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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Hi Muskaan,


While I am liking the story entirely, I feel sad for Maan. He goes through the entire pain and is yet met with a confused Geet who doesnt know what she wants in life. She sees him making all sacrifices for her but never opens her mouth - this is one thing which makes her character very weak ... 

I know you would need to do this for the flow of the story maybe but I would want Geet to look above fer own interests at the person who is doing so much for her...if not love, she can maybe show gratitude and acknowledgement ?


i agree. pls make geet voice something for the sake of maan.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i really hope they keep the baby..
poor maan doing all this for her & she doesnt even realise how much he loves her
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...loved it...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Maan out of KM! Now that's interesting!😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
muskaan.. 
geet was not ready for marriage, but she never said anything about the baby (correct me if i m wrong) so why maan brings her for abortion in real..
ok he was faking before the family to save geet but y in actual..? 
loved maan as usual..
and geet for once think about maan its not just ur baby, its his as well...
thanks for pm..
and as u said u had so much to write so hopefully this is not a short story yippee..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks 4 da pm...Poor Maan. He lied for Geet...did not want to see her in pain. Loved the update. Thank God...Geet realised her mistake. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
fab updates.
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...poor maan is being rude only to save geet...i loved the last bit with geet wanting to keep her baby...oh no maan will b thrown out of KM...this will make geet feel more guilty then...continue soon n thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update. It was fab n superb. M happy that geet wants that baby but sad abt precap...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
oh poor Geet...but its more than her Maan is in pain...glad that she decided to keep the baby...
the precap is shocking...cont soon...