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FF-TEJ/PAMMI: VERY VERY LONG (Page 2)

Jay-Dee Goldie
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
How beautifyl this is written... loved loved loved reading it, you have the knack of portraying exactly the characters and i so would love to see this happen... i lack words my friend, it is brilliant... I so enjoyed it and yes it will be my prefered outcome for them if this is not portrayed

thank you

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
oh wow...that was amazing.  The way you captured both of their emotions was nothing short of spectacular.  If even a part of this track was shown in Geet i wud say the show is redeeming itself.  Am so glad you wrote something on Pammi & Tej. Such a different feel it had.  Amazingly well-written...
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
I was very surprised and glad when I stumbled upon your FF. 

Very well written. All throughout, you kept a nice grasp on their characters and yet molded their story into a beautiful love track. Execellent! It was a wonderful read.

Reading your FF makes us all more sure of the potential Tej and Pammi have as second leads and not mere pieces of decoration in the GHSP showcase. 

Hope you continue this further. Or atleast come up with another take on Tej and Pammi!
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Dearest Fida,

One of the best FFs i have ever read. INTENSE with an emotional depth that i crave for as a woman. I hope the creatives take note of your story and weave it in for our tej and pammi. 

You have an amazing talent as a writer. I hope you continue to regale us with many more FFs. I do hope you have several such in your kitty :-))

Lots of love and hugs

Neeru who is totally fida on your writing :)
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 2:12am | IP Logged
its finished! i just cudn't get enuf!
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Wow this is one of the best FFs I have read in a LONG time! So well written, such great character development, such a restrained yet beautiful romance track. I am hoping you write more and more!
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
This is one of the best FF I have read in awhile. Most write about Maneet. .I am glad you wrote about Teji Pammi complex relationship. The actress has endeared almost everyone with her fabulous performance. Your FF has given the the characters a new dimension...I am going to read it a few times and will comment at leisure .
Kudos on this gem of a story Clap
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Wow you've written it so beautifully...Clap...It felt as if i was reading a novel. Loved the way you have showed the gradual transition in their relationship by showing a contrast with Maan & Geet's equation. All these little details may not be possible to show in the show but i do hope they incorporate some of what you have shown. Really loved reading it...will go back & read it again.

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