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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

he came in at once push opening the doors.. she hugged him & pleaded.. I want this baby.. mera bacha Maan!!! mujhe mera bacha chaiya.. plz Maan!! she hugged him & cried.. plz Maan.. he cupped her face & wiped her tears with his thumb & gestured the drs to leave her alone. Plz Maan.. let me keep the baby .. plz.. plz. mera bacha maan!!!

Mukaan Mukaan stop making me cryyy. awesome yarr wonderfull, amzing update. no words... 

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged

She screamed Maan!!.. her voice was filled with pain, grief.. fear.. so scared & trembling

he came in at once push opening the doors.. she hugged him & pleaded.. I want this baby.. mera bacha Maan!!! mujhe mera bacha chaiya.. plz Maan!! she hugged him & cried.. plz Maan.. he cupped her face & wiped her tears with his thumb & gestured the drs to leave her alone. Plz Maan.. let me keep the baby .. plz.. plz. mera bacha maan!!!


these lines just touched my heart!!Smile

u write so beautifully.Smile

waiting for the next one dear!!!

maan spoilt his reputation for her!!!

gosh hope geet understands the need to move on with maan rather than being lonely throughout her life:)

precap left me in tears!!! why always maan ...Cry

hope everything settles soon!!!

thanx for the pmSmile and hearttouching updates:)Cry


Ankita:)

edited--

pls muskaan make geet forget that cheater devAngry and make her start afresh with maan

and their baby:)Smile



Edited by anks_ams - 10 May 2011 at 10:49pm

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Hi Muskaan,

While I am liking the story entirely, I feel sad for Maan. He goes through the entire pain and is yet met with a confused Geet who doesnt know what she wants in life. She sees him making all sacrifices for her but never opens her mouth - this is one thing which makes her character very weak ... 

I know you would need to do this for the flow of the story maybe but I would want Geet to look above fer own interests at the person who is doing so much for her...if not love, she can maybe show gratitude and acknowledgement ?

i agree. pls make geet voice something for the sake of maan.Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
omg i really hope they keep the baby..
poor maan doing all this for her & she doesnt even realise how much he loves her
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it...!
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Wow! Maan out of KM! Now that's interesting!Confused
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
muskaan.. 
geet was not ready for marriage, but she never said anything about the baby (correct me if i m wrong) so why maan brings her for abortion in real..
ok he was faking before the family to save geet but y in actual..? 
loved maan as usual..
and geet for once think about maan its not just ur baby, its his as well...
thanks for pm..
and as u said u had so much to write so hopefully this is not a short story yippee..Big smile
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged

Thanks 4 da pm...Poor Maan. He lied for Geet...did not want to see her in pain. Loved the update. Thank God...Geet realised her mistake. Smile

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