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Hey debasree i read ur story khel 7 dino ka, its really intresting... Enjoyed reading it 😃
Old memories from old episodes and all old CID officers together wow
What if they make a story like this one in which they invite all of their old officers 😲   😛
Story was amazing 👍🏼

mind blowing story.    Loved it...love the End... 😃...they should celebrate their 17th anniversary like this only...they should call all their ex officers     it will be memorable 😃 Edited by uhs313 - 10 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Veena..

Hey debasree i read ur story khel 7 dino ka, its really intresting... Enjoyed reading it 😃
Old memories from old episodes and all old CID officers together wow
What if they make a story like this one in which they invite all of their old officers 😲   😛
Story was amazing 👍🏼

Thanx a lot Veena for reading it & for liking it 😃

This content was originally posted by: uhs313

mind blowing story.    Loved it...love the End... 😃...they should celebrate their 17th anniversary like this only...they should call all their ex officers     it will be memorable 😃

Thanx a lot for reading & liking it 😃

Hey some times mistakes will happen.. 

It was just mindblowing Debasree. I loved the way you brought all the 40 ex officers and doctors back. It was very nice to imagine. A beautiful story I must say. Innovative concept with a fresh plot of finishing a case and rescuing everyone in seven days just like Akhir Chaunati but without HD. It was really refreshing to read about the old cops again especially Viren meeting Abhi sir. I could visualise it happening right in front of me. I like the name decoding that you showed which is a pretty new idea. I also liked the bonding you showed between the old and new officers it will always remain a fact that CID is family and will remain one. The bonding between Trio was fantasticly shown as well. They all care about each other soo much. Overall a fantastic story with lovely bonding and it was nice to see all the officers involved at some point especially liked DCP's party. A really nice surprise. Thank you for providing us such lovely story Debasree.

This content was originally posted by: honey71

Hey some times mistakes will happen.. 

the story is really awesome.. 

Good to see all the old cops again..

fw mistakes also helps us to write our own story..

Investigation part is nice..

I know - 'To Err is human' but when great people do some big blunder, it could not be accepted. We can't accept such mistakes because there is Singh Sir, who always check all stories as we heard.

Anyway thanx for reading the story & comment !! 😊

I will read as soon as possible.. I know I am late.. Sorry for that..

This content was originally posted by: Soni.

It was just mindblowing Debasree. I loved the way you brought all the 40 ex officers and doctors back. It was very nice to imagine. A beautiful story I must say. Innovative concept with a fresh plot of finishing a case and rescuing everyone in seven days just like Akhir Chaunati but without HD. It was really refreshing to read about the old cops again especially Viren meeting Abhi sir. I could visualise it happening right in front of me. I like the name decoding that you showed which is a pretty new idea. I also liked the bonding you showed between the old and new officers it will always remain a fact that CID is family and will remain one. The bonding between Trio was fantasticly shown as well. They all care about each other soo much. Overall a fantastic story with lovely bonding and it was nice to see all the officers involved at some point especially liked DCP's party. A really nice surprise. Thank you for providing us such lovely story Debasree.

Thanx a lot Soni for detailed feedback 😃

I enjoyed a lot writing this story specially old-new interaction scenes. I could do much better on those scene if i would realize that story contest blunder. 😆😳

This content was originally posted by: Reshma.

I will read as soon as possible.. I know I am late.. Sorry for that..

No need to say sorry dear...take ur time...story vi yahan hei aur tum vi ...koi jaldi nehin hei 😆