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Opposites Attract - Maaneet FF Thread #3 - Page 74

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

She didn't know how to dance but she was taking dance classes. . . .

 
she very well knows how to dance, she spoke a lie to avoid dancing with kabir. had she known Maan too was interestedin dancing she wud have made another lie.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mystique_girl

would like to mention that you write so realistically that  most of the times i can see the "movie" infront of my eyes - dadima and geet dancing, maan and dadima dancing , other relatives...


you have this unusual knack of including small emotions in your updates which are very realistic...not everybody can attract readers as much as you can with your simple and creative writing...

i have no issues with the pace...it seems like i am seeing the progress in the relationship a few days at a time...till its interesting - i'm fine with it πŸ˜ƒ

 
 
thanks i try to b convincing enuf.
actually the basic plot of the story was slow attraction but when emotions will flow they will come with a bang.
personally i think either u r attracted on the first meet or else u want to understand the person and u very unknowingly fall for him or her
ambbiha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

i loved ur ff

awesome update
continue soon
sanjeevani09 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sldeeps

such a smooth flow of the story loving the progress in the story day by day and this part is very sweet , cute and romantic as well

sanju umah for u specially for this partπŸ˜‰

listened to the song as well - it's really good ... thanx for the link😊

 
 
finally someone is listening to the song links i provide... thank u.
 i take time to find the most appropriate song and happy that atleast a few hear to it.
it was a very old melody... asha bhonsle sang it for Waqt in 1965. but very nice song
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. luved d family moment they all shared.
PaintedSky thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan ! cI dont understand him... why he so rude ? who ruined his past??
---nishu--- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
but maaneet dance to banta tha yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dance dear...
loved it
gunjar thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it alot thank u thanku a lot...
Awesome Update...
Continue soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update ...πŸ‘
The story is progressing slowly so our interest and involvement as well..
Loved the dancing sequence and Maaneet's photo session...
will wait for the update...
continue soon