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Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated (Page 40)

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woow jwalamukhi , you have written it very well, its going interesting. looking forward for your next update now!

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awesome parts 
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heyy.. when will u be updating this one.. cnt wait 2 read d nxt part.. plz update as soon as u can :)

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Waiting for the next update brother... Smile

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awesome parts 
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              THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 10

Geet's house...

Rano's fears increased when she found out that geet was not there even with mallika and radhika...she ran to the temple..but the pandit there said that geet didn't came to the temple that day...her heart beat increased...she started sweating profusely thinking about teji and radheshyam's reaction when they find out about geet missing...

rano: geet kaha gaya hogi..kabhi aisa nahi gaya...raath ho chuki hey...bhagwan meri geet ki raksha karna...ab kaha doondo mein usse...agar teji ya bapuji ko patha chal gaya tho...

the thought itself made her heart weak...rano reached home ...teji and radheshyam were discussing some land issues...rano lowered her head and started walking towards her room to inform mohionder about geet missing...just then radheshyam called her...

radheshyam: bahu...zara geet ko bhulao...

rano throat became dry due to fear...he nodded and rushed to her room...mohinder who was busy in working on some files looked up and saw rano crying and locking the door...he threw files aside and came near rano...

mohinder: kya hua...tum ro kyu rahe ho...

rano: ji...geet..ghar mein nahi hey...pattha nahi kaha gayi hey..mein unke dosth ke ghar aur mandir mein bhi dekh ke aaya... waha pe bhi nahi hey...mujhe bahuth darr lagraha hey...

before she could complete her words mohinder slapped her tight...rano got shocked...

mohinder: kya kar rahe ho tum ghar pe...18 saal ki beti kya kar rahi hey..kaha jaa rahi hey...kya tum ithne bhi khayal nahi raksakthi...ab kaha doondo mein unhe...agar papa ko patha chalega..woh hum theeno ko mardega...

rano looked at him with tears in her eyes...just then radheshyam again called rano asking for geet...rano and mohinder looked at each other with a horrified face...

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Maan could not say anything after that...he sat in the car and drove towards their village.Through out the journey geet sat silent looking away from maan to hide her tears. maan looked at her..her silence is killing him...his heart shattered when she cried..but still he was helpless in relieving her from sorrow...when they reached temple..geet asked maan to stop the car...maan stopped the car and looked at her in confusion...

geet: mein yaha se khudh chale jaathi hu...agar koi hume saath dekhliya tho ..gadbad hojayega...

having said these words she got down from the car...and started to walk...

maan: geet...

geet stopped ..still facing her back towards maan...she was surprised to hear her name from him...but her sorrow was so great that she was not in a position to think about that...she tried to leave that palce as soon as possible..because she was scared about herself...that she might breakdown before him and confess her feelings to him...

maan: tum sunna nahi chahthi kal rath mein tumhara ghar kyu aaya...

geet remained silent...tears rolled down her eyes...as it became very hard to control herself when maan was speaking to her in that low voice...

maan: bolo geet...

geet couldnpot take anymore..she shook her head in disapproval and started running from there leaving heart broken maan...maan tried to stop her..but his attempts were invain...

maan: chala gaya...bina jawab dekhe...aaqir kya hey uske dil mein...woh pyaar mujhse kar rahi hey..ya maan ke naam se...samajh nahi araha hey...

he just kept looking at geet who disappeared in that darkness of night...he came near his car and sat inside thinking about geet and her complicated behaviour...then he looked around...it was dark...

maan:mein bhi na...geet ko iss raath mein akhele jaane diya...patha nahi woh safely ghar pahuncha ya nahi...mujhe jaana hoga geet ke saath...

As the route was narrow..he left the car at the temple and started walking in the route in which geet went earlier...After walking for some distance maan got shocked ...when he saw geet surrounded by four men in drunken state trying to touch her...geet stood shivering...with sweat all over her body...when she was about to scream one of them closed her mouth forcefully...

maan's anger reached heights when he saw someone toughing geet..his geet...

without wasting a second he approached there and twisted the man's hand who was holding geet...geet stood speechless due to shock...maan broke the man hand trying to touch geet...in about 5 min he beat them black and blue... leaving all of them with their legs/hands/neck/ribs broken...

then he reached geet...geet hugged maan out of fear and became unconscious due to shock...

maan: geet...ankhe kholo...ankhe kholo...

maan cursed himself for letting her go in that night...what if something had happened to her...that thought itself made his heart weak...he carried geet in his arms  and came near his car...he made geet to lie in the back seat and drove the car towards his house...

when he reached his house..he saw nainatara and adi standing outside waiting for him...

maan: mein  sabke samne geet ko andher nahi leke jaasaktha...unnecessary questions pochenge...ab kya karu..kaise geet ko andher leke jao...

when naiantara and adi saw maan's car they came running towards the car...maan came out from the car hurriedly trying to prevent then from seeing geet who was lying unconscious in back seat...

naiantara: maan...yeh kya kiya tumne..agar bahar jaa rahe hey tho kamsekam ek call karsakthe na...patha hey mein kithna pareshan hogayi tumhare liye...

adi: maan aaj kal tum bahuth irresponsible ho rahe ho...dekho tumhare didi kaise ro rahe hey...

said these words he winked at maan...maan smiled...weakly as he was tensed about geet's condition...

nainatara: adi..aap chup hojayiye...mere bhai kabhi irresponsible nahi hey...bas kaam mein phas gaya hey...aur haan agar dubara aap mere bhai ko aisa bhola tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...maan tum andher chalo...

adi smiled at his wife's concern for her brother...

maan: didi aap jayiye..mein bas thodi dher mein aatha hu..car ko shed mein rakh ke...

nainatara nodded and went inside along with adi...maan sighed in relief...He then carried geet in his arms and silently reached his secret escaping spot which he used to use to get out from his house whenever he wished to see geet...maan carefully climbed carrying geet...and finally reached his room...

After reaching the room...maan made geet to lie on bed...he gave necessary treatment and spread blanket over her...he sat beside her caressing her forehead...when he got convinced that geet is safe...he climbed down again from the window to enter the house through main door...

although maan sat near the dining table his thoughts were on geet...it became difficult for him to sit and eat when his love and life was in unconscious state...maan stood up suddenly from his chair...nainatara and adi looked at him in confusion...

maan: didi...mein bahuth tak chuka hu...khana khane ka mood bilkul bhi nahi hey...mein room mein jaake so jatha hu...

having said these words maan rushed into his room closing the door behind him and locking it...he sighed in relief...and looked at the bed...he was surprised to see moon light falling on geet making her angelic face to glow...lost in her beauty he came near the bed and sat beside her...he kept looking at her without an eyeblink...

he came back to his senses when he heard nainatara knocking the door...saying.."maan darwaza kholo"...

maan held his head thinking about his sister..saying.."yeh didi bhi na" .he then quickly covered geet with blanket and opened the door...nainatara was holding a glass of milk and a bowl of fruit salad...seeing maan she smiled and said..."khali pet se sona nahi chahiye..isliye doodh leke aayi hu...chalo yeh dhoodh peelo aur yeh fruits bhi"

having said these words she tried to enter his room to keep milk and fruit salad on his table...but maan stopped her saying..."didi mein leke jaatha hu..aap kyu.kasht le rahe hey..aap jayiye...jiju aap keliye intezaar karthe honge..."

nainatara looked at maan in confusion...and said " aaj tumhe ho kya gaya hey maan...kyu mujhe bhaga rahe ho?"

maan rolled his eyes and tried to manage the situation...

maan: mein appko bhaga raha hu..nahi tho..bas..bahuth raath hogaya na..isliye...

nainatra smiled...and said "tho teek hey...doodh peena..bhool na math..aur fruits bhi khana"

maan nodded...nainatra smiled ...patted his cheek and left...maan sighed in relief and immediately closed the door...

he then came near geet and sat beside her holding her hand in his hand tightly...he kept looking at her and slept there itself...


                                                                                                        to be continued...




Edited by jwalamukhi - 23 June 2011 at 3:59am

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