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-Ehtesaab- SS maaneet thread 2 - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update muskan...hope geet soon confesses her past to maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear i just loved this Ehtesaab😍, i read the story to my mum also😳, she was soo surprised and she was soo touched by ur story😍, she just loved it and waiting for the next part❤️ update soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic
awesome 👏
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... 

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg! It was just rocking👏... I was🤢 wen i read d new precap😲... thank god d baby is safe. Loved it. 😳 Edited by siroilily - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...
i m loving this SS of urs...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

he came in at once push opening the doors.. she hugged him & pleaded.. I want this baby.. mera bacha Maan!!! mujhe mera bacha chaiya.. plz Maan!! she hugged him & cried.. plz Maan.. he cupped her face & wiped her tears with his thumb & gestured the drs to leave her alone. Plz Maan.. let me keep the baby .. plz.. plz. mera bacha maan!!!

 read this part three time

feel lke crying what sad
poor geet
love it
ur writting real well
sweety
 
 

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Posted: 12 years ago
Heart Wrenching update.
Feeling bad for Maan. He is willing to take all d pain on behalf of Geet.
He is madly in love wif her. But isnt able to voice it out.
I was jst hoping d abortion will not happen..
Geet made d right decision now.She needs to be a strong women.
Muskan jst a Q... Does Geet n Dev r officially divorced?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome….

poor maan n geet

me crying…. feeling very very bad….


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Muskaan,

While I am liking the story entirely, I feel sad for Maan. He goes through the entire pain and is yet met with a confused Geet who doesnt know what she wants in life. She sees him making all sacrifices for her but never opens her mouth - this is one thing which makes her character very weak ... 

I know you would need to do this for the flow of the story maybe but I would want Geet to look above fer own interests at the person who is doing so much for her...if not love, she can maybe show gratitude and acknowledgement ?