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Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated (Page 11)

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Veryyy interesting!!!
Poor geet!!
But maan is sweet!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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lovely vm bro...
is the tune from the movie okkadu??felt soConfused

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       THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

Part 3

Jay forgot his own words when he saw geet. He was mesmerized by her innocent beauty. he kept looking at her without an eye blink.Savithri devi hit him lightly with elbow to bring him back to senses.

Savithri stood up and sat near geet...asking her name and other hobbies...jay started to feel restless with each passing second...an urge to talk to geet started to increase...but savithri devi didn't gave any chance to him to talk to geet...geet sat there lost in her own world...

savithri: ladki hume bahuth pasand aaya...hum...ghar jhake...

jay without wasting a second...said..."mujhe ladki pasand hey"

savithri devi got shocked...geet sat there lifeless...with no expression...

jay: mere taraf se haan hey...(he smiled looking at geet)

savithri devi felt very happy...she decided to finalize the wedding there itself before jay changes his mind...

savithri: tho hum shaadhi ka taree ke baare mein baath karthe hey...

mohinder and rano stood there confused...

mohinder: bura math maniye...humare ghar mein sabhi faisla humaari bapuji karthye hey...iss shaadhi ka baath bhi ...woh bahuth zaroori kaam mein baahar gaye hue hey...thodi hi dher mein ajjayenge...tab tak aap...

savithri devi understood the situation...

savithri: koi problem nahi...hume ladki bahuth pasand aaya...hum shaadhi pakke karwake hi yeha se jaayenge...

said these words savithri looked at jay...he was busy in drooling over geet...

savithri(monologue): hey bhagwaan..iss jay ko kya huwa...aisa dekh raha hey geet ko...mein achchi tarah samaj sakthi hu...iska evil intentions...geet achchi ladki hey...zaroor mera laparvah pothe ko teek karsakh tha hey...tab tak jay ka asli character sab se chupana hoga...warna ithna achcha rishtha haath se nikal jaayega...

savithri: aap geet ko andhar leke jaayiye...

jay gave an angry glare to savithri...and went outside...

after sometime mohinder's bapuji...radheshyam came along with mohinder's son tej...they looked very happy...looking at his father mohinder got scared and immediately stood up...

mohinder: savithri ji...yeh humara bapuji...

After greetings...they sat to talk about wedding...

radheshyam: savithri ji...hume bahuth kush ki hum aap jaise achche log ke saath rishtha mila hey...sabse bade baath yehi hey ki...aap ka potha ammmricca mein kaam kartha hey...mein chahtha hu ki meri pothi iss gao mein sabse pehli ladki hona chahiye...jo shaadhi karke ammricca jayegi...

savithri(monologue): ammricca...oh america...so ..yeh log NRI ko prefer kartha hey...shukar hy jay US mein rehtha hey...ab iss shaadhi ka koi problem nahi hoga...

radheshyam: hum apne beti ki kushi keliye sazb kuch dhenge...waise hamare hone wala damadh kaha hey...

savithri: ab tak yahi tha...shayad bahar gaya hoga...

radheshayam: tej beta ...zar dekhna...bahar jaake...

Outside jay was busy in oggling at the village girls...suddenly he startled with a touch on his shoulder...

tej: jay...sab log aapka intezar karrahe hey andher...chaliye...

jay tried hard to control his fear of being caught...he silently followed jay inside...radheshyam felt happy about jay...he instantly agreed for marraige...rano looked helplessly at mohinder...to ask for geet's approval...

mohinder: bapuji...ek baar geet se poochke...

radheshaym gave him an angry glare...mohinder got scared and stood silent...

radhesyam: hamare tarf se haan hey...aap delhi jaake shaadi ke taariq pakka karvayiye...

savithri and jay felt very happy...they thanked whole family and left...

after they left radheshyam started laughing wickedly...rano and mohinder got confused...

radheshyam: rano...aaj tum sab tarah ki mitai banao..aaj kushi ka din hey...

mohinder and rano thought that his happiness was due to geet's wedding...

radheshyam: aaj mein bahith kush hu...aaj mera sapna sach hogaya...uss haripraksh ka naak katgaya...

mohinder and rano got shocked...then they understood the real reason for his happiness...

radheshyam: kithna shor kiya apna bete ki baare mein...apna dosth ke baare mein...aaj sabke saamne uska bete ka mangini ruk gaya...sabse bade baath yeh hey ki...woh brij ..jo usse apna dosth samajh tha tha...unki beti,,,bhaag gayi mangini se...ab mera dil ko sukun mila hey...mein dikhavunga ki shaadi kaise hotha hey...apne pothi ke shaadhi karvake...dhoom dham se...

After listening to his words mohinder and rano got scared about geet's future...because of his rivalry he want to do geet's marraige...but none of them have courage to stand against him...they prayed silently to god to help their daughter...

maan's house

After the engagement disaster...hariprakash became depressed...especially thinking about brij's dhoka ...and radheshyam...he knew that radheshaym never leaves any oppurtunity to insult him...this caused him more depression...

on other hand maan was not at at all affected...he was happy as he was before...but hariprakash condition is scaring him...he tried his level best to bring hari out of that condition...but hari was not at all listening to maan...

maan: deekhiya paapa...jo hua...so hua...dubara iss ghar uss mangini ke baare mein kisi tarh ki baathein ya yaadein nahi hona chahiye...kyunki mein aapko iss halath mein nahi dekh saktha...

said these words maan left in anger...

                                                                     to be continued...


next...maan sees geetEmbarrassed


                                                                          


Edited by jwalamukhi - 12 May 2011 at 1:25am

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Nice update
Cnt wait for d nxt 1 tho. Hehe

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Nice update Clap
loved it

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nice update and hayee jay said yes to geet ab maan ka kya hoga. waise i have full faith in u that u will unite maaeetLOL. preety sure maan will be fida on geet at first sight.

thanks for pm an waiting for next partWink

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SUPERB   Clap

I'm quite apprehensive with the way Savithri tried to cover up Jay's true color Angry
She's only thinking of him not that innocent girl Angry & that Jay shaadi tai hui ki nahi he's busy ogling @ village girls *aaargh* Angry
I can't believe Radheshyam would stoop so low in the name of rivalry playing with the life Geet , his own blood *yuckDead*

Precap was Red Glow Cool
Loved the update & thanks for pm ... Smile

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