Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2


Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2
Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2

Messy Li'l Raindrops, Last part : page 57 (Page 12)

-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrshn

update have made me desperate!

Em working on it.
ii will update soon =]

-Awantika- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged

Guys herez part 4 :)

Hope ya all like it, but this onez not so gud, Coz ii wrote it in a rush. And do comment criticism is heartfully accepted . Started from where it ended. 


Ar – Damn, guess wat people. I am commiting  a suicide.

S – Why meow ? How can I live widout you. I will die widout you.

Ar – Rats, Quiet ! I was talkin about, if I hab to dance wid ARohi !

G – Arjun, Shut up Aiite. What do u want to do ? Jugalbandi stage mein ?

Ar – That's an awesome idea.

G – Haha…whateva, Arohi wbu ?

I started singing this is my perfect nightmare 
so when will i wake up and scream
no way, no way, no way, no way, no way, no way, no way, no way

Alya – Guys, Stop your bakwass ! We have been told to display one dance from student council. And what do you guys want us to do ? Let Romit n Shefo Dance ?

R – Hey, Awesome ! Shefo n me ? We will Rock !

S – Yeah…Romit we'll dance at "I am a Barbie girl " Okayy ?

R – You will look awesome in da outfit.

Me – Shut up Both.  Gouri, why dun u dance wid arjun eh ?

G – As if I no how to dance.

Me – You have no F***in idea ov da way I dance.

Al – Em fed up ov yur language.

Sh – And me of Arjun.

Al – Look, you guys have so many similarities.

Ar n me spoke together – Like poles repel.

R – Not always !

Sh – Aw. Romit, such a smart dialogue.

G – Look Guys, we need to do it. Aru n Arjun Please ?

Ar – I cant let a pretty gal's heart break.

Al – Aru, please ?

Ar – Goss, ii need to talk to any one of Armaan, Sreevasa, Rashi or Sanchit.

Al – Talk to Armaan or Sreevasha.

ME – Sreevs is outta league. Armaan will work out.

G – Whats goin on ?

Al – The only guy who can convince her.

Ar – Boyfriend ?

Me – Duh ! Best FRIEND !

And I called my sunshine in a rainy day.

Me – Yo Dumbass !

Am – Don't eat my head Dumbo !

Me – As if you hab sum brain in it.

Am – Rite, not some but too much babe'

Me – Whateva.

Am – School hour init ?

Me – Will explain ya later, But temme a thingy.

Am – Yo, throw it up ?

Me – Can I Dance ?

Am – Yaa, To make a ass of yourself.

Me – Thenks I knew it.

Am – Wassup Girl ?

Me – School function, kinda MUST. And to add up a romantic salsa wid sum random guy.

Am – You can baby !

Me – Err

Am – Trust Me, Coz you wont know unless you give it a try. Even if you can't then its not gunna kill you init? And if da prob is wid da guy, imagine him as ME and u'll injoy it .

Me – Thanxx Nigga. I love you Dude.

Am – Love ya too'

Me – kay, I gtg now. Will catch ya later ?

Am – Time ?

Me – Around midnite.

Am – Bye Dumbo.

Me – Bye'

After I hung up da fone ebyone was lookin at me curiously whereas  Alya had a confident look in her. I gave a smile to her and she looked to eberyone else

Done Guys !

S – Aru, whos da guy dat can change a decision of smn stubborn like you ?

Me – A best Fren !

S – Not boy fren rite ?

Me – not in da wildest dreams. Infact he's single [ I said winking at Her ]

S – How does he look ?

Me – Hold on I will show you his pics. I dunno, gals go gaga over him n it doesn't make sense to me !

I showed his pik to her n c lyk went numb for few mins. She suddenly shouted "Aruuu ii wanna date him"

Me – I knew it.

S – Please !

Me – He's coming over next week to meet me up. You can join us .

S – Yayyy. Who else will be dere?

Me – All my bestiez back at Mumbai. Alya, And you too ?

S – Can Arjun n Romit join ?

Me – Huh ?

S – Please, it ll be fun/

Al – Ya Aro, it will be fun.

Me – But, its supposed to be Scorpion Day out.

Al – No prob Aru. We will hav fun.

Me – Damn, OKAY !

S – Arjun is a scorpion as well.

Me – is it ?

Ar – Yesh, October 28 .

Me – What ? Em oct 27. And armaan's on oct 28.

Al – Means, Arjun can be what Armaan is.

Me – Shut up Alya. [ I was in anger ]

Al – I was kiddin.

Me – Whateva. Shefali he is not da kind who gets into sth. Serious. And da gud part is he warns da gal before only.

S – Neva mind. I get it. Same as My MEOW. Even I aint into serious stuffs too. 

Alya cut us in da middle – Look, Aru – Armaan, arjun n u are so similar.

[I gave her a "I will kill you look" and she said sorry and shut her mouth. ]

Me – Yeahh Shefo.

S – Aru, it'll be so cool. I will date your best fren n why don't u date my best fren ?

Alya n Romit laughed out in a burst. And the next thing I realized is, arjun n me were runningbehind Shefo to beat her up. But miss disciplined "Alabya Punj" always on da way stopped us.

G – Damn, you guys are kids.

Arjun, me n shefo were breathing hard due to the instant running thing.

Al – I thought Arohi is da only who's total freak. But Arjun you proved me wrong .

Ar – See, I have a strong capability.

R – Guys, agar main kuch kahunga to u will all scold me saying em wasting tym and what are you guys doin ?

G – Totally Right !

Al – Yeah, So Arjun n Arohi you are dancing in TEre liye.

We both gave each other a "SHIT" look.

Me – Uhh…Okayy !

Ar – Ermm, can we make our reherseal abit late?

Me – Yaaa, that's what I was thinkin about. Coz we need to do song reherseals as well.

Ar – Yeah, that's what I mean.

Al – Great minds think da same.

We said "Thenks" in unison sarcastically. Everyone else giggled.

Then we sat together and worked on the schedules. And we went to the choreographer. She agreed to then we explained everything to the groups and separated reherseal halls for everyone. And then we 6 went to the audi to start the decors .

Alya started her host practice. Even tho Romit n shefali seemed absurd wid there common sense but then I realized they  had a great zeal n enthusiasm towards their work. To my surprise they did work in a superb way fooling around. I basically liked their sweet group, Arjun, Shefali and Romit. They were one ov a kind. Gauri was a perfectionist. She worked properly in a disciplined manner. I wondered how could she be such a discipline freak. She was too much more matured, which I hated. But she was good to me and I didn't bother me.

Al – Guys, we searched for the track of just a kiss. But damn , its not our day I guess.

Me – Arghhh…. God Damn it !

Ar – That's so awesome. Ugh, Anyway did you bring any track people ?

Al – The only available was start of something new.

Me – Awesome, Just Awesome [ I said sarcastically ]

Al – Guys look, something is better than nothing.

Ar – God Damn !

Alya pointed out at a room inside da audi and told us to go there for reherseals. Helpless we went there.

And arjun closed the door. I didn't know what I was supposed to say. For few mins we both dint speak a word but kept staring at da ceiling. The silence was killing me. HE suudenly broked da silence n said

:You Drive Fine !

Me – Better than you.

Ar – Ha, get outta da illusion !

Me – talking to yourself dude?

Ar – No dumbo it was for you.

Me – Hey, who told you to call me dumbo ?

Ar – My wish. Got a prob ?

Me – Actually, my best fren calls me dat so

Ar – Armaan ?

Me – Yesh :D

Ar – You love him a lot init ?

Me – Da way u luv Shefo.

Ar – Yeah :)

Me – I love all my besties equally.

Ar – Em sure they don't love you, coz your unloveable.

Me – Go n Die !

Ar – I returned from hell already so I aint dying. Sorry !

Me – Huh ! immortal ?

Ar – yeah !

ME – means you're a blood suckin VAMPIRE !

Ar – And you stinking ZOMBIE ?

Me – Vampire !

Ar – Zombie.

We spent two hour or so talking, rather say fighting. I realized he was so similar to me. We both were stupid, crazy, strong n moreover freaks. And he understood so well. So now, he was my VAMP !

We would go on wid out rehearsing if Alya wouldn't cut us in da middle and tell us to rehearse. We looked at the lyrics for few mins. He took his guitar, me mine.

And he started , And honestly that was the best sound I ever heard. I got lost in em'. He was too good.  I lost all my senses but got back soon and continued. Honestly I cud feel it was the "START OF SOMETHING NEW !"


Thats it :)

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Hugs nd Love

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moonkmh IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Luv freaky arjuhi. So cool update soon.
MsFuzzybear69 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Awesome updates!!!
Please add me to your pm list...
22nisha.c Groupbie

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Can we have more of Arjun dialogues...
This one was nice, Only Arohi seems like a spoilt Brat.

Edited by 22nisha.c - 17 May 2011 at 5:11am
sezo Senior Member

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged

loving your ff. cant wait for next part.

...vibha... IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
loved the part
arjuhi's cute fight
keep updating
.vrshn. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
start of something new!!best song for the situation!!
it was a good chappy...expecting more from you!! Wink

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