOD help me..

here is next update...i hope u ll liked it..plz do comments n press like tab if u liked it

Edited by maria-soniarti - 28 May 2011 at 9:24am

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--Sanchu-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
wow!!!...that was interesting...
continue soon...
wanna
thanks for the PM...

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priya_27_23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
OMG poor nupurCry

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.SilentOcean IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
hey maria..Hug
nw i m sure dat mayu lost his memory...he is engend???!!!
okey...but they fianlly met and destiny is at its own work...!!!!Smile
very nice update...
thnx 4 pm...

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged

Poor Nupur she lost him, found him and then again lost him... But its true its when who we love goes way from us that we realize how much we reallu loved them, but never confessed... I'm feeling bad for Nupur seeing him infront of her but be unable to touch him...

And Mayanks confusion, I guess her heart touched his, and well they ate conceted only Mayan has to realize this...Wonderful Update Maria, please continue soon...


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varsh-mayur Goldie

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
nice...poor nupur...Smile

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crazymayurian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
interestingly amazing

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