New MN FF- Simple But Complicated(update)pg38 - Page 19

Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing tasfia...
although u came late but  u always updated long part so hmesha bach jati hu... 😆
m feeling so pity for mayank...
y nupur is doing this with mayank...
 
hope they 'll soon patchup...
 
love ly update...
lazy hona baand karoo and update soon...
 
tc dear...
Posted: 12 years ago
i want to hear nupurs story. there must be something wrong with her. she's making her judgements about mayank out of nothing!

seriously, why the wide world have problem with someone sleeping on a week end? week ends are for sleeping to your hearts content!
Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much and continue soon!
Posted: 12 years ago
Tasfiii my sweet lil sis
do u know u r one of my fav writers of this forum
i just loved ur writer sweetu..

again a fabulous update...let me know one thing - whats nups prb???wo maynk ki piche kyun pari hain. why she hated him too much.. i know mayk was flirty, sadu- but he was not bad at all. uparse
wo nups ki saath itna misbehave bhi nehi karte.. mayank was hurt- and it mademe sad. nups was hurt too. yaar it was really very complex- ye kya ho raha hai.. kuch tou bolo...but u knw what i loved this mystery... u r too good and superb ... love u  and ur update .. take care
Posted: 12 years ago
the strt was hilarious..loved sami too much...
but thn it turns in to a emotional one...its hurting him haan...kuch kuch hota hai..actually buhat kuch hotahai...
the eyelock , the sofa..the lift...evry thng was waooo...
 
lovly n cont soon tashu..pls jani...
 
gr8 work
Posted: 12 years ago

part 2

lol diz part waz just amazinGG🤣

had sooo much fun while reading entire thing na !!

sope Sayank waiting 4 some1 to take them 2 place where they'd b staying

n den dey went in taxi to it

n Mayu bumpzz into Nupz

n breakzz her precious glass vase I think

n den MayUr 🤣🤣

I just love deir convozz

fightzzz 🤣

Sammy smart 1 triez 2 stop 🤣

n den he saw Gunjan open door n den he'zz lost in her 🤣

n when Sayank sitting aram se

Nupz come !!

Samrat almost had heart attack 🤣

I can imagine situation na 🤣

waise it waz choo cweet of Nupz leaving food 4 Mayu with letter

kan't wait to read more na !!

-Linu
Edited by .PINK. - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
part 3
OMG when u keep saying Samrat waz about to have a heart attack 🤣🤣🤣
OMG I just burst into laughter!!🤣
sope when he found Mayu awaked Sammy waz bout 2 get heart attack 🤣🤣
n den Sayank went down 2 have breakfast
Mr.Bhushan had 2 go n den 🤣
Sammy sed he will even eat poison frm Gunjanz handz 🤣
n Nupz Mayu dono krazzy hai !!
Nupz holding butter knife 🤣 n Gunjan preventz Nupz frm doing a murder with BUTTER KNIFE🤣🤣
awww but MayUrz fight got seious n Mayu waz being soo rude 2 her
n she went 2 room crying !!!
awww y does she alwayz getz rejection?? every1 should love her na !!
shezz bestest!!
on other hand Mayu felt bad dat he waz being rude 2 her
OMG I kan't believe it 😳
n Nupz trying to open lift with bagzz n Mayu tried to help her
but she refused he sed sorry n she gave him attitude 😆
Mayu shocked!!!
den Nupz admiring herself in mirror Gunjan asked her y she alwayzz annoyed @ Mayu n Nupz almost got heart attack 🤣 n didn't want 2 talk about him
in other hand Mayu supeRRR mad!
n den he sed wait n watch wat he'll do with Nupz
wonder wat he'll do😲Sammy scared 4 Nupz me too 😆
just love love love reading diz part
-Linu
 
Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
lol finally Sayank going 2 work n Mayu didn't wanna get up 😆
n when dey came down Nupz asked Sammy y hez going without breakfast !!
OMG diz line
 
hey bhagwaan utha le..utha le in dono ko..mujhe nahi of course abhi chashmish se mujhe bohot kuch kehna baki hai" 🤣
 
bestest line of diz part🤣
I couldn't stop reading it over n over again 🤣
 
n den Mayu 4got file n went home Nupz slipped in his armzz 😍
n he noticed how beautiful she'zz na !! 😳
kitna pyara part tha 😍
n he even got her thankzz 😆
 
awww but I REALLI REALLI wanna know Nupz past na !!!
n Nupz face appearing 2 Mayu when he closes his eyezz😍
kitna beautiful part hai na !!
but da chanda ka tukra part waz 🤣 Sayank best na !!🤣
kan't wait to read next!!!
-Linu
 
 
Posted: 12 years ago
Wao superb update
but Nupur behaviour is confusing me
thanks for pm 
cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
part 5
NAHINNN I kan't believe I caught up with diz FF
now kant read further😭
waise diz part waz chooo maiCALLL na Taffy *candy*:D
sope Nupz
going to Mayuz room to give him hiz phone bakk n den Mayu waz shirtless n only in trouser n den she slipped Mayu of corse catched her 😍 kitna amazinG eyelock tha
n den Sammy came 🤣 saying yeh kya horaha hai 🤣
shoo y did he had 2 come
lol Mayu told Sammy dat she shouldnt of sed dat in front of Nupz she might b hurted n den Sammy wondering wat happened 2 Mayu n y he waz acting like diz
n n n den MayUr stuck in lift😍n Nupz screaming so Mayu pinned her in lift ☺️
n den Nupz runz away frm him :(
n Dia getting married to Benji gr88 na !
n when Mayu came Nupz goes out
n dat bothered Mayu sooo much ! n he asked Sammy dat he waznt dat bad dat peepz would leave when he comezz !! n Sammy wonderzz if Mayu iz falling in love with Nupz
all I am curious about iz Nupz past
n in end YYY does Nupz say she hatez Mayu soo much :(
I mean I still dunno y she hatezz him so much na :(
plez plezz plezz plezz continue ASAP na Taffy
love ya tonzz sis 🤗
-Linu

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