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Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated (Page 28)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Maan went to so much of pain just to see his Pari.
But glad it was paid off at the end.
Wat an early morning scene. Love it.
ooh picky Lucky felo been chased as thief.
But thank god he manage to escape.
COuldnt imagine his situation if got caught.
I think its maan saying I Love you. I think so..
Eager to read bof their reaction
thx for the pM..Update soon plz...

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Update it soon yaar...

cant wait..Clap

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
lovely part

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
awesome update yaar. maan ke pyaar ki hadd.

when will geet know about maan that he is maan.

precap is interesting and pls update soon.
thanks for pm and sorry for late comment just been busy working and couldn't read

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
              THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

                                                        THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 7

Geet came near maan and gave support to stand and made him sit on the chair...maan was lost in her eyes...

geet: dard bahuth horaha hey kya?

maan was silent as he was lost himself in her most beautiful eyes...

geet slightly touched his shoulder...which sent chills all over his body...

geet: aap teek tho hey na?

maan closed his eyes and enjoyed every moment of her presence...

geet (monologue): yeh kuch bol kyu nahi raha hey...shayad sadma lagaya hoga...

Just then rano knocked the door...geet started to shiver...she dragged maan onto the bed and covered him with blanket...she made sure everything was ok and then opened the door...came outside... closing the door behind...

maan: ab patha tho chal gaya tum kaha rehthe ho...ab zyada waqt nahi lagega tumhe apna banane mein...

said these words he opened the window...and carefully escaped...from geet's house...

rano observed geet nervousness...

rano: kya hua beta...tabhiyath to teek hey na...

geet: ha..ha,..maa..mein teek hu...

rano: agar teek hey tho...yeh paseena kya hey geet tere chehra per...

geet: maa mein teek hu...

rano: teek hey...jaldhi tayyar hoke neeche aajana...aaj savithri devi aarahae hey...shaadhi ke tareeq pakka karne keliye...

Rano's words hit hard geet's heart...at that moment she felt terible...hiding her tears from rano...she nodded and again came back to her room...she broke down completely...she cried until she remebered about the stranger...she then wiped her tears and ran to her bed...but the bed was empty...she looked at window...it was opened and a rope was hanging ...

geet: lagtha hey chala gaya...chalo achcha hua...jo mujhe karna tha mein ne karliya...woh jo bhi ho...bhagwan aap hi unka nadath karna

geet sighed and went to get ready with a heavy heart...

Nainatara was nervous as maan was not there in his room...since morning she went to maan's room more than 20 times and was trying to his mobile continuously...Adi was pacifying her saying that maan is not a kid and he will come back...but nainatara was very much worried about her brother..

.just then maan entered the house...nainatara ran towards him and started crying when she saw wounds all over his body...

nainatara: yeh kya halath bana kar rakh diya maan...kaha gaya tha raath ko...yeh chot kaise lage...

maan: didi...didi...ek min...pehle aap shanth hojayiye...mujhe kuch nahi hua bas bike se gir gaya tha...woh bhi aaj subah...

adi: maan raath ko tum kaha the

maan: raath ko..jiju..mein apne hi kamre mein tha...

Adi looked at maan in suspicion...maan understood that adi didn't believe his words..to divert adi's attention...maan started pretending...

maan: ouch...bahuth pain ho raha hey 

nainatara got worried...she gave an angry glare to adi...

nainatara: adi...aap bhi na...mere bhai bichara...unko chot lag gayi..aur aap sawal pe sawal puche jaa rahe ho...

adi: nainatara ...woh mein...

nainatara: ab bas..bahuth hogaya...maan..tu jaa...apne kamre mein jaake aram karo.. 

she then turned towards adi

nainatara: aur aap..doctor ko phone kijiye...

she then took maan to his room...adi sighed and smiled looking at brother and sister...

After doctor's visit...maan took promise from nainatara that she will not tell anything about the accident to their father...Nainatara agreed and left his room...By then lucky came...lucky had tears in eyes when he saw maan...maan smiled...

maan: arey lucky tu..ro kyu raha hey...

lucky: aur mein kya kartha...agar kal tum pakda gayi tho..patha nahi kya hojatha...

maan: thanks lucky...jo kaam tune kiya...uskeliye...

lucky: chod yaar...thanks..vanks..kuch math bolo...tumhare liye jaan dene keliye bhi mein tayyar hu...

maan smiled and hugged lucky...

lucky: waise ladki ka kya hua? mil nahi paya na

maan: nahi lucky...ladki ka patha milgaya...

lucky: sachchi

maan nodded...

lucky: kya tune unse baath kiya?

maan nodded...

lucky: i love you kehdiya

maan: i love you?

lucky: iska matlab tune i love you nahi bola...arey yaar kithna achcha mouka miss kardiya tune...

maan: lucky...agar mein unse i love u kehdiya hothana...mera love story ka the end hogaya hotha...

lucky: arey yaar aisa hey tho tera love story kab aage badega...

maan: i love you...zaroor kahunga...lekin abhi nahi...

lucky: phir kab?

maan: bahuth jaldh...waise woh ghar kiska hey...jisme mein gaya tha

lucky: woh radheshyam ka ghar hey...(lucky was shocked)...ek min...kahi woh ladki radhe shyam ki ghar mein tho nahi

maan: usse ghar mein hey...

lucky: maan...bhool jao...yeh pyaar vyaar sab...yeh nahi hosaktha...

maan got confused...

maan: kyu?

lucky: maan...tumhare aur woh radheshyam ke parivaar ke beech salon se dushmani chal raha hey...yeh baath shayadh hari chacha ne tumse chupaya taaki..tera padayi keliye...radheshyam apne pothi ko maar bhi dethe hey lekin iss ghar ki bahu banne harkeez nahi manenge...upar se woh tej...woh insaan nahi jaanwar hey...aur tumhara paapa bhi...kabhi nahi manenge...mere baath sun...dur raho uss parivaar se

maan got disappointed...but then...

maan: lucky...chahe kuch bhi hojaye...woh ladki ko mein apna banake hi rahunga...

said these words maan went to washroom...

lucky: tu kuch bhi karlega...lekin jab hari chacha ko patha chalega ki mein tumhara madath kar raha hu...uss din mera aakhri din hoga...(with crying face)

geet's house

savithri devi came to fix the wedding date...she went to geet's room and gave a gift box to her...geet looked at her in confusion...

savithri: yeh tere liye hey...aapke hone wale usne bheja hey...

geet turned her face aside in pain...but savithri misunderstood that geet was blushing...

savithri: iss mein sharmane ki kya baath hey...chalo gift ko open karo

geet opened the gift box reluctantly...it was a cell phone...just then the mobile started ringing...

savithri: phone utao...aur baath karo ..jay hi hey...

said these words rano and savithri came out of the the room leaving geet alone...she simply kept the phone aside without answering it...again the mobile started ringing...

savithri and rano came outside and were talking about the gift which jay had sent...tej listened to their conversation...he became angry...he came near savithri...

tej: dekhiye..shaadhi ke baad aap kuch bhi karsakhthe ho...lekin yaha nahi...samjhe...

savithri devi looked at tej in fear...tej then went to geet's room...geet stood up on seeing tej...tej looked at the phone on the table...he picked it up and answered...

Jay: hello...darling...tumhe patha nahi...tumne kya zaadhu kiya mujh pe...jab se tumhe dekha hu,,,mera dimaag karna bandh hogaya...ek baar tujhe mere bahhon mein lena chahtha hu...aur iss duniya ke saamne zhor se kehna chahtha hu ki...I LOVE YOU...
 
tej was fuming in anger after listening to jay's words...geet stood aside silently not knowing what to do...
  

                                                                                            to be continued...


next- maan meets jasmineShockedSmileEmbarrassed




Edited by jwalamukhi - 24 May 2011 at 5:24am

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yippie...Partyi am first againEmbarrassed


awesome update bro...or should i rather say a romantic one...Winkloved maan and geet's convoEmbarrassedEmbarrasseddo cont fast...now who's this jasemine????AngryAngryAngrywaiting for the next updateEmbarrassed


Edited by mansi95 - 24 May 2011 at 5:56am
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wow awsome one yar..
loved it ... 
do continue soon 

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he he loved it Tongue

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