[MG] Os:As My Eyes Conjure A Melody.. - Page 5

-Sangs-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shika--

you know what doc if u say u r going to comment on it instatly i am going to write daily..
BTW u called her pardadi too!!🤣
mission accomplished!
BTW i already gifted to Jazz. so now gift to you..
and you know what? am typing FS!!😳

U naughty...She is my Keshu..and ur Pardadi... FS ..u typing...wow..sangs is dancing..*runs to read FF and comment*

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely...
Maan finally realized his feelings...
liked the OS dear...

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afsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was such a sweet part

Loved it

Maan atlast got he was big jerk n said sorry hehehehehe

Loved how he purposed it was simple n sweet

Geet came back to herself Vampire hehehehe

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nahtani88

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update
thank u for the pm

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namita25

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome...me just loved it.

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Like it?...LIKEIT...no my dear...I plain simple downright LOVE IT...and Jazz the song thzt is the soul of this storyis wonderful...beautifully apt fot Maaneet...Shikhs your writing is just beyond words chica...the kiss was perfectlydescribed...cntnu on hun...love ya

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419448

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Posted: 12 years ago

woha that was GREAT...atleast it was not UNREQUITED..hehe..and chill abt Kiss..u need experience to describe it..U still dont know..thst wht i amke out..hehe

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shika--

freaking out?? yet it came out so well..😆
i hope someone abduct my soul often..😆

all the tym i was like i hope its decent . . . n i ree-read it five tyms for any signs of vulgarity

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Kesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Grrr!!

Ghar aa zara...

PNQ tu toh gayi...

Humm... as for the sequel... lets see... well... i dont know??!!??...

Ok ok PNQ... stop the dramebaazi... the whole part beautfully written... loved the way Maan realised his love for Geet... better late then never. And as for the kissing scene... well...

just teasing you... The kiss scene was beautifully written as well... loved the bit where he teases her and they start bickering like friends again. I always have believed that you cant love someone who is not your best friend...

Ahh... you and Jazz together have immortalised the Anhatein Song...

BTW Jazz thx for introducing me to this song... love it.

Edited by kesha2412 - 12 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome sequel...happy to know Maan realized the love he has for her...and the kiss..sighsss...was just perfect :)

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