Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2


Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2
Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2

Messy Li'l Raindrops, Last part : page 57 (Page 40)

-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ishara-

I love your ff like hell.
You write it beautifully.
You progress the story in a beautiful manner.
The story line itself is fab.
And the way you write dialogues is too good.
Best of luck wid exams & i am dying for the updates.
The update was super awesome as usual.
PM Me Please.
Thanx Ishara Big smile
Aww. Your Flattering me Tongue
Thanx so much for loving it and praising my work.

Aite. i sure will PM you. Big smile

-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Nista & karan.kritzkmh - i will update soon.
widin few days. My exams are a trouble Dead
-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged

Heya Ebiione Smile

Okay so i am back wid the updates of my FF. Actually i was supposed to update yesterday for Varsh. Sorry varshu. Here's the substitute for yesterday. TongueBut i cudnt update coz of my exams. Now finally they are over. *Phew* *Sighs* Big smile
And thanx to ya all my exams went pretty good. 

Thanx so much for the wishes guys Embarrassed

And CTC shall be up by tonight or tomorrow for sure Embarrassed

Enewaii, here's the update. *Long Waited Updated*
Hit The like button and lemme kno bout' it Smile


*Continued from the last line of last part* TongueLOL

Arohi gave him a confused look.
Arjun smiled at it and said "Arohi Aluwahlia, since we don't have a ride to go to the club, Would you spend your time with me ?  Here's a beautiful place around, so I want to show it to my special best friend. Can I ?"

Arohi giggled as she answered "Woah…So I get to see the gentleman in My Vamp eh? Now don't tell me that you did it all intentionally."

He gave a shy smile while she nodded in disbelief rolling her eyes. As he kept his hand on his hair, she nudged him and signaled him to move.
She asked " Where are we going actually ?" 

"Somewhere you haven't been before zombie !"

"Okayy…but where ??"

"Agar pehle hi batana hota to I wouldn't call it a surprise Kay ?"

"Arghh…All right ! Ab jaldi se leja mujhe ! Please !!"

"Okay Miss !"

After 15 mins walk Arjun and Arohi stopped. While Arohi checked the place around Arjun observed her and laughed out loudly !

"What? Why are you laughing at me like this Vamp ?"

"I am sure, you are thinking, What, he brought me here to show this rocks right ?"

"Mmm…As much as I'd like to deny , its true !"

Arjun again burst out laughing while she gave him a stern look.
Controlling his laughter he answered "Well, hold on Zombie. C'mon follow me !"

And he opened the gate of a house nearby. As he opened the gate she was completely confused. She was pretty desperate to know, what it actually she was. She couldn't figure out what was going on. All she could do was watch Arjun hold her hand and take her to a house which had lights off.

She shouted loudly "You know Arjun, I am not scared of darkness like typical girls, if you think I will get scared and tujhse chipak jaungi !"

"Chup kar looser. It would be so nice if you keep quiet !"

Arohi was about to say something which was interrupted by Arjun.
Switching the light on he spoke up "But when you gotta be awestruck for few mins looking around, I don't mind your chattering !"

And like Arjun said she had her jaws dropped till knees. She was totally shocked. All she could do was stare at the thing ahead of her.
And arjun did nothing but click her pics from all the possible angles he could !
After some mins of staring Arohi went forward and touched the bike in front of her. Oh yeah, it was a Harley Davidson. The Bike she had always dreamt for, the bike which she had always wanted to ride, the bike which was heavy as hell, the bike which She literally had crush on. Even though her dad was a multi-billionaire he couldn't get it coz of the rare availability.
And now when it was right there, in front of her, she was speechless.

To get her back to her senses, arjun had to pinch her hard.

"Ouchhh…What the F arjun ?? tune pinch kyun kiya ?"

"What then ? I obviously dun wanna spend whole night seeing your shocked-ugly-face !"

"You called me ugly !"

"No one except you is ugly here !"

" Yeah the other person is more ugly. Infact ugly would be an understatement. After all he looks worse than that right ?"

"Illusions.. I understand !"

"Talking too much about yourself huh ?"

" Shoot..Ab Em so hot that I can't get over myself !"

"Chi Arjun, you are such a gay. You didn't get any guy that you are falling for yourself ?"

Laughing off sarcastically he commented "What so ever, now lets cut this off. So Missy how's this surprise ? I know right, I am great !"

"Goss…Arjun, It seems like a dream. Is it True Man ? God. I..i..iii still can't believe my eyes. How on the earth did you do this ?

"Ever since I've known you, you are always telling me about, how you wish you had this bike, So just thought of giving a small gift to you."

"Whatt ??? This is my Gift ? Where did you bring it from ??"

"Yes. And don't worry. I've got one for me too. After all I wouldn't let you race alone ! And of you ask me where I brought it from, remember my uncle is a trader of bikes&cars at US. And it took me just few hours to convince him !"

Arohi hugged him like it was the end of the world. "Thanxx soo much Arjun…thank you so much. Not a single word can tell what I feel now, and how much it means to me. Its not the bike but your gesture that makes me feel on the top of the world !"

Arjun was too excited seeing his best friend happy. And he felt more wonderful knowing that he was the reason for it !
Breaking the hug he screamed up "C'mon zombie – one on one race. I am sure you will lose now. After all this bike is so heavy, I doubt you cane even hold it !"

"Hahaha…very funny !"

"Yeah yeah…lets see !"

"yeah we will see your loss !"

"Whatever, here's the key." He threw the key to her. All of a sudden Arohi made a confused and sad face. Arjun got a lil worried and asked her concerned "What happen zombie ?"

"You know I can't ride in this dress. I need a pant !"


Okay. This is it :)
And i know a very short update even after such a long wait. So Sorry Guys. But its actually like a filler episode TongueLOL 

I will update the next part pretty soon, which will be A Ride to remember ;]

For those pepz who dunno Harley Davidson - Its the best bike on the entire universe and which is very expensive and available only on The western countries only Big smile

Enewaii reviews Please ?How Was it ? Comment !!
I will update once you guys give enough comments LOLTongue

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aparna4karanika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
leme res frst

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Ruky07 Senior Member

Joined: 01 May 2011
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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Loved It
Ur a brilliant writer as you must know
Very cute part
Do update soon,great to hear ur exams went well.
Can't wait for CTC
Cheerio :)
.vrshn. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 January 2011
Posts: 9292

Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
thank you so much awii for such a cute and adorable update!
and love you so much!
 please stop asking me sorry...alright?

back to the update :D

 harley davidson???awesome!! whoa! the girl is real lucky!!
tell me one thing awii have you ever tried driving it??
i dont know much about bikes but who wouldnt know abt harley davidson??
arjun arjun arjun!! how could a guy get this cute?! he feels shy,he blushes,he wantedly does stupid things to take his best friend on a date!
wait...what should i call this date?? a race date?!
cant wait for more awii!!
i want to read the ride to remember asap!!
i know i'm being greedy but sole reason for it is your awesome words and they way you put them in your sentences! *okay i feel like i'm talking like a english teacher lol*
-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2595

Posted: 08 July 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aparna4karanika

leme res frst

ii am waiting Dii TongueLOL
-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2595

Posted: 08 July 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ruky07

Loved It
Ur a brilliant writer as you must know
Very cute part
Do update soon,great to hear ur exams went well.
Can't wait for CTC
Cheerio :)
Aw. Thanxx so much Ruky Embarrassed
So Are you. Your FFs Rock :D
I guess CTC will be up tomorrow Shocked

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