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maaneet FF... Matterz of heartz... note on pg 93

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hello guyz...
the name of ff is temporary might change it... if u guyz have any suggestion me waiting...
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enjoy...Tongue


                                     Matterz of Heartz  (Part 1)


Maan was working on his laptops for hours and now he was very tired and thought of going on a beach for a midnight walk this sure is going to relax his mind which was stuck in work for past few hours. He was walking on beach and cool water and cool sand was rolling under his feet, he felt really good and refreshing. Beauty of beach was more enhance by the moonlight, tiny sand particle were shining like diamond on beach. His eyes were wondering on a beach when he saw someone lying on the beach. Without thinking twice he ran towards the person praying him to be alive. He slowed down when he reach near the body and walk slowly with calculated steps. When he reach beside the body he realize it is a women. She was lying on her face water was touching half her body after every few seconds. She was wearing short skirt which was half wet. There was a large bottle of wine lying beside her. Praying in his heart for her well being he slowly turns her. When he saw her he was stun by her beauty. Even through her face was half covered with sand yet Maan had never seen anyone beautiful like her. With great care gently he rubs the sand off her face. He examines her and found out that she was breathing slowly. His pounding heart slows down when he realize that she is alive. He carried her in his arms and walked towards his beach house.

As he enters the beach house he called Mary and older woman came running out of room.

"Sir! Is everything alright?" she asked but when she saw girl in his arms horror struck her face.

"Who is she?", "What happen to her?", "Where did you find her?" Maan stop her from his looks before she ask zillion more questions without pause.

She become silence at once and waited for his instructions.

"Clean her and change her dress" Maan ordered her and walk towards his room and gently put her on bed.

He opened his cupboard and took out white kurta from it and hand it over to Mary and the walk out of the room once looking at the girl.

Maan the most intelligent business men and eligible bachelor of city always spend his weekends on his beach house away from the city and family. He has been Mr. lonely since his childhood because of his rich family. His mother is busy in her kitty party while his father never paid any attention to his family and is always busy making lots of money. He was only child yet he never gets attention from his parents he wants. He brought himself out of his past to present. Maan had been coming to this beach for years and he never saw anyone other Mary or himself on beach.

"What brought her here?" He thought.

His thoughts were broken by the voice of Mary.

"All done young sir" Mary informed him and went back to her room.

Maan went to his room and sat on sofa. Not for moment his eyes left the unconscious beautiful face.

"What brought her here?", "Why she was drinking?", "How could something go so bad in her life that she was in such a condition"

Judging by the look of girl she was not more nineteen. She was very beautiful and innocence was flowing out of her each pour.

She was peacefully sleeping like new born baby, her eye were framed by thick black lashes. Her fair complexion was perfectly complemented by long curly dark brown hairs.

He tore his eyes away from beautiful face and settles himself on sofa. He didn't want to go to other room in case the girl wakes up and need something.

He doesn't know what was pulling him towards the unconscious girl but the pull was very strong and he wasn't able stop himself. Maan didn't know himself when he fell asleep looking at girl's face only thing he knew was he had peaceful sleep tonight after many years.
to be continue...Smile
index:
part 1... pg 1
part 2... pg 5

part 3... pg 8
part 4... pg 11
part 5... pg 14
part 6... pg 17
part 7... pg 21
part 8... pg 26
part 9... pg 31
part 10...pg36
part 11...pg43
part 12...pg49
part 13...pg55
part 14...pg63
part 15...pg69
part 16...pg77
Part 17...pg84


Edited by somakazmi - 15 November 2011 at 7:06am

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nyc start..do continue soon n add me to ur pm list...

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Nice plot dear...So Maan found Geet in an unconscious state...wonder what happened to her?Do continue soon...thanxs for the pm n inform me when u update againSmile

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