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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KhushLuvsGC-AK

Oh wao u remember to add my nameBig smile
Thank u so so much debuHug
All gifts r superbThumbs Up

How can i forget u Tongue
Thank you Khush Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 7:26am | IP Logged
both the gifts are indeed lovely Di...StarClap
i especially loved daya sir's gift...it's really unique..pehle toh samajh hi ahi aaya tha...Embarrassed
thax for adding my name di...

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kkkloveu

both the gifts are indeed lovely Di...StarClap
i especially loved daya sir's gift...it's really unique..pehle toh samajh hi ahi aaya tha...Embarrassed
thax for adding my name di...

Thank you Riya Embarrassed
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Nice story Deba di :)
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditya_anjaan

Nice story Deba di :)

Story LOL which one? Confused
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One romantic OS on AT & DS. ShockedLOL


At some place, Daya is waiting for Shreya & after few minutes Shreya comes.

Shreya : Sir, apne mujhe bulaya?

Daya : Ha..a...n..woh...actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...

Shreya (surprised): Kya Sir?

Daya hesitates...both of them are silent for few seconds.

Daya at last: Shreya tum kya kuch vi nehin samjhti ho?

Shreya : Sir, aap kya kehna chahte hei?

Daya : Shreya saari baatein kahe nehin jaate kuch baat samajhna vi chahiye aur mere khayal se tum samjhti vi ho...

Shreya becomes silent & looks down.

Daya becomes impatient...

Shreya : Ankahi bataon ka koi matlab nehin hota hei Sir aur kyunki kavi kavi woh ek tarfa vi ho jaate hei...

Daya : Kya sunna chahti ho Shreya ke main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon...??

Shreya shocked & surprised still happy. ShockedBig smileBlushing

Daya continues : Thik hain to suno...haan main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon...aaj se nehin bohot pehle se...par yeh baat keh nehin paya...nehin hota mujhse... (Embarrassed) EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Shreya gives romantic look...& thinking : At last Sir apne dil ki baat keh diya

Daya looks at Shreya : Kya hua aise kya dekh rehi ho? Kuch kaho? Maine to kaha na?

Shreya smiles... & says : Sir, aise kisi ko propose karte hein kya? Wink

Daya embarrasses & says : To tumne kya socha tha ek gulaab lekaar apne ghutno pe baith kar main tumhe propose karungi? LOLWink

Both laugh loudly. Shreya thinks about that moment with Sidharth in their romantic date.

Daya : Kahan kho gayi?

Shreya : Kahin nehin Sir...magar sir Sidharth ka kya hoga...apne bohot der kar diya...aap khud bol nehin paaye to kam se kam ek letter hi likh dete...

Daya : Likha tha...

Shreya (shockingly): Kya? ConfusedConfused Par mujhe koi letter nehin mila...

Daya : Pata hain...Abhijeet ne tumhe woh letter diya hi nehin...

Shreya : Magar kyun Sir? Abhijeet sir ne aisa kyun kiya?

Daya explains.

F L A S H B A C K

2 days before, at Daya's House, 10PM

Daya is watching Discovery Channel. Suddenly, door bell rings. He opens the door & surprises to see Abhijeet.

Daya : Kya boss tum itne raat ko?

Abhijeet : Kyun main iss waqt nehin aa sakta kya?

Daya : Aree nehin mera woh matlab nehin tha...aao andar aao...

Abhijeet enters & sits on sofa. Daya becomes confused.

Daya : Kya hua boss? Tension mein lag rehe ho?

Abhijeet hesitates & says : Ab aur mujhse nehin hoga...har roz sochta hoon tumhe bata du par...main to bilkul fas gaya...

Daya doesn't understand head & tail of it. Confused He gives a confused look while
Abhijeet continues : Bohot kosis kiya ke saare paise ka intezaam khud kardu aur sab kuch thik ho jaye to aa kar tumhe bata dunga magar nehin kar paya...5 crore bohot hote hei...aur

Daya interrupts : Abhijeet tum kya bol rehe hei ho? Kya paisa? Boss mujhe kuch samjh mein nehin aa raha hei...Confused

Abhijeet : Daya, main uss letter ke bare mein bol raha hoon jo maine Shreya ko nehin diya...

Daya : Main iss bare mein koi baat karna nehin chahta...ek baar isi wajah se hamari dosti mein daraar padhte padhte rehe gaya aur Shreya ki sagaai vi ho chuki hei...so everything is finished!

Abhijeet : Nehin main aise finish nehin hone dunga...3 zindegi barbaad ho jayega...

Daya : Magar...

Abhijeet : Tumhe sunna hi padhega...aab main aur chupa nehin sakta...main Shreya ko letter dene gaya tha magar Shreya ki father ne mujhe rok liya...

Daya shocked...Shocked

Abhijeet continues : unhone mujhse promise karwaya ke main yeh letter Shreya ko nehin doon...

Daya : Kyun ? (Confused)

Abhijeet : Shreya ki father ne Sidharth ke father se bohot paise udar liye the...iske bare mein Shreya aur uski maa ko vi nehin pata...Shreya ki maa ko heart problem hai...isliye yeh baat avi woh bata nehin sakte...aur unke paas itne saare paise avi nehin hei isliye jab tak woh paise chukka nehin sakte main Shreya ko yah tumhe kuch na kahu...

Daya understands why Abhijeet has not told him this earlier. He again realizes that how he misunderstood his best buddy.

Abhijeet continues : Main kya karta yaar...kuch samjh mein nehin aa raha tha...socha ke saare pase ka intezaam khud hi kar lunga par bohot der ho gaya...hamare beech daraar vi padhte padhte rehe gaya...

Daya sighs...

Abhijeet : Shreya ki sagaai vi ho gayi...par main sirf 2 crore ka hi intezam kar paya... (unhappy) isliye aaj main tumhe batane aaya...hum dono milkar baki paise ka intezam kar lenge...kyun?

Daya : Kya faida? Sagaai ho chuki hei...

Abhijeet : Par shaadi to nehin huyi na? Tumhe kya lagta hei ke agar yeh shaadi ho gai to tum khush rehe paoge? Tumhari chodo kya Shreya khush rehe payegi? Aur Sidharth?

Daya : Magar...

Abhijeet angrily : Agar magar kuch nehin...tum jaake yeh sachai Shreya ko bata do...2 din baad New Year ki Party hei...aur isse achha mauka tumhe nehin mil sakta...phir hum paise ka intezaam karenge...


B A C K  T O  P R E S E N T

Shreya becomes shocked & disappointed that her father doesn't tell her.

Shreya : Magar Sir, itne paise ke intezaam kaise hoga...

Daya : Woh chodo...main aur Abhijeet kahin na kahi se intezaam ka hi lunga...

Few minutes silent then Daya asks : Magar tumne avitak woh baat nehin bataya mujhe?

Shreya (Confused) : Kausi baat Sir?

Daya : Wohi baat jo tum mujhse sunna chahte the...maine to keh diya par tumne nehin kaha...

Shreya blushes...Blushing

Daya : Kya...kuch kaha...mujhe sunyai nehin diya...

Shreya : (Blushing) Sir, aap vi na...

Abhijeet enters suddenly...

Abhijeet : Shreya ab bol vi do...sharmane se koi faida nehin...Wink

Shreya looks down & blushing! Blushing

Abhijeet : Lo bhai Daya, Shreya to Sidharth se hi pyaar karti hai...aur main soch raha tha ACP sir se baat karu ke woh Shreya ki dad se tumhari rishte ki baat kare...ab lagta hei koi faida nehin...

Shreya promptly replies : Nehin sir, main to Daya sir se hi pyaar karta hoon...After completing she realizes that she has expressed her feeling & becomes embarrassed & flees away...Silly Embarrassed

Daya smiling & says : Boss, tum kavi sudhroge nehin...Tongue

Abhijeet : Par unse bol to diya na...Wink

Daya smiling & says : Par main akele shaadi nehin karnewala hoon...Wink

Abhijeet surprises. Daya continues : Are humne kya decide kiya tha...ek saath shaadi karenge...

Abhijeet blushes & says : Are woh to...Embarrassed

Daya : Boss aaj mauka achha hei...tum vi keh do Tarika se...

Tarika enters suddenly...

Tarika : Daya, Abhijeet mujhe kya kehna chahta hain?

Abhijeet embarrasses. Embarrassed

Daya gives a naughty look & says : Tum vi pucho main to chala...(Leaves)

Tarika : Haan Abhijeet kya kehna chahte ho tum mujhse?

Abhijeet : Woh woh...naya saal aanewala hei...Tongue

Tarika : Kya?? Confused

Abhijeet : Woh mera matlab hain ke party bohot achhi hain na? Tongue

Tarika gives a look...Stern Smile

Abhijeet : Tarikaji, kavi kavi bhavnao ko vi samjh liya ki jiye...Embarrassed

Tarika : Main ek forensic expert hoon...sirf evidence ko samjh ta hoon

Abhijeet : Aap vi na...Salunkhe saab ke saath rehte rehte kya ban gayi hei...

Tarika : Abhijeet! Evil Smile

Abhijeet : Achha achha...chodiye Salunkhe sahab ko...hamari baat karte hai...

Tarika : Matlab?

Abhijeet : Aaj aap bohot achhi lag rehi hai...Embarrassed

Tarika : Woh to roz achha nehin lagta kya? Wink

Abhijeet : Are maine woh kab kaha? Aap to mujhe har waqt achhi lagti hai...Embarrassed

Tarika : Sirf achhi? Aur kuch nehin...Wink

Abhijeet : Aur...aur...aap to janti hain na...Embarrassed

Tarika : Kya janti hoon? Tongue

Abhijeet : Achha to mere mukh se bina sune manengi nehin...Tongue

Tarika nods. Both are silent for few minutes.  Tarika moves forward.

Abhijeet : Are are kahan jaa rehi hei...Confused

Tarika : Abhijeet, tum to kuch bologe nehin to yahan khade rehne se kya faida?

Abhijeet murmurs : Sr Ins Abhijeet, kar kya rehe ho...3 hi to words hei...bol do...come on!

Tarika : Kya hua? Kya bol rehe ho?

Abhijeet promptly replies : 143!

Tarika : Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Abhijeet : Wohi jo tumne suna...

Tarika : Abhijeet mujhe tumse yeh umeed nehin thi...kaha vi to code main...

Abhijeet : Are Tarikaji aap to mayus ho gayi...thik hain keh dete hain - (embarrassing tone) main aap se aap se...

Tarika : Aage vi bolo Abhijeet...

Abhijeet : (Without taking a breadth) Main aapse bohot pyaar karta hoon... (then sigh)

Tarika blushes & looks down. When she is going to say, suddenly Abhijeet's phone rings. Abhijeet becomes angry. Its Daya...

Abhijeet receives the phone : Kya Daya, 2 minute baad call nehin kar sakta tha?

Daya : Sorry boss, woh ACP sir bula rehe hei tumhe, ek khoon ho gaya hei...

Abhijeet becomes serious & says : Main avi aata hoon...(cuts the call)

Abhijeet looks at Tarika & says : Tarikaji, lagta hain aaj vi hamari baat aadhuri rehe gayi...

Tarika : Kahan Abhijeet...tumne to kaha na aur mera jawab woh to tum jante hi ho...143!

Both smiles.




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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
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A VM showing why CID should end. Wink

http://www.4shared.com/video/fWuxsj0ece/Why_CID_should_end.html

Shocked Ouch D'oh Cry


In true FW ishtyle you need to take a case from any other Indian crime TV show and merge into CID making sure you make a mess of it. Tongue Instead of writing the story you need to write a detailed plot as if you were writing a detailed review in the EDT after watching the episode. You need to mention which show you first saw the case in and when you saw it and the changes FW made to fit it into CID. You can mention actors and CID cops if you like, but it isn't necessary. Remember though it has to be a detailed review so that anyone reading it can easily understand what the case was, how the investigation progressed, and what they "borrowed" from the other show.



OMG! Yesterday's CID case is almost similar with one CP case. Let me remind the case. Yes its Abducted [Episode 263] [28th June 2013]. I remember the CP case very well.

CP case LINK -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wIPTa37z-wk

It's too good but FW can't show any episode without murder. I hate it. Anyway come to the story, Shalini is coming back from office, its late night & kidnapped by 2 men. Fortunately, one auto driver notices it & follows that black Scorpio but he can't reach it as its night time & Scorpio's speed is too high. He informs CID about it. CID team reaches the spot. Wow DUO together! According to auto driver, it happens near Lotus Colony, Worli. Shalini reaches in cab, when she walks towards her house, a black Scorpio rushes there & one man comes out & forcefully take her in the Scorpio. Scorpio runs at high speed, he follows it till Dadar West but then Scorpio vanishes. Sachin alerts all tolls about this black Scorpio. Duo decides that they have to divide now to catch the Scorpio. Abhijeet sir & Nikhil go towards Bandra-Worli Sea link, while Daya sir & Pankaj towards Dadar - Matunga and Sachin, Purvi & Shreya go towards Wadala. These scenes are quite interesting. ACP sir & Freddy sir try to find out more info about Shalini. They get Shalini's Id card on the spot where it has happened. ACP sir informed her parents & got to know that one Avinash Chauhan disturbs Shalini from last 6 months. ACP sir orders Freddy sir to find out more info about Avinash Chauhan. With the help of experts, they find the FriendsBook account of Avinash along with more info...ACP sir calls Avinash's father to warn his son but Avinash is desperate. Other side, Duo & Sachin can't find the Scorpio & they are still on their way. Again filmy dialog by Avinash - Shalini, agar tum mere nehin hue to kisi aur ki vi nehin hogi...FW can't think something better! Anyway, now CID can trace the Scorpio through Avinash's mobile number. It's shown Worli...ACP sir informs duo & Sachin, they become surprised. Now they are coming back towards Worli. With the help of Mobile trackers, they reach at Chowpatty Beach where they find Avinash with the dead body of Shalini. Avinash looks devastated & mentally disturbed. He confesses that he loves Shalini a lot but she refuses her even she insults his father so he tries to take revenge. He adds that when his father calls, he understands that CID will reach him soon & Shalini can't be yours so he kills her. Abhijeet asks how he reaches here but he is not in state to reply more. ACP sir concludes that he needs psychiatrist & the court would decide about his punishment. Overall good episode! I like the chasing scenes specially how they show it, good direction! I wish that they would not kill Shalini.

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You have to write a short story with the following plot with present cast excluding lampposts, Tji, Nik, Pankaj, Shreya, and bringing in Vivek or Rajat sir...
Plot: A couple report a werewolf and hag at their newly built house. Soon several other surrounding families report the same. When CID is brought into the case they discover this news to be true. How does this case get resolved and are the werewolf and hag real?
Note: You need not write a full fledged, investigative story. 4-5 pages in MS Word in Times New Roman style and font size 11 will do.





MISSION HAG & WEREWOLF


FRIDAY NIGHT AT 10 PM

LADY : kitni baar kaha hein Raju exam se pehle TV dekhna nehin chahiye...kal Maths exam hei...ek din CID nehin dekhogi to kya hoga?

RAJU : Mom, I am ready for exam & u know na CID is my favourite serial.

MOM : Ufff! Pata nehin iss ladke ka kya hoga...CID aur HARRY POTTER ka bhoot kab niklega iske dimaag se! Thik hain 11 baje so jana...aur TV mat dekhna...

RAJU : Yes Mom!


NEXT DAY MORNING

There are too much crowd outside the Raju's flat. Raju along with his parents comes out to check what's happened. One couple is shouting that last night in their flat, they have seen a hag. They have just bought the flat few days ago bit now want to sell it. Everyone becomes shocked & confirms that it's unbelievable & can't be true. They must have hallucination of it. The couple becomes very angry.

One day has passed. Nothing happened.

Again a hag is seen in another flat of the same building. Now it's not possible that 2 families are going through same hallucination. It must be something wrong. They inform the secretary of the complex & decide to call the police.

SECRETARY : Hamare complex mein hi to ek police officer hain...pehle unse baat karte hai...

RAJU shouts : Vivek uncle!! [Yes, Raju is present throughout due to his curiosity about hag which he sees on TV only!]

They meet Vivek & he becomes shocked. He is quite sure that there must be some illegal activities.

Vivek confirms - aaj raat main aap ke building par nazar rakhunga...agar jarurat pare to kal police ko inform kar lenge...


AT NIGHT

Vivek is moving one floor to another of that building. 2 hours has passed but nothing happened. It's 12.30 am. He is on the terrace. He is feeling tired & sleepy due to hectic day. Thinking - haath mukh mein thoda paani de deta hoon...suddenly he hears a sound & turn around. He becomes shocked to see one hag standing just 10 feet away from him. He tries to take out his gun but before that 2 werewolves attack him. It's so sudden that Vivek can't react properly. He tries his best to fight with them but gets severely injured & becomes unconscious.


NEXT MORNING, AT CID BUREAU

Freddy is trying to remember something while Daya asks : Are Freddy kya hua?

FREDDY : Sir, main yaad karne ki kosis kar raha hoon ke aaj kis ka birthday hein par yaad hi nehin aa raha hei...

ABHIJEET : Aaj Vivek ka birthday hei...mere mobile par reminder aaya...

FREDDY : Are haan...

DAYA : Hum sabko use wish karna chahiye...

FREDDY : Sir, main phone karu?

Duo nods. Freddy calls Vivek. The phone is ringing but no one receives it & cut the call. Again Freddy tries. This time someone receives it.

FREDDY : Hello, Vivek, Happy birthday to you!

From another side a voice comes out : Main, Jogeswari Police Station se SI Pandey bol raha hoon...

Freddy becomes shocked while duo becomes confused to see facial expression of Freddy. Abhijeet asks with gesture. In reply, Freddy presses the loudspeaker on' button.

SI PANDEY : Aap kaun bol rehe hei...

ABHIJEET replied : Main CID se Sr Ins Abhijeet bol raha hoon...Vivek kahan hei?

SI PANDEY : Ohh Sir, Good morning Sir! Ohh Vivek sir CITY hospital mein admit hei...

They become shocked & shout together : Kya!

DAYA : Vivek ko kya hua hei?

FREDDY : Woh thik to hai na?

SI PANDEY : Sir, mujhe jyada to nehin pata par shayed kisi Hag ne attack kiya tha...

ABHIJEET (angrily) : Kya bakwas kar rehe ho? Hum avi City Hospital aate hei...


CITY HOSPITAL

CID team reaches. Vivek is still unconscious. Doctor says that his condition is really critical & also confirms that some animal has attacked Vivek. While Vivek's neighbour confirms that the attackers are Hag & 2 Werewolves.

Abhijeet becomes angry & asks : Kisne dekha Hag aur werewolf ko?

2 30+ guy come & confirm that they have shown hag & werewolves. They explains the whole incidents.

The CID team becomes shocked. Freddy wants to say something while Daya warns him by gesture.

ABHIJEET : Daya, yeh kaise ho sakta hei?

DAYA : Boss, mujhe kuch samjh mein nehin aa raha hei...

SACHIN : Sir, yeh vi ho sakta hei ke raat ke andhere mein unn logo se koi galti ho gayi hei..

ABHIJEET : Ho sakta hei magar itne logo se ek hi vul kaise ho sakta hei?

PURVI : Aur Sir, Vivek par vi to hamla hua hei...woh kisne kiya hoga?

DAYA : Abhijeet, mujhe lagta hei k eek baar Salunkhe sahab ko bula lena chahiye, Vivek ke ghao dekh kar woh kuch bata sake...

ABHIJEET : Sahi kaha Daya tumne...main unse avi baat karta hoon...aur tum, Sachin aur Purvi ke saath uss MKL Society mein jao jahan Vivek rehta hei...dekho agar kuch suraag mil jaye...

Daya, Sachin & Purvi leave while Abhijeet calls to Dr Salunkhe.

After an hour, still Vivek is unconscious. Dr Salunkhe reaches the hospital.

SALUNKHE : Abhijeet, yeh Vivek kaisa hei...

ABHIJEET : Avi vi behosh hei...Freddy room mein hei...chaliye wahan...


In Vivek's room,

Freddy is crying while Dr Salunkhe tries to console him...then he observes the injuries of Vivek.

SALUNKHE : Abhijeet, mujhe vi lagta hei kisi janwar ne hi hamla kiya tha...yeh dekho (pointing injury mark on Vivek's hand)

ABHIJEET : Sir, aur kuch?

SALUNKHE : Nehin Abhijeet aur kuch to kehna muskil hai...

ABHIJEET : To phir chalte hei...Freddy tum yahan rukoge kya?

Freddy nods. Abhijeet & Salunkhe leave.


AT MKL SOCIETY

DAYA : Sachin, tum yahan ki logo se puchtaj karo, main aur Purvi jara Terrace check karte hei...

On Terrace,

PURVI : Sir, aapko kya lagta hei ke hag aur werewolves sach mein hote hei ?

One voice comes out - Haan kyun nehin...maine vi dekhe hei...

Daya & Purvi become surprised & look around & notice an 8-10 yrs old boy standing in front of the door. They go forward.

DAYA : Beta, aapka naam kya hei aur aap akele yahan kya kar rehe ho?

BOY : Mujhe pata hain aap Daya uncle ho jo saare darwaja tod dete hei...(look at Purvi & says) aur aap Purvi aunty...mujhe aap dono bohot pasand ho...(looking around) aur Abhijeet uncle kahan hei?

Daya & Purvi smile.

DAYA : Woh yahan nehin aaye...

BOY promptly : Kyun?

They smile again...Purvi tries to divert the topic & says - Tum hamare bare mein to sab jante ho par yeh nehin bataya ke tumhara naam kya hei?

BOY : Mera naam Raju hei...

DAYA : Waaf...kitna pyara naam...to Raju tum batao tumne hag aur werewolves kahan dekhe hei?

RAJU : TV par...Harry Potter!

[NOTE - Raju believes that CID officers are real & all the cases shown on TV are also real. He also believes that HP is also real one.]

Daya & Purvi heave a sigh of relief. They smile.

Suddenly Raju's mother comes on the terrace & scolds Raju.

PURVI : Mam, aapko dhyaan rakhna chahiye...agar kuch ho jata to?

RAJU'S MOTHER : Sorry madam...magar kya kare yeh ladka bohot jyada shararti hei...koi baat nehin suntan..

DAYA : Achha aap hag aur werewolf ke bare mein kuch janti hei?

She nods negatively. And she leaves with Raju.

DAYA : Purvi, achhi tarah dhoondo...kuch na kuch jarur milega...

They search for few minutes & Daya gets a fur.

DAYA : Yeh dekho Purvi, ek baal mila hei...

PURVI : Sir, yeh Vivek ka to nehin ho sakta phir kiska? Attacker ka?

DAYA : Ho sakta hei Purvi...par exactly kya hei yeh to Salunkhe sir hi bata sakte hei...


FORENSIC LAB

TRIO, Sachin & Purvi enter.

ACP :  Salunkhe kya pata chala?

Dr Salunkhe looks very confused.

ABHIJEET : Kya hua Salunkhe sahab?

He is silent. Everyone becomes more confused.

ACP Pradyuman steps forward to Dr Salunkhe & places his hand on doctor's shoulder & calmly asks - Kya hua? Itna tension mein kyun ho?

Dr Salukhe replies - Boss, woh log sach bol rehe hei!

DAYA : (confused) Kaun log sach bol rehe hei Sir?

SALUNKHE glances at everyone & says - Daya tumhe jo baal terrace par mila tha woh ek wolf ka hi hei...DNA text se mujhe pata chala...ab yeh sirf wolf hei yah werewolf yeh tum log dhundo...

ACP Pradyuman becomes very angry & says - Salunkhe tera dimaag kharab ho gaya hei...sahar ke beecho beech wolf kaise aa sakta hei aur werewolf hone ka to sawal i nehin udhta...

SALUNKHE : Sir, main vi bohot hairan hoon magar DNA text galat to nehin ho sakta na...

ABHIJEET : Magar Salunkhe sahab, yeh impossible hei...

ACP : Abhijeet, agar Salunkhe itne yaqeen se saath kehe raha hei to ho sakta hei koi wolf galti se yahan aa gaya...

PURVI : Sir, magar agar yeh sach mein wolf hei to humhe Wildlife Committee ko inform karna chahiye...

ACP : Haan jarur...tum unhe phone karke inform kardo...aur Abhijeet, Vivek ki kya halat hei? Hosh aaya use?

ABHIJEET : Nehin Sir, Freddy wahan par hi hei...usne avi tak phone nehin kiya...

Suddenly, Daya's phone rings. It's Freddy. Daya presses the "loudspeaker on" button so that everyone can hear it.

FREDDY : Daya sir, Vivek ko hosh aa gaya...

ACP : That's great Freddy! Vivek avi kaise hei?

FREDDY : Sir, bas hosh mein aaya hei par avi vi halat kuch thik nehin hei...par sir woh aap logo se baat karna chahta hei...

ACP : Okay Freddy, hum avi aate hei...


AT HOSPITAL, VIVEK'S ROOM

ACP : Kaiso ho Vivek?

Vivek is trying to get up & everyone stops him to do so.

VIVEK in feeble voice : Sir, main thik hoon...

DAYA : Tum humse kyun milna chah rehe the...

VIVEK : Sir, main aap logo ko kuch batana chahta hoon...

ABHIJEET : Kya?

VIVEK : Sir, main janta hoon ke aap mujhpar biswas nehin karenge magar maine sach mein Hag aur werewolf dekhe hei?

TRIO altogether shouts : Kya!!!

VIVEK Continues : Haan sir, main sach bol raha hoon aur 2 werewolves hei jisme mujhpar hamla kiya...

SALUNKHE : Vivek, tum sure ho ke woh werewolves hi the...

VIVEK : Yes sir! (boldly)

ABHIJEET : Sir, yeh kaise ho sakta hei...werewolf sirf kahani mein hote hei...

ACP : Wohi to Abhijeet!

FREDDY : Sir, yeh vi to ho sakta hei ke kisine mask use kiya ho?

DAYA : Nehin Freddy, kyunki humhe terrace par ek baal mila hei aur Salukhe sir ne bataya ke woh ek wolf ka hei...

Freddy becomes shocked & scared.

DAYA continues : Sir, ab kya kare?

ACP : Karna kya hei Daya...hag ho yah werewolves hum use pakad hi lenge...

SALUNKHE : Kya bol rehe hein Sir aap...yeh impossible kaam hei...yeh werewolf hei koi criminal nehin ke CID use pakad lega...

ABHIJEET : CID ke liye kuch vi impossible nehin hei...


THAT NIGHT AT MKL SOCIETY

TRIO, Dr Salunkhe, Freddy, Sachin, Purvi , Vivek (Yes, everyone tries to stop him but he wants to be the part of this mission)and 2 men named Kushal & Rajeev from Wildlife Committee are present in that society.

Their positions are - Duo, Vivek & Kushal on the terrace; ACP Pradyuman, Dr Salunkhe & Rajeev near the entrance of that building; Freddy, Sachin & Purvi inside the society & continuously moving from one side to another.

It's a full-moon night. Till 1am, nothing happens.

Suddenly they hear a howling sound. They become alert. As they are connected through phones, ACP Pradyuman alerts his team specially duo because they are on the terrace.


ON THE TERRACE

ABHIJEET : Lo bhai ab werewolf se ladna padhega...

VIVEK : Sir, Hag vi hei saath mein...

DAYA : Par hamare paas koi vi special haathiyaar nehin hei...

KUSHAL : Kyun, ACP Diler ke paas to bohot modern equipment hei super villains se ladne ke liye...

DAYA : Woh kya hei key eh hamara pehla case hei...next time se ho jayega...

KUSHAL : (confused & scared) Haan agar aaj zinda rehe to...

ABHIJEET : Are...yeh kya! Aap desh ke best CID team ke saath hei aur pehle hi negative baatein...

DAYA : CID mein negative baton ka koi jagah nehin...

ABHIJEET : Don't worry! Hum mein se koi vi marega...

Vivek hears a sound & says - Sir lagta hei...aa gaya!

In the middle of the terrace, a hag along with 2 werewolves stands.

Everyone becomes shocked to see these...duo & Kushal can't believe their eyes, while Vivek thinks that he was right woh mera bhram nehin tha'

Kushal becomes so scared that he becomes unconscious.

Duo shared a meaningful glances & stands & steps forward with guns aimed at them. They start firing but bullet has not affected supernatural animals. Duo becomes tensed.

ACP Pradyuman asks for update while VIvek gives the update. They become tensed to hear that gun is useless in this case. ACP Pradyuman orders everyone to come on the terrace to help them.

Here on the terrace, duo realizes that they have to use their physical strength only. And they start fighting with werewolves. Vigorous fighting occurs. Duo becomes injured a lot but they are duo so they continue fighting.

In the meantime, rest of the team reach there. They notice a hag stands on the middle of the terrace & watching their fighting.

ACP Pradyuman orders everyone to step slowly from behind & catch the hag. They do so & ACP Pradyuman catches the hag!

"PAKAD LIYA! PAKAD LIYA!! ACP uncle ne hag ko pakad liya!!"

"Daya uncle, Abhijeet uncle, come on come on...aap werewolves se nehin har sakte ho...aap super hero ho..."

RAJU'S MOTHER : Raju...Raju...kya hua? Beta 8 baj gaye...school hei...exam hei...uth jao jaldi...

Raju is sleeping on his bed & dreaming & continues shouting - Abhijeet uncle ne pakad liya...Daya uncle uth jao aur pakad lo jaldi se...

RAJU'S MOTHER : (scolding tone) Raju!! Kya sapna dekh rehe ho...hey bhagwan yeh ladka sapne mein vi CID dekh raha hei...

Then she gives a jerk on his shoulder & Raju wakes up & asks - Mom, ACP uncle, Daya uncle aur Abhijeet uncle ne werewolves aur hag ko pakad liya...ab woh humhe kavi tang nehin karenge...

RAJU'S MOTHER : (Teasing tone) Aur yeh werewolf aur hag humhe kahan pareshan kar rehe the...sapne mein?

Raju embarrasses & realizes that it was his crazy dream. Still he can't believe that it's a dream only. He still thinks that his CID uncles & Supernatural animals still exist in the world.

END


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