Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

I just wanna b with you... (Page 2)

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Geet was shocked to find the letter..It was written to her 4m dev-
"geet,I got all ur property.I hope dat it wil help me 4m payin my debts.and another thing don't try 2 contact me.I'm goin back Canada wid my Nainthara.all the best 4 ur future.I am sorry"
Geet's world was spinning.the 1ly man she ever lovd ditched her.her legs collapsed.she fainted.
she was awoken by her family members nd a doctor beside dem.he confirmed dat she was pregnant.the family were overjoyed.Geet stil had dat letter in her hand.her little bro sudeep took the letter nd read it aloud to the family who were shocked.
Darjee entered the scene.he wanted geet's baby geet didn't want 2 do.she broke up her ties with the family nd went to new delhi,her frnd pinky's home.wen she narrated her sad story 2 pinky nd her parents tears rolled down her cheeks.she told"pinky,i need a job.i want a earning 4 my baby nd me.i think a mom s enough 4 my child.i don't need a husband 2 take care of my baby"
Pinky hesitated bt it was her papa,manav who thought she was right.
The next day at Khurana constructions-
Maan's eyes were tear filled on seeing his late father's photograph.he was interrupted by pinky,"gud morning sir!"1ce again the stern luk was on maan's face.he askd"wat do u want?"wen he looked at geet's face his expression faded.he had never seen anyone so simple yet elegant as her.he said"good morning 2 geet who replied him the same with a little bit of nervousness.pinky introduced geet to mr.khadoos as dey called him in KC.maan asked geet wat she wanted nd she replied dat she had done her UG in economics nd needed a job.Maan didn't kno wat to say as he was mesmerised by her voice.4 the 1st tym in 14 mths MSK found himself smyl.he said dat she wud take care of the profit of the company nd also estimate the cost nd budget.pinky was startled.she had never seen MSK giv a candidate a job dat easily.even mr.khadoos didn't kno the answer.
wen geet entered her cabin,she was to work with sasha,the head of her section nd also her was hatred at the 1st sight 4 sasha towards geet as she believed in a hi fi zindagi.wen she entered,"ooo,who s dat?o my god i think the guards let in some beggar.hey,honey KC wil nt offer u a position or a place 2 sit and be..""SASHAAA!wat the hell r u doing?"it was maan.tears were rolling down geet's cheeks.she cudn't bear the pain.wen maan saw her tears,he was moved,he came to her nd said to sasha,"if u dare hurt her again,U'l b fired!"and he led her out of the cabin.maan didn't kno y he did it,bt geet was someone really special he felt wen he saw her innocent nd painful eyes.geet said,"thank you maan sir.U r really good" and left.maanwas startled.noone in his lyf ever told him dat he was gud neither in his office nor at home-except dad nd dadi not even sameera.he thought,'gals wil b lyk dis at the beginning.but will leav u.i hate gals,all r d same'
Dat day geet was unusually tired.whenever she tried to concentrate on her work,she just cud think of all those miserable things dat happened in her lyf.she touched her stomach nd was talking 2 her baby"baby'ther s no one in dis world other dan u!pls com soon!i cnt stay in dis world nd bear all the suffering." pinky was watchin it silently.she came up 2 her nd hugged her nd said"dont worry geet!i,mama nd papa r der 4 u."maan who just came dat way saw d gals talkin ne bellowed"GEEETTT!!do u wanna get fired?nd u pinky don't u undrstnd?u 1ly hav tym 2 eat nd talk nt 2 work hey na?"geet was furious"sir,don't u kno abt frndship?if u don't hav any frnds try 2 make some.den u'l undrstand hw caring frnds r!!"
Yikes!no one dared 2 talk 2 MSK lyk dat!dey simply obeyed wat he said.maan himself was surprised.he murmured"ye kesi ladki h?"
That night,dadi went 2 his room nd asked,beta u shud nt hav kicked dev out of the house"
"dadi don't u kno wat he did?he ruined A gal's lyf!i want 2 meet dat gal nd apologise 2 her.Nd vicky?he just lovd dev dat he didn't even want to kno d truth!thank god annie s nt in india!or else.."
"bas maan,hum us ladki zaroor milenge!bt v dont even kno her v shud find her nd bring her here!"
"s dadima"maan went 2 his room.he always had the habit of writing a diary.he turned the pgs in which he wrote abt sameera nd nw he wanted 2 write abt geet.he didn't kno y he wanted to,but 1 wk working wid geet made him smyl aftr 14 mths...
NEXT PART:maan has feelings 4 geet nd realises it dat it s love..Big smile
Guys wat did u think abt dis part??do leave ur comments..

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Hi guys!!Hw r u all??I want to thank everyone who read my forum..Thanxxx a lot to all who posted comments.I'l post the next part soon.this s my first FF so I was initially afraid.I know dat my first pt didn't come out too wel..but wen I think of my story I have a feeling dat it ll mean more pts..I need ur comments to help me shud I have more parts or shud I reduce my story??pls help me guys Thanxxx in advance.also pls let me know abt the story comment..lov u all Smile

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nice start ... plzz add me to the pm list and continue soon 


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the second part was amazing..
really nice
and maan is such an arrogant sweety..
do PM me..

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Part 3:
Maan turned the pages of his diary in which he had written abt sameera,his dad,mom's betrayal...Evry pg was filled with a memory.he was filled with anger nd threw his diary across his room.he wanted to hug sme1 nd cry lyk a baby.his pain was overwhelming.he didn't want to c dat diary again.but smething insyd told him dat he neeeded 2 write abt geet.he stood up nd went 2 his martial arts room nd vented his anger with tai his thots wer revolved around geet,her eyes,her amazing voice,her lips nd den..Wait a min..MSK was nt d type of man who wud fall 4 a woman dat easily sinc he hated gals bt dis gal was certainly making a diff..he wanted 2 rite it dwn...
Geet sat in her cabin wondering hw a mnth had passed so fast aftr she came 2 wrk at KC.she thot othr dan the boss nd her manager all others wer so swt adi sir,vinod,romeo,manish nd so on..her thots wer disturbed wen sasha entrd d cabin panting 2 say dat maan was callin her.she gave geet a nasty smyl wen she left..
Maan asked her"geet,wer r d files 4 2day's presentation?"presentation??sir no1 told me!""what!!!!i asked pinki 2 tel u,nw i get it,u both r gud 4 nthing..geets eyes wer filled wid tears..maan didn't bother 2 c hr face.she quickly went 2 her cabin nd brought 2 his cabin.he told her dat she was goin 2 do dis1.she was nervous bt she said s...
the presentation was amazing..maan cudn't tak his eyes off her.geet noticed maan nearly 2 tymes bt he jst gav a satisfied smyl.wen d presentation was over evrybody praised geet even maan..maan dropped pinki nd geet at their home as a reward den went home..he wrote dat 2 on his new diary which was meant 4 1ly by day  he fell 4 her even more whereas geet was confused abt maan's reaction.she often thot dis man s strikingly handsome though he s 23 yrs old..
Another 2 mths passed as geet nd maan had started 2 work 2gether.the company's profit was more dan avg(all credits 2 geet!). 1 day maan went 2 KC.on d way he saw geet talking 2 a stranger.he was initially angry bt wanted 2 c who it was.he gt dwn 4m his car nd saw geet talking 2 man who was really handsome maan thot..suddenly both hugged nd d man placed a tender kiss on geet's forehead..nw maan was furious,he cudn't c her wid another man..he shouted"GEEETTT!!wat r u doin?"she said,"sir,dis s my brother.he has come all d way 4m hoshaiyarpur!"den maan said"oh"he had thot dat d man was geet's BF..he felt a feelin of relief aftr knowin dat he was her bro..maan nd geet travelld 2 office 2gethr.on d way,maan was thinkin y he felt towards geet dat way bt he was sure dat she was special 2 him..
dat ni8 maan was sooo happy..Dadi had nevr seen him so happy.she askd"beta.u seem so haapy!wat s d matter?""I don't kno dadima"he went 2 his room nd was turnin d pgs of his diary in which he rote abt geet..he was smilin.wenever he thot of her der was a smyl in his face..
Geet at d same tym had developed a very small bump barely visible..she thot of maan..she thot dat if 1ly she had a husband lyk maan,kind nd luvin,she wudn't hav faced all d troubles..suddenly she realised,Y did i thnk of maan lyk dat,y???
maan 2 was thinkin d same.he was thinkin of havin geet as his wife wen sme1 closed his eyes 4 behind nd gave a big kiss on his cheek.maan smyld knowing who it was..the person said"i love u nd i missed u,bhai"he stood up nd said"i missed u 2 annie"they hugged each other..annie noticed d diary nd enquired wat was it?he mad her sit nd told evrythn abt geet..finally annie said,"bhai,u r in lov wid her!""I don't kno anvesha!i desperately need her in my lyf"she said,"bhai,she 2 wil hav feelings 4 u!just go nd mak her ur frnd,nd den evrythn wil go in ur way"saying dis she gav him a wide grin nd ran out 2 escape 4m maan's pillow throw..he thot,geet,I'm cuming...
PRECAP:will geet accept maan's love???
Guys thanq 4 ur lovly comments,dey make me write more..pls do comment on dis part also..Smile 

Edited by Gurmina-rks - 08 May 2011 at 8:15am
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i really like ur ff  plz pm me

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