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"The series of murder"(AR fanfic) (Page 8)

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged

seems intersting..

cant wait..

thnx for the pm...

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interisting promo.waiting egarly for update. thanks for pm.

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nice promo do pm me the next part

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Nice part and promo buddy.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Waiting 4 d part.
Update soon.
T.c.

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nice part..

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thanks for all ur lovely comment,will be updating by today evening or 2morrow
 
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for all those who have forgotten the story oo this ff because of my delayed updated i have once again posted intro and part 1 and for all those who remember my ffBig smile scroll down for part 2

The Series Of Murder 

 

Introduction:

     "Armaan pick up your phone , its ringinging from past 10mins, Get up armaan !that ringtone of yours is getting on my nerve ." "My dear wifey will u stop irritating me and if u so want the phone to be silent then better pick it up."Oh god if this Armaan doesnt pick up the phone ,then 3,2,1,Tring Tring, here my cellphone rings."Hello Rahul"From the other end the person speaks"Ridzi u have a new casefor u".Riddhima(ridzi) speaks"Rahul i am already overburdend with cases,cant u take the case" Rahul says" sorry Ridzi , strict orders from the chief that this case should be taken by Mr or Mrs Malik only,the only way to escape is to ask ur darling husband to take this case"

"Ok fine i will see what is to be done sms me the address and send the forensic team there"says an irritated ridzi.

   

    While ridzi is getting ready she sees Armaan getting up and wering his shirt."Now where are u going Armaan?" "jaan i am surely not letting u go all alone at this time of night"replied Armaan."your words seem as if i am a ten year old kid and not a crime branch officer."said ridzi irritated."whatever u r but for me u r my baby,shona"."Then why dint u pick up u r phone,its all because of u that i got one more burden on my hand". "Darling but u love ur work right?". "yup Armaan i love my work but right now i have two unsolved case in my kitty and i need to concentrate on them, i have to get it solved". "Thats the point shona u have two and i have 5 unsolved cases right now so i am not taking one more responsibility, but i will surely help u" replied Armaan. "fine now lets leave rahul has messaged me the address and i think that this case is something serious and unusual".

 They both rush to the crime scene. 

 Part 1

           Armaan and Ridzi on reaching the crime scene saw that the forensic team headed by Dr Muskaan had already reached there and had started their work. Ridzi was more than happy  to see muski's (muskaan) team because muski was not only her best friend but also one of the bests doctor of their forensic department.Muski on seeing them both came towards them and then she started while they were walking towards the body,' the girl is a 9year old she is stabbed by a very sharp knife, the murder has taken place around  an hour ago i.e. at 1:15.' ' Great job muski' said ridzi examining the body. ' By the way whose heading this case u or ur hubby?' asked muski.'My dear bhabhi I am here escorting my pretty wife' replied armaan'stop teasing me Armaan your stupid Bro hasn't proposed me yet' said muski making a sad face and while they both were chit chatting ridzi was examining the crime scene. The body was lying in an upside down position i.e. the girls front side was touching the floor and her back were she was stabbed was lying facing them. The forensic team had already marked the area were her body  was lying so she asked one of the helpers to turn the body .meanwhile she enquire about who had seen the body first and reported about it

         Meanwhile Armaan and muski had also joined her, ridzi after talking to the person who had informed the police came to know that he had seen the girls body around at 1:30 on his way home after a party and he also told her that the street was deserted and when he stopped here he had not seen anybody close to the body, then ridzi allowed him to leave and went towards the body.

 Ridzi ? armaan, muski (she called them as they were examining the crime scene for clues).

Armaan - wats it dear?

Ridzi - see on her right hand "Ranveer" is inscribed

Muskaan - why would a small girl tattoo someones name on her arms

Armaan - even I would be scared to do that, by the way riddhima is the girl's identity known?

Ridzi - nope Armaan, I have called rahul and asked him to look if there is any missing complaint lodged for a nine year old girl

Muski - and the most amazing thing is that there is no bruises on her body means..

Armaan - the girl very well knew her murderer

"Tring Tring", ridzis phone rings and she sees that its rahul calling

Ridzi - hello, did u find any missing complaint, when was the complaint lodged?

Rahul - listen ridzi I will update u about that but first u have to deal with one more murder, just at a distance of about seven kms from where u are,muskis team is also suppose to join u.

Ridzi - Rahul are u out of ur mind, here I have just started this case and  ur giving me another one?

Rahul - chill ridzi, for now u r close to the crime scene so u have to go, we will see later wat can be done.

Ridzi - hmm...fine

She cuts the phone and then turns towards muski and armaaan

Ridzi - muski we have a new case just few miles kms away from here, let half ur team stay here I will ask Anjali(ridzis assistant) to head them so we have to leave quick and armaan u better go home and catch on ur sleep

 

Part 2

 

'Armaan u r not arguing on this topic further, its final that u r heading home and catching on ur sleep, me and muski r going to the crime scene'exclaimed an irritated ridhima. 'But baby I cant sleep without u'replied Armaan with a cute puppy like face.Ridzi heard a few people chuckling at his comment but she herself couldn't stop blushing and getting lost in his eyes, they were completely lost in each other when they  heard muski speaking, 'oyye my dear love birds if u too r done, then, ridzi lets make a leave or we will be real late'. An embarrassed ridzi kissed armaan on his cheeks winked at him and left. 'Oyye hoye'were the only words Armaan could manage to speak.

 

'Ridzi were r we heading too?.i mean were has the murder taken place?' asked muski."Its some place or rather a road called 'Ambhedkar Chowk'"replied ridzi.In just around 15-20 mins they reached the murder site. On getting out of the car and seeing the body both the girls had their mouth hanging open, muski and ridzi ran towards the body and muski twisted the bodies right arm, 'damn'said muski. 'I cant believe this! she is murderd in the same manner as the earlier girl was and even she has that 'Ranveer' tattoo on her arms.'said ridzi. Muski told ridzi that she would carry on few tests to know about the time of the death, her age and some other details..Muski and her team had started her work in full swing while ridzi examined the surroundings for clue. Again there wasn't a murder weapon, and there wasn't any other clue either.

 

One of ridzi's team member came and told her that the man who informed about the body is kept waiting. she then moved out of the crime scene to meet the man who was kept waiting at one of the small desks and bench arrangement built  to carry on the work for tonight. Seeing the man she thought that today is surely the day for shocks. Yes he was the same man who had reported the earlier murder and this time he was weeping, as he was being questioned by Atul Joshi,one of the members of ridzis team. On seeing ridzi coming he started, ' ridhima look at this man he is the first one to see both the bodies still he is saying that he hasn't seen any body around, I feel he is the murderer and he is just acting innocent.'hmm?Atul let me interrogate him my way please.' said ridzi.Atul nodded and left ridzi alone with that man.

 

'Okay now lets start with u r name'said ridzi with a notebook and pen in her hand ready to write the details. 'Mam pleas listen to me I haven't done anything, I don't even know these girls, and mam if I had done the murder I wouldn't have informed the crime branch office neither would I have waited here till u all reach.' said the man. 'Your name please' said riddhima in an higher tone. 'L..L?Luc..ky Singh, mam please I haven't done anything' pleaded the guy. 'Listen Mr. Singh I haven't accused so stop pleading,take this paper and write up all ur details like u r full name,address,age,maritial status, children ur job etc, I just need these information and then u can leave." said ridzi

 

'Riddhima why did u just leave him like that? I know that I work under u so I don't have a write to question u but..'ridzi cut Atul in between his sentence and said 'Atul for me we all are a team i.e we all r equal, and concerning u r question atul,he is the one who informed us about the murder,I took all the required information from him and has sent the details to rahul for enquiry, if we find anything spooky about him then we will surely arrest him, if we go on arresting the people who help us, then people would be scared about helping as it there are very few people who inform us about these things as they are scared of the police jhamela.'as ridzi finished this explanation of hers she saw atul smiling. 'You think so practically ridzi that's why u r our boss'said atul for which he got an angry glare from ridzi who then smiled and walked towards muski.

 

While she was walking towards muski her cell started ringing, it was rahul she picked it up and her face had an expression as if she received one more shock.She hung up the phone and went towards muski.

 

"muski u wont believe this i just got a call from Rahul he told me that these two kids are daughters of famous people,the first one daughter of a famous politician and other of an actor.They dint lodge a report either,confusing isnt it?"

'Hmm..may be the person who kidnapped the kids would have blackmailed them or some thing like that'suggested muski.

'And by the way even this girls is aged somewhere around 9'

Before ridzi could say something her phone beeped indicating message.After reading the message she told muski that they both along with atul are quickly to report to Keerti mam at the headquarters.

why has keerti called an urgent meeting?
lovuall
nikki
please guys do do comment


Edited by niknavyu - 20 June 2011 at 2:37am

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