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FF-Milan abhi adha adhura hai...

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Hey friends I am starting a new ff milan abhi adhura hai ''.. kaisey hoga gopi aur ahem ka milan aur jigar aur rashi ki pyar bharey din...hey frnds do read my ff as i am expecting lots of comments from you...

Edited by stary_kajal - 06 May 2011 at 5:50am

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 welcome to forums...upadte soon...


 

 



Edited by cute_shona - 05 May 2011 at 9:44pm
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PART-1

In Switzerland Ahem is looking for gopi here and there and he is very worried about gopi. He asks many people about gopi but he is clueless'gopi is roaming here and there' Its evening there and ahem calls kokila and tells that he didn't find anywhere'. Kokila is very worried about gopi and angry on rashi' rashi is making faces' gopi is sitting on a bench its night. She is afraid of night and cold waves are blowing'.

Gopi: Lord Krishna please help me out, Please send ahem ji here'.

Ahem comes to hotel back and sees kokila, jigar and rashi..

Jigar: bro did u find gopi bhabi'

Ahem nodes his head. Kokila sees ahem...

Kokila: we have to inform police now...

rashi: but kakiji if police will come then we have to give gopi picture and that we dont have na from where we will get...

kokila sees rashi: First time you have talked something good...but from where we will get gopi vahu...

ahem: maa we have gopi passport we will show that picture to police..

kokila: ya that will be nice and tommorrow morning we will go to police and launch a complain...till then lord krishna will help her [she fold her hands].. ahem sees kokila...

 

In the night:

Some people come there and look at gopi.. Gopi feels afraid.. she stands up and start walking... People follow her.. she start walking fast, those people do the same... Gopi reaches to road, she was so confused and afraid that she didnt see the car and the car hits gopi...

Gopi shouts: ahem ji...

Ahem ek jhatkey sy uth jaata hai and shouts "gopi..." ahem breath is so fast and he is sweating... kokila comes there...

kokila: kya hua ahem dikra {son}...

ahem: kuch nahi maa, bura sapna tha...

kokila gives a glass of water to ahem: ahem tum chinta mat karo gopi vahu humhey mil jaayegi... chalo so jao...

ahem drinks water and goes to sleep but he is not able to sleep {sad la la BG music start}...

 

HospitalScene:

Doctors are examing gopi, gopi is unconscious... she is having problem in taking breath...doctor puts oxygen mask on her... Doctor comes outside... An person is standing here Mr. Oberoi {rohit roy} is standing there with her wife...

Doctor  {she is foreigner}: Well we have to take patient under observation for 24 hrs.. can't say anything... you can collect her bag and call her family members...

Mr Oberoi: okay {she looks at a lady, she is mansi joshi she is Mr. oberoi wife is serial, her name is mitali}...

Mitali: I see her bag if i can find something in her bag...

Mr Oberoi: ya go and see if u can find anything in her bag...

Mithali opens her bag she sees some clothes and a picture {wedding picture of ahem and gopi}... she calls akshat...

akshat oberoi: yes mithali what happened? this is hospital?

Mithali sees akshat: sorry, here i got something.. she gives pic to akshat. akshat sees it and she is shocked to see it...

akshat: "ahem modi" she is ahem wife...

mithali: akshat what happened? why are you so much shocked and why are you crying?

akshat have tears in his eyes : ahem.. my best friend mera jigari yaar...{ he hugs ,mithali}... i told u na about ahem... i got my frnd dear... hum college mey saath saath padtey they and u know were used to top in our class. phir mey yaha chala aaya aur ahem wahi india mey reh gaya...

mithali smiles: toh you should call him he  must bi worried about his wife...

akshat: but merey pass uska ph no nahi hai...

mithali founds a book...she opens it, she founds details of logan hotel and other details...she shows to akshat...

akshat: may be ahem is here and we can found him... akshat calls at hotel

Hotel Scene:

Receptionist: welcome to hotel olton { hey frnds i found this hotel name as i dnt know about it}

akshat: Can you please find out ahem modi residing in your hotel...

Receptionist: Yes sir ahem modi is in our hotel

Akshat: could you please connect my call to him

Receptionist connects his call to ahem. Ahem picks up the calls and he is shocked to listen...

Will ahem find gopi? will akshat and ahem get together?...

please friends do comments

 

 

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I like your fan fic, please continue soon.
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Hey kajal.
Thank god I managed to find this.

I totally loved ur 1st chapter

Do continue soon
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged

Please refrain urself from posting title all in caps.

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ayesha_78

Hey kajal.
Thank god I managed to find this.

I totally loved ur 1st chapter

Do continue soon


thanks dear so much...
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nafisa_blossoms

I like your fan fic, please continue soon.

thanks nafisa so much for ur lovely comment...

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