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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello friends...
 
Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful comments n responce🤗🤗🤗
 
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i m going to update next part of my SS..i hope u ll liked it
 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5

 

 
 
 
 
He slowly came close to her and hugged her from back..she felt his clossness,his touch but today his touch was not affecting her.

 

"I missed you"he whispered in her ear while nuzzling in her neck

 

"I love you.."he kissed her neck..

 

She felt disgusting when he kissed her..he was confused she was not giving him any response

 

"Nupur its seems you did not missed me"he said tightened his gripped showing her his fake anger..and kissed her passionately..

 

"Mayank leave me .I am feeling disgusting due to your touch"he heard her heavy voice..he was hell shocked after hearing those words..

 

"Nupur"Mayank said turning her face towards him..He was surprised and confused to see tears in her eyes..

"Nupur"he tried to cupped her face

But she jerked off his hands

"don't try to touch me"she shouted while tears were dwelling up in her eyes'

 

Mayank was hell shocked at sudden changed in her behaviour..he was confused he did not know why was she behaving like that..

"Nupur what happened?"he tried to come closed to her but she took some steps back

"Mayank don't try to come closed to me if you will I will kill myself"she shouted and Mayank feet froze  at his place..he could not believe what she just said..

He was in shocked

 

"why did you do that"she asked..she was not in her senses

 

"Nupur"Mayank tried to say something but she inturuppted

 

"Why did you do that? She shouted. She was not in her senses

 

"Nupur"Mayank tried to say something but she interrupted him

 

"Did not I fulfil your all desires?"

"Did not I try my best to keep you happy?"

 

"Did not I give you all your rights?"

 

"Did not I fulfil all your desires your wishes"she  was shouting while Mayank was numbed to say anything..he could not understand what was happening..

 

She came close to him

 

"where was my fault?where was the lackness"she was asking shaking his shoulder

 

"where was the lackness,on your bed  or in my Love"

"I love you from the bottom of my heart"she burst into tears and Mayank was helpless

 

"Nupur please don't cry"he cupped her face in his hands..he could not see tears in her eyes'.

 

"you did not do anything wrong..you gave me immense love..you filled my life with colours..you are my life,my breath,my heart beat,my everything"he told her his heart but she shrugged off his hands

"You are lieing"

"You did not love me..if you love me you never cheated me..you never hurted me.."

He was confused

"What I did"he asked

 

"So you don't even know what you have done"she said sarcastically

 

"What is this Mayank"

She showed him a paper and he got shocked to see a paper in her hands

 

It was Arnav's birth certificate which was issued at the day of his birth..and in the paper Mayank's name was written in the  filed of Father name.

"so Arnav was your child" she said sarastically

 

Mayank was numbed to say anything..

 

"I was so dumb,fool who could not understand anything..i thought you have no problem if I cant not be  mother as you love me but I was wrong..after all you are too Man like others..why did not you tell me ?you want child"

 

"I will not forgive you at any cost..i will never forgive you..Never not in my life"

 

"I am going to leave you forever"

She said and taking step towards their room but Mayank caught her wrist

 

"Nupur I did not do anything wrong..Arnav is not my son..yeah but he is our son..Nupur trust me..please trust me..i just love you..i just love.."

Mayank said while his eyes became teary'''

 

She turned back and looked towards him..she could feel truth in his words but what she saw she could not believe him anymore..

 

He held her by shoulder

 

"I did not do anything wrong..please trust me..please dont go anywhere"

 

"if you are innocent then why did not you tell me before"

He could feel sarcasm in her voice.

 

"you did not tell me before as you did sin..i hate you Mayank"she shrugged off her shoulder

 

"I am feeling bad for Arnav..he is child..he did not know what you did but he will get punish for that sin which he did not do..you snatched her mother"

She said and ran towards the room while Mayank tried to understand her but she did not listen him

 

"you have to listen truth"Mayank said angrily  holding her hand

 

"I won't"she said trying to freed her hand but his gripped was strong

 

"I will tell you truth and you have to listen as I cant live without you please just give me one chance.please give me one chance if not for me then for Arnav"he said with pleading eyes and Nupur heart melted to see his pleading eyes.

 

She did not said anything but she did not protest anymore..Mayank understood she gave him chance

 

He opened the door for her and Nupur silently sat in car''..

 

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here is next part..i hope u ll liked it..do comments n press like tab if u liked it...😳

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by maria-soniarti - 12 years ago
daniella05 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow maria!!!! another fab update sis!!!!!!!!! 👏 m eagerly waiting for next part!!!!!!!!!
loved the part and the way u expressd Nupur's emotions!!! love ya!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome part sis!!!!! 🤗 wow!!!!! just too good!!!!!!! loved the way u portrayed Nupur's emotions!!!! 👏 i hope she will give him a chance!!!!
eagerly waiting for the next part sis!!!!!!
love ya!!!!!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update👏wanna know how will mayank clear the misunderstanding
thanks for pm 
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part
I also wana know truth 
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...cant wait 4 d next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear.
hope nupur soon realizes mayanks innocence n also forgive him for hiding any sort f secret from her..
hope their confusion s cleared soon..
thanx for d pm.
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...Maria..what a beautiful update
 
u expressed Nupur;s feeling brilliantly
 
hatts off to u
 
well done
 
u r amazing writer...