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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sree I will read it as soon as possible

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 12 years ago

title seems interesting !!! Will have to take out time to read !!!

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 12 years ago

A very very good story Debo!!! You have indeed shown the nature of Abhijeet too well... the investigative plot was also very good and the ending scene was the cherry on the cake!!! Keep writing... 😃😃

Edited by Rashida13 - 12 years ago

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Shreya

@Minionite

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Posted: 12 years ago

Will read it as soon as possible. 😊

Edited: I meant to read the story a few days before but my Internet was down so I just finished reading it. Overall, I loved the story Debashree. You really captured everyone's characteristics with great ease. Keep up the great work. 👏

Edited by luv_cid_shreya - 12 years ago

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Roopal Gupta

@..Roopal..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing story👏👏👏👏👏
Loved the way u portrayed Abhijeet's character👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
The ending was just superb and the emotions throughout the story were amazing.

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.Crystal.

@.Crystal.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing story...very good work!! 😃

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Aditi_97

@Aditi_97

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for the PM...will read it afters...😊

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Shaadrita

@away_from_TV

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks a ton fopr the PM.. Will read it ASAP.. Have high expectations from you.. Title is damn interesting... Curiosity building up... Edited by Saadrita - 12 years ago

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DEEPIKA BANERJEE

@deepikabanerjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

its very good. You have truly shown the true nature of Abhijeet, sacrificing, risk bearing and loyal to ACP. the last scene was too good and the way you have shown him in command was very apt.😊

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