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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naz_Angel

overflowww...omg omg omg...i almost went with itLOL

beautifully written...Clap
 
 
as it touches the souls of the loveless...a wink of the eye sets the arrow in motion...WinkWinkWink
 
when a shy glance to her husband makes the arrow hit the bullseye...
 
and two small bites is all that it took...to fill the growing appetite in pammi's heart...
 
hope the shower of love...reaches all the hearts and drench them with joy ...they deserve
there was winking all over the place...loved to see pammi get emmotional...a husband feeding his wife is a beautiful gesture...

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chelsha

Lovely Sylvi,
The line i liked the most was,'to fill the growing appetite in Pammis heart.'
It describes Pammis longing for the love of her husband.
Her real hunger is not for the food but for his love.
Wa...wa...Superb Silvi.
yeah...pammi is craving for love...she wants her husband to be loving towards her...it was such a beautiful scene...
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by night13

It's a love which cannot be expressed or hidden fully.  It is said that if you keep trying to express it, then it will become just a sound and the feelings are lost.
 
Love Cannot Be Expressed In Words.
It Is Bigger Than The Universe,
Deeper Than The Ocean,
Innocent Than A Newborn Baby
And More Dangerous Than War!
 
Sometimes silence has more volume vs words.
Great take Syl!

hey you!...it is true..."actions speak louder than words"...i hope they develope TeMmi further...
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hamavand

Beautifully written Silvie...I too was touched by the scene...and after reading ur beautiful poetic version I was even more emotionally turned on by it...although not much of Maneet but the episode was good because it focused on the difference between the relationship between the two couples...actually it showed the difference between love among a rural and urban couple...
it was cute to see maaneet...that had just overcome one of their hardest tests...doing something to bring another couple closer...TeMmi were awsome...they have great chemistry too...
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet-is-best

Well-written againClapClapClap

Loved the Maaneet gestures with the bonus winksWinkWink and TeAmmi were cute, wish we had some sweet BG music for them tooDay Dreaming 

Even though not much of Maaneet, I felt their presence.  Geet had some extra color today.  Maybe thy will seal their lips tomorrowEmbarrassed
 
yes...need them to seal their lips together...and to each otherLOL


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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged

Lovely Syl,Smile

I loved the scene & U wrote it in such nice way.

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serenelove

Lovely Syl,Smile

I loved the scene & U wrote it in such nice way.

 
it has now become one of my favorite scenes Day Dreaming

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by serenelove

Lovely Syl,Smile

I loved the scene & U wrote it in such nice way.

 
it has now become one of my favorite scenes Day Dreaming
Mine also. though did not think will like someone else's scene like this

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