Originally posted by: heermeherHello Geet kab iski hogayee haan
btw i felt something missing here when they return to the party till the time he so called propose to her.
He doesnot even tell anyone that he is married here he is accepting his luv to her
Dont you think any girl will be confused and that too a girl who doesnot even knw how does it feel being luved
I m feeling you are partial towards maan here and you didnt mention why was he all of sudden so goody with her. Just to kiss her he arranged so much is it he didnt even bother to know whether she had something to eat or not is tho acha Karan tha atleast he was worried about her food.
Dont tell me he couldnt get the time in the whole party to come and meet her infront of everyone that sounds pathetic for MAAN sigh khurana and when karan's parents where talking he was dreaming yaar usko sach mein pata nahi lagta kab dream karna chaiye kab nahi π‘ Any girl will feel unsecured in this situation when this guy doesnot even bother to come and talk to her in the party now he says y didnt she come to him hypocrite.
Kudos to the write for this part no doubt about it π thanks sanju yaar bura mat mana he mera view tha
Originally posted by: sanjeevani09
dnt worry heer. i wont be partial to maan. he wont get anything so easily. geet is focussed on what she wants. and wont budge. wait for next part before rating me partial. she didnt kiss him. the child woman has her fancies.i dnt mind u people commenting and writting ur views. its ur view and i respect them. i also get to analyse my characters and keep a check on how i want to mould my characters into. these feedback also help me see if im telling what i want to convey. u dnt know what i have in store so plzzz go ahead and comment. i will keep defending my characters as they r my children.
Originally posted by: sanjeevani09
dnt worry heer. i wont be partial to maan. he wont get anything so easily. geet is focussed on what she wants. and wont budge. wait for next part before rating me partial. she didnt kiss him. the child woman has her fancies.i dnt mind u people commenting and writting ur views. its ur view and i respect them. i also get to analyse my characters and keep a check on how i want to mould my characters into. these feedback also help me see if im telling what i want to convey. u dnt know what i have in store so plzzz go ahead and comment. i will keep defending my characters as they r my children.Oh thanks S for writing this, even i did not like Maan behaving pathetic, ofcourse Geet should not allow him to kiss her gud going, but this part is killing me somewhere, sorry no offense to your writing but, it was simply awesome, but Maan treating Geet like this I do not like it
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