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"The series of murder"(AR fanfic)

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hi guys i am starting a new AR fanfic.I know that my first fanfic "Life Is Never Unfair-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1650019" is not even close to completition,but this new idea was really eating up my head so i had to post it
 
  The series of Murder
 
 
Introduction:
     "Armaan pick up your phone , its ringinging from past 10mins, Get up armaan !that ringtone of yours is getting on my nerve Angry." "My dear wifey will u stop irritating me and if u so want the phone to be silent then better pick it up.Sleepy"Oh god if this Armaan doesnt pick up the phone ,then 3,2,1,Tring Tring, here my cellphone rings."Hello RahulCry"From the other end the person speaks"Ridzi u have a new casefor u".Riddhima(ridzi) speaks"Rahul i am already overburdend with cases,cant u take the case" Rahul says" sorry Ridzi , strict orders from the chief that this case should be taken by Mr or Mrs Malik only,the only way to escape is to ask ur darling husband to take this case"
"Ok fine i will see what is to be done sms me the address and send the forensic team there"says an irritated ridzi.Unhappy
   
    While ridzi is getting ready she sees Armaan getting up and wering his shirt."Now where are u going Armaan?" "jaan i am surely not letting u go all alone at this time of night"replied Armaan."your words seem as if i am a ten year old kid and not a crime branch officer."said ridzi irritated."whatever u r but for me u r my baby,shona"."Then why dint u pick up u r phone,its all because of u that i got one more burden on my hand". "Darling but u love ur work right?". "yup Armaan i love my work but right now i have two unsolved case in my kitty and i need to concentrate on them, i have to get it solved". "Thats the point shona u have two and i have 5 unsolved cases right now so i am not taking one more responsibility, but i will surely help u" replied Armaan. "fine now lets leave rahul has messaged me the address and i think that this case is something serious and unusual".
 
     They both rush to the crime scene.
 
 
 
guys please please tell me if i should continue this ff
what do u all think about this concept is it wort to be continued?
i am waiting with my fingers crossed for your reactions and comment ,they really matter a lot to me.
 
 
THANKS
nikki
 
Index
Part 1 - page 4
note   - page 7
promo  - page 8
part 2 - page 9
part 3 - page 14
enjoy reding
lovuall
nikki


Edited by niknavyu - 20 June 2011 at 7:05am

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
hey
amazing concept...luvd it
so dey r crime branch people...sounds interesting
do cont soon wid it
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wow another one!
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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaaz_91

hey
amazing concept...luvd it
so dey r crime branch people...sounds interesting
do cont soon wid it
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yup they are crime branch officers
will update soon
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Originally posted by ammy_ka_ashu

heyy this sounds really interesting! i def. want to read more of it!
pleaseee cont super super super soon with part 1!
will try to update as fast as possible
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wow another one!
intro sounds good
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yup another one
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