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Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated (Page 35)

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Beautiful update. Maan now need to use his brain to figure out why geet wrote his name. Am sure he is smart enuf. Loving sweet gal jasmine..

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Beautiful update ! !
Cant wait for the mission impossible !!
Continue soon . .

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Part 9

As geet started coming near them maan tried to walk away from that place before geet could see him. But jasmine held his fingers so tightly saying.."bhaiyya dekho geet didi aarahi hey"

Maan not knowing what to do just gave a smile to her. Geet saw maan standing with jasmine.

geet: yeh tho wahi admi hey...woh jasmine ke saath kya kar raha hey..abhi dekhthi hu...

said these words geet came running towards them...When maan saw geet he turned to other side and closed his face with hand...jasmine jumped excitingly and hugged geet...

jasmine: didi aap kal kyu nahi aayi

geet was not at all listening to jasmine. She was just looking at maan in suspicion who was covering his face...

geet: jasmine...ek min..tu yaha pe ruk mein abhi aathi hu...

she then went to other side and stood infront of maan crossing her arms over chest...when no sound was heard maan removed his hand and got shocked on seeing geet infront of him...he gave a smile in embarrassment...

geet: aap kaun hey...aur aapko jasmine se kya kaam hey...kal kya karne aaya tha meri ghar...

maan rolled his eyes not knowing what to answer...

geet: kahi aap bachche ko kidnap karne wala tho nahi...

maan was shocked to hear those words from geet...

maan: nahi..nahi...

geet: tho aap kaun hey aur meri ghar kyu aaya hey?

maan: dekhiya aap mujhe galath samaj rahe hey..

geet: achcha...to phir bathayiye app kyu gus gaya mere ghar ke andher...

maan: woh..mein..woh..mein...

jasmine came near them and asked geet innocently...

jasmine: didi..aap yeh bhaiyya ko jaanthe hey...didi yeh bhaiyya bahuth achche hey...mujhe khelne keliye appne mobile bhi diya...

geet: jasmine mein ne mana kiya thana tujhe...ajnabee se baath karne keliye...tho kyu liya unse yeh phone...

she took mobile from jasmine and gave it to maan...jasmine got angry and sat on the rock...with a crying face...geet turned towards maan...

geet: ab bathaiye...kaun hey aap...agar nahi bathaya mein saare gao valo ko awaaz dethi hu..aur woh sab aapke mu se sach nikalvayenge...kal aap ne mere ghar mein guss gaye...aap behosh the..isliye mein ne kuch nahi kaha kisi se bhi..lekin aaj aap yeh masoom bachchi ko cell  phone dikha kar kya karne jaa rahe the...

maan could not take any more...he decided to tell the truth whatever may happen...

maan: bas bahuth hogaya...aap patha nahi kya kya soch rahe hey mere baare mein...ab kya hey..aap ko sach bolna hey...kal raath mein...

then suddenly jasmine started crying holding her stomach...she fell on the ground and started crying loudly...

geet and maan ran to her ...

geet and maan : jasmine kya hua...

jasmine: didi pet mein bahuth dard ho raha hey...

geet with tears in eyes looked at maan in suspicion...

geet: kya khilaya inko aapne...behosh karne keliye...

maan got angry with her words...

maan: chup...chup..agar dubara tera mu khul gaya na...patha nahi mein kya karunga tujhe..chup hojao...

geet got scared with maan's anger...she kept hand over her mouth and started sobbing silently...

maan took jasmine in his arms ...he kept asking questions to jasmine that where she is suffering more pain...

maan: jasmine beta..kal raath ko kya kaaya apne...

jasmine: kuch nahi..bas doodh piya tha...

maan: pehle kabhi aisa pain hua...

jasmine nodded saying "no"...

geet looked at maan in confusion...

geet: kya aap doctor hey?

maan: haan..aur tum rone ki bagair waha jaake inke ghar walon ko bhulao...jao...

geet ran to jasmine naani's house...but to her surprise the house was locked...She came back to jasmine...

geet: naani kaha hey...jasmine...

jasmine: *crying* naani aaj subha mujhe yaha chodke...doosra gao gaya hey..kuch kaam keliye...

geet: hey bhagwaan ab hum kya kare...(crying loudly)

maan checked jasmine and tentatively diagnosed that she may be suffering with appendicitis

maan: mujhe lagtha hey inko town le jaana padega...jithna ho sake uthna jaldhi...

geet: kya hua jasmine ko...koi khathra hey kya...

maan didn't gave any answer.. he called his driver to bring the car...His driver arrived within 5 min...maan then told driver to contact jasmine parents and inform them about her illness...maan took jasmine into the car...he then turn towards geet who was standing  and crying...

maan: dekh kya rahe ho...baito ghaadi mein...

geet without saying a word sat in car taking jasmine into her arms...she kept praying to lord krishna to save jasmine...maan drove the car towards the near by town...on their way he called his close friend and colleague Dr. Kailash and explained him about the jamine's condition...geet looked at him in surprise and shock...But in all this she was unaware that he was maan...

On reaching the hospital maan took jasmine in his arms and ran towards emergency..geet followed him...just then kailash came before him and both entered emergency room...geet was not allowed and she sat outside praying to the lord...

After doing ultrasonography they finally diagnosed it as appendicitis...

Kailsah: maan ab kya kare...

maan: kya kare matlab...surgery shuru karo...

kailash: lekin tum keh rahe ho ki iss bachchi ke saath unka parents nahi aaye hey..tho hum surgery kaise karenge unke permission ke bina...

maan thought for a second...

maan: kailash mein pura jimmedari le letha hu...tu surgery shuru kar...

kailash: are u sure...

maan: yes iam...

kailash...then made all arrangements for surgery...maan signed all the papers required...geet sat outside crying and praying...maan too joined kailash in operation theater...laparoscopic surgery was done and it was successful...maan sighed in relief after surgery...he thanked kailash and came outside...he then saw geet sitting near the idol of krishna leaning her head against it...with tears in eyes...he then recalled his rude behavior towards her and felt hurt...he was ashamed of himself for behaving in a such a way...he walked slowly towards geet and gave her water bottle...

geet turned back and looked at him...she was tensed...

geet: kaisa hey jasmine ko...

maan: ghabrana ke koi zaroorath nahi..ab woh teek hey...thodi dher mein hosh aayega...

geet sighed and wiped her tears thanking the lord...she then looked at maan

geet: aap ne jasmine ke jaan bachayi...thank you very much...mujhe maaf kijiye aap ko galath samajne keliye...lekin mujhe yeh nahi samaj araha hey ki aap kal mere ghar mein aaya kyu...

just then jasmine parents and nanni came to hospital...jasmine's nanni ran towards maan and fell on his feet...

naani: maan babu...aap bade dilwale hey..hum jaise chote log keliye aap khudh hi aakar meri bachchi  ki jaan bachayi...

geet who was crying till then got shocked and looked at maan in surprise when she came to know that he was maan...maan noticed the change in geet's behavior...
geet kept looking at maan without an eyeblink...

maan made jasmine's naani to stand, wiped her tears and said..."aap aisa math kahiye ...mein apna farz nibhaya..aap jaake jasmine ko dekhlijiye...meine kailash se baath kiya...aur mein ne saare arrangements karvaya...apap yaha aramse ruk sakthe hey..agar koi zaroorath ho tho mujhe call kijiye..."

maan then gave his number and turned towards geet...jasmine's family thanked maan and left to see jasmine...

geet was still in shock...she was looking at maan with tear filled eyes...she was speechless...her love...her life..was standing before her...she never in her dreams expected this to happen...

maan slightly patted her shoulders...geet came back to her senses...and felt embarrassed to look at him...she was on cloud nine...her heart was dancing in joy...a small smile came over her lips...she totally forgot to ask the questions regarding that previous night's incident...

maan: aapke gharwale shayad aapkeliye pareshan hue honge..tho ab hum chale...raath  hone wala hey...

she looked at him not knowing what to do...just the word maan changed everything...without saying a word she simply followed maan and sat in the car beside him. Maan started driving the car...geet  sat silently feeling and enjoying the presence of her love...maan kept looking at her and her change in attitude...

maan: (monologue) mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha hey...when she was not  knowing that my name is maan...she behaved like a stranger...but when she came to know that iam maan...her behavior changed completely...geet mujhse pyaar kar rahi hey ya nahi...agar pyaar kar rahi hey tho...why she is behaving as stranger...iska jawaab kaise milega mujhe...

geet closed her eyes...then flashes of mallika's words came into her mind regarding maan's engagement...geet who was in dreamland suddenly felt like she was in hell..she felt suffocated...an unkown fear and pain filled her heart making her weak..tears flowed continuously from her eyes...maan stopped the car when he saw tears in her eyes...

maan: kya hua? aap ro kyu rahe ho?

geet : kuch nahi...mujhe jaldi ghar pahunchna hey...(hiding her face from maan)

He wanted to hold her in his embrace,wipe her tears ...but couldnot...he doesn't know anything about her...her feelings...he cursed himself for his helplessness...and started driving...

geet (monologue): tu kya soch rahe hey geet...woh kisi aur ke ho chuke hey...unke baare mein ab sochna bhi galath hey...apne aapko kabo mein rak...apne pyaar ko aisa hi apne dil mein daba ke rakh..usko bahar math aane dena...

She turned her face away from maan hiding her tears...maan noticed her crying...but couldnot stop her...he was not knowing why she was crying...he then stopped the car before dhaba...

geet wiped her tears and looked at him...

maan: kuch khalo...uske baad hum chalenge...

geet: mujhe bhook nahi hey...

maan: subah se tum ne kuch nahi khaya...bhook kaise nahi ho sakthi hey..chalo bahar aao aur kuch khao...

geet:  mujhe bhook nahi hey...

maan: dekhiye mein samaj saktha hu...aap kyu mujhse naraaz hey...pehle khaana khayiye...phir mein aapko bathatha hu ki mein apke ghar kyu aaya

geet: mujhe bhook nahi hey...

maan: achcha teek hey...pehle mein batha hi detha hu...mein kal raath...

geet: mujhe kuch bhi bathane ka zaroorath nahi...bas mujhe ghar pahunchadijiye...

Maan could not say anything after that...he sat in the car and drove towards their village...



                                                                               to be continued...


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the precap...mission impossible will come in  next update...plz excuse me for this ...

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