My Stories/OS/VMs - Page 34

First of all Congrats on turning Rockerz !! 🥳

Read the story !!!! Very different and interesting. It has everything that you ( even me ) would have asked for.😉😆👏 Imagining the story made me happy.. specially the ending, you know why!!

Jokes apart, the concept was interesting and handled differently. Nowhere did I feel bored , inspite of the length! I am not discussing it scene by scene as not many have read it yet. So dont wanna spoil the fun! Anyways, Great job...👍🏼 Looking forward for more !

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congratulation on becoming rockerEdited by sherdilali - 11 years ago

Many many Congratulations Deba on becoming Rockerz🤗... I will try to read ur Story Soon...

Finished Deba...congrats on the story...it's a very nice one. 👏

Congratulations on turning a Rockerz !!!! 🥳

Just finished the story Sree. I should be in meetings, but I keep reading it in between my meetings. 😆 Anyways on to your story. Great story. I didn't mind the A-T relationship, even though I have something against it, but it was nice the way you handled it. Other than that: great work!!! 👏

 NICE STORY DIDI!!!!!... 😊😊😊😃😃  

First of all thanx to all of you...🤗

Now come to the story...actually I want to write a story based on corruption of the system...I took two characters from the CID team as i personally believe that a team is running through the 15 yrs but there is no such corrupt officers except Daksh...its very hard to believe at least in the present scenario...People generally take bribes either for their greed or for the miserable condition or in any helpless situation...I tried my best showing all those type in my story...Generally innocent & honest people always the target of the system so i tried to show it by Abhijeet as it is more easy to write...

@Visrom...i think now my views are clear to u that why i wrote it in this way...

@Shagnika...i know 😆...i can understand...😉

@Sri...thanx for reading my story...😃

@sherdilali & @ sonpaapdi...thanx for your liking 😃

Edited by debasree04 - 11 years ago

Congrats debasreeji on becoming Rockerz.
Aapki story bahot achi hai. But cid ke forensic doctor ki certificate nakli? Check kiye bina hi leliye doctor ko. Aapki imagination achi hai. Hospital ka topic bhi great hai.
NICE story debasreeji. Expect more n more good stories.

just started reading it sree...the start is good...will complete reading shortly😊