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New ff *Stay with me* Family matters pt 2 pg 1...

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Index...PART 1 AND 2 pg 1

Edited by dutta-rose - 08 May 2011 at 11:59pm

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It was a bright and sunny mrng in mumbai...anant was fast asleep in his room...a woman dressed in a green saree enters his room...its kala tayi...anant's elder sister...since anant lost his mother the day he was born...kala was more of a mother for him ...spoiling him and pampering him...kala had showered all love and care on him...giving him thngs without he asking for them...and fullfilling all his little dreams...and today as he was all set to enter college...kala was there to wake up anant lest he wuld be late for his first day there...she removes the curtains and the sunlight falls right on anant and he stirs...kala smiles and walks upto him...and moves aside his bedsheet saying-- College nahin jana anant?...jaldi uth aur taiyar ho ja...ANANT MUMBLES putting back a pillow on his face--KYA TAYI?...abhi uthta hoon...bas paanch minute...KALA GRINS and says walking out of the room--DUTTA BHAU KAL RAAT ko hii laut aaya tha anant...aur aaj nashtey ke waqt woh humarey saath hii hoga...ab mera batana farz tha aagey teri marzi...KALA KNEW NOW ANANT WONT nEed any budging and that he wuld be ready for sure!...DUTTA WAS HOME!... The realisation struck anant like lighting...he gets up and rushes to take a shower and be ready to be at the breakfast table before dutta!...OK I KNW THIS WAS A SHORT PART next wuld be long one do let me knw how u lykd it :D

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
I like it but too short na...hope you will update soon...
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Gud 1 nd i hpe u continue soon...
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Glad u lykd it anu...next part asap and will surely make it long :D

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Hey bebo glad u lykd this part...next one asap...:)
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Glad u lykd it anu...next part asap and will surely make it long :D
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Quickly anant changes into his fav white shirt and blue denims and as he stood combing his hair standing in front of the mirror...his phone rings...it was ranveer his best friend...without listening to what he had to say anant says to him hurriedly- -ABHI NAHIN RANVEER...BHAI GHAR PAR HAI...aur tu toh jaanta hai hitler ko sab kuch time se chahiye...college mein miltey hain...ANANT DISCONNECTS the phone and by then he had reached the hall only to find his sis and bro already there! Anant knew there was no point in running and soo he walked upto the table and wishng dutta a gud mrng he takes his chair...like always it was kala who started a conversation and anant loved his sister to do it as he felt awkward in his own home with a silent dutta around...he knew his elder brother was a don infact he was more like a godfather for that city and anant knew that everyone looked upto his brother for help and also with respect they had fear of him too in their hearts...to anant dutta was nothng more than an elder brother that to in name...as he always saw the wall dutta had created around him but anant never tried to breach the boundary...he always had little and short conversations with him and that was it...however Kala was Ananat's SUPPORT SYSTeM ...she was the one with whom anant shared all his daily happenings...his dreams ...his despairs. ..kala knew him far too well and understood him too...DUTTA HAD LEFT WISHING ANANT GUDLUCK FOR college and as kala smiled at anant he too smiled back...MORE THAN glad to have kala there to bridge the gap between him and dutta...giving her a goodbye hug anant leaves for college and after he left...kala made her way to the kitchen to quickly get over with the daily work as she had something bigger to look after...its late in the afternoon and kala sat in the hall of their huge mansion all alone...on other days this was the time she felt really lonely...but today was different..she pickd up the phone and dialed her best friend madhu's number...i tried to make it long hope u all liked:D

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