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Posted: 07 May 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
 NICE STORY DIDI!!!!!... SmileSmileSmileBig smileBig smile  
 
I LOVED IT!!!!...Smile

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Posted: 07 May 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
First of all thanx to all of you...Hug

Now come to the story...actually I want to write a story based on corruption of the system...I took two characters from the CID team as i personally believe that a team is running through the 15 yrs but there is no such corrupt officers except Daksh...its very hard to believe at least in the present scenario...People generally take bribes either for their greed or for the miserable condition or in any helpless situation...I tried my best showing all those type in my story...Generally innocent & honest people always the target of the system so i tried to show it by Abhijeet as it is more easy to write...

@Visrom...i think now my views are clear to u that why i wrote it in this way...

@Shagnika...i know LOL...i can understand...Wink

@Sri...thanx for reading my story...Big smile

@sherdilali & @ sonpaapdi...thanx for your liking Big smile



Edited by debasree04 - 07 May 2012 at 2:55pm

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Posted: 07 May 2012 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Congrats debasreeji on becoming Rockerz.
Aapki story bahot achi hai. But cid ke forensic doctor ki certificate nakli? Check kiye bina hi leliye doctor ko. Aapki imagination achi hai. Hospital ka topic bhi great hai.
NICE story debasreeji. Expect more n more good stories.

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Posted: 07 May 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
just started reading it sree...the start is good...will complete reading shortlySmile

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .ACHU.

Congrats debasreeji on becoming Rockerz.
Aapki story bahot achi hai. But cid ke forensic doctor ki certificate nakli? Check kiye bina hi leliye doctor ko. Aapki imagination achi hai. Hospital ka topic bhi great hai.
NICE story debasreeji. Expect more n more good stories.

Thanx a lot for reading my story...Big smile
Your point is correct but in the today's world is it really impossible ??? I don't think so...

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
In the real world it is not impossible, but here we have ACP Pradyuman...will a fake certificate escape his notice?
Looking back I remember it did...in the Taipan Saanp case...where Niyati laughed at ACP for not being able to make out a fake death certificate.LOL

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

In the real world it is not impossible, but here we have ACP Pradyuman...will a fake certificate escape his notice?
Looking back I remember it did...in the Taipan Saanp case...where Niyati laughed at ACP for not being able to make out a fake death certificate.LOL

Yeah i remember it...as far i can remember that ACP sir scold either Dr Niyati or his CID team for this fake certificate...
And one more thing as far i remember Tarika when entered the CID in the case of Don's final revenge ACP sir was not aware of her joining...

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Finished the story ... I must say it's a nice interesting one Tongue

Now I will admit somewhere down the line even though I slightly felt bad for Abhijeet but 'I' was happy Tongue ... You know it was like dil mein ek khwaahish thi jo poori hui Tongue ... so altogether it was a nice interesting story Smile

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