Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer


Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer
Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer

Gunjhun FF: Unequivocal Love *updtd part 09*pg 8 (Page 4)

-Ishana- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Aay Hay Nadeera
The "gift"Wink seems to be interesting...

desisweetheart9 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
wow. very interesting. their romance Embarrassed  wonder what wil happen next. will he leave her ?  update soon. thanks
nadeera Groupbie

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Having writer's block after reading the article 'the other woman is guddu's life'... Dont know really when I'll be back in writting... But Im trying my heart and soul to coup up,with this problem...
Keep smiling always
sur001 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Awesum...update Nadeera...but the precap is scary...and whats the gift...update soon
newfoundlove Senior Member

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
loved the update nadeera. Looking forward to reading more.
And the precap's not helping either
nadeera Groupbie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged

Part 6:


(In the morning)

Guddu and Runjhun are sharing the very same bed. Runjhun wakes up from sleep and looks at Guddu. Guddu is even wearing a small smile in his deep sleep. Runjhun attempts to wake him up but controls at the very last minute and thinks, " May be he is dreaming something nice. Why to disturb? Let him have his very own nice time." She smiles and leaves the room.

Guddu wakes up some times after Runjhun left the room. No sooner than he opens his eyes, his eyes get glued on the calendar hanging on the wall. He realises that today is the last day of the challange between him and Runjhun. He gives a satisfied smile to himself thinking that he has not changed a bit and he still gets the guts to leave Pandey Niwas. Then he also thinks, " Beta, it's getting late for the I must hurry!"  And he hurries back to take a shower.


In the bathroom, he finds that Runjhun already placed the warm water bucket just as he wants. " Oh! I'm gonna miss this pandey niwas a lot! Days were very much comfortable here. But the good thing is I, the great Guddu Sukla, have won the challange. Well it was pretty obvious, wasn't it?" He takes the shower. Dresses up and then looks where his bag is. He finds his bag at the back of the bed and then he looks for something else. But doesn't find that thing that he was searching for. Then he mutters under his breath, " Saala,  how can I forget this is bloody  Pandey Niwas,  the zoo!! How can I find that thing here?" He stops searching and comes downstairs for an early breakfast. He looks at Runjhun who is waiting for him. Guddu checks the breakfast. She has prepared all his favourite dishes. Guddu takes his plate and asks Runjhun to join him. But Runjhun refuses, " I just don't have apetite for breakfast now. I'll have it later." Guddu grins and thinks, "Saali nautanki!! She knows that she has already lost the challange. That's why she is staging that matter what she does, today he is going to leave this bloody Pandey niwas". After finishes the breakfast, he tells to Runjhun, " O' Dharampatni, I'm leaving for the mobile centre." Then he leaves. But he stops at the door and looks back to Runjhun and says, " Oh yes, one thing, send my lunch to the mobile centre. I'll have my lunch with Kukkan and Jabbu." And finally he leaves.


At the mobile centre, he discusses things with his accomplices and smiles broadly almost all the time. Kukkan asks Guddu, " Bhaiya!  Can I ask you something?" Guddu replies with his broad smile, "Ha beta ask anything you want." Kukkan asks again, " what happened with you bhaiya? It seems you are very happy today!" Guddu's broad smile goes even broader and replies, " Ha ha ha beta Kukkan!  You've guessed it right! Today I'm very happy! Cause, at this evening i'm gonna leave pandey niwas  forever. I've won the challange that your Bhabi kept." Listening this answer Kukkan seems to be not that very happy. May be he feels bad for his Runjhun Bhabi. Guddu notices Kukkan's change and asks, " it seems that you are not happy kukkan even if I've won the challange. What's the matter?" Kukkan says nothing just smiles uncomfortably.


Guddu suddenly jumps up and says, " I have some important works to do. I'll be back by afternoon. And meanwhile, my room should be cleaned up." Jabbu asks, " But bhaiya, where are you going?" Guddu replies, " I'm just going for shopping as I don't have much dress to wear." Guddu leaves and all his accomplices are staring at his way.  Kukkan breaks the silence, " Guddu Bhaiya is not doing right. Bhabi will be shattered into pieces or may be she has already been broken. I feel really bad for bhabi." At that very moment, Runjhun enters the mobile centre with lunch. She smiles at everybody and asks, " Where is your Guddu bhaiya? I've brought lunch for all of you as he told." Jabbu speaks is a very guilty voice, " The matter is that bhabi, Bhaiya has gone for shopping as he doesn't have any shirts." Runjhun smiles back and says, " alright then. I'm taking back his lunch only. When he'll be back just let me know I'll be here with the warm food as you know he can't eat cold food." Runjhun packs Guddu's lunch and leaves smiling.  All were feeling very guilty. They don't know why they cannot just celebrate their Guddu bhaiya's victory over Runjhun bhabi. They start eating silently.



Guddu returns with loads of shopping. But there is an unusual large package in wrapping. Kukkan asks, " Bhaiya, what's that for?" Guddu replies playfully, " woh kya hai na  your bhai has invested loads of efforts to win this challange, but hasn't won. So I thought, I just get something really useful for her before I leave that Zoo forever." Jabbu tells Guddu, " Bhaiya! Bhabi came over here to give lunch. But she took your lunch back home and said that as you can't eat cold food and she also told us to let her know when you come back so that she can bring warm food for your lunch. So, shall I inform bhabi about your return? "His smile widens and says, " there is no need for that. Cause, I'm going to Pandey niwas and will have my lunch there." And Guddu leaves only with the large gift and asks his accomplices to place the rest of the shopping to his very own room.



All the mamis see that Guddu is carrying a large gift packet and climbs upstairs by calling Runjhun's name.  In the room Guddu doesn't find Runjhun. He waits for Runjhun. But Runjhun doesn't show up. But this waiting can't even able to spoil his mood. So, he leaves the gift and snatches his bag from the back of the bed and opens his wardrobe. When he pulls his very first shirt, Runjhun enters the room with lunch, " where have you been? I'm waiting for you for a long time" Runjhun stumbles after watching His bag wide open on the bed. Runjhun asks with scare, " Are you going somewhere?" "Oh YES! I'm gonna leave this Pandey Niwas for good!" Guddu replies with utmost joy. Runjhun asks tearfully, " Why? What have I done this time? I just brought your lunch back from the mobile centre because you cannot have cold food... I'm sorry, it won't happen again." Guddu shakes his head, " O' Dharampatni, this is not the matter. In case you haven't noticed '30 days' time is up!  And I'm leaving. As I haven't changed my mind to stay automatically, I've won! That's why I'm packing the bag."


Runjhun could not believe what she has just heard. It seems that someone has put something really hot in her ear. And she could feel very well that on each step she takes to approach Guddu her world beneath is shattering into pieces. Runjhun stands in front of Guddu and says, " Let me pack your bag. I know better than you where your clothes and other stuffs are kept." Guddu smiles and says, " As you say Dharampatni!" Guddu sits on the bed and watches his wife packing his bags. When Runjhun finishes packing bags, she tries to find another single piece of Guddu's clothe just in the hope to linger his stay in this room. May be this is her very last chance to stay this close with her husband.   She searches every nook and corner of the room and wardrobe just to fine another stuff of Guddu. But there isn't any and she knows is very well. She tells Guddu, " The packing is finished." Then she burst out into crying. She cries in such a way as if something has just torn apart from her. Guddu looks very confused and tells gently, " what happens Runjhun, why are you crying?" All that runjhun manages to say, " If i've done anything wrong, please give me another chance, i'm begging you but please don't leave me...!" Guddusays stubbornly, " I cant stay here no more. 30 day is up and there's no point to stay here. #he poits out that gift # Runjhun, I've bought something for you. Open that up...i don't have time!" Runjhun cries and tells, " I don't anything... All i need is you!" Guddu cuts off and says, " don't piss me off. Go and open that." Runjhun goes silently to that large gift pack and opens up slowly...



To Runjhun's exclamation, " A travel bag for me? Why?" Guddu jerked his shoulder and says, " yes ofcourse! Or where else you pack your things and go with me? I cannot hold all your belongings on my head, can I? Now don't create any scene and pack your things...we are leaving as soon as you are done with your packing." Runjhun stares at Guddu.


Pre cap:

Runjhun settles down in her new house with Guddu







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Hi it was really SUPERBClapClapClap... I loved itEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
Guddu really loved his better halfHug...
Can't wait yaar update soon...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Thanx to all of you for appeciating my effort. I'm not really good at thanking people but i know better that deep down inside how grateful I am to all of you.

Trust me without these inspirations i cannot go far. keep supporting me with your valuable visits and priceless comments.

Thank you once again

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