Originally posted by: zaara2212πfirst one to comment
nice, yes Maan did rightπ
if he keeps telling that Geet is his wife, there are chances that Geet might be under too much scrutiny...after all our munda is smart π³
I am loving the story now more π ...hope this would bring Maan and Geet a step closer as hubby and wifey π
precap is interesting
Originally posted by: niddzzwell...well...well...me is saluting maan babus brain...not bad...!!π³π
puri raat jag ke phayda hua...atul ka ticket dusre din hi cut gaya...!!!πbichara ladki ke chackae mein kya ho gaya...but he very well deserves it...!!πMAAN KI GEET se panga liya...ab bhukto...!!!π³πwaise why did maan make her wear the pink shirt he got...????πaur geet ne tension me pucha b nahi ..agar koi aur din hota to left right interrogation karti...!! koi nai pink shirt use to ho gay varna maan kabhi bhi ja ke use woh nahi deta...actually buy hi nahi karta...!!ππ³geet till last moment din realize it was her pati-devs plan...!! tube light..lolππloved it how maan asked her...happy ??π³ππprecap sounds interesting...ufff...so geet will b bck to her bubbly self...me iz missing kavyas high voltage self appreciation talks ans geets single liners on her takks...!!πππ
Originally posted by: jazzeretteIt was perfectly scripted out!! Excellent!!
I was kind of hoping you wouldn't go with the usual "she-is-my-wife-how-dare-you" routine...but what you wrote bowled me over!!
Brilliant plan...though sadly, not everyone has contacts like Maan to tackle men like Atul.Awesome update!! An looking forward to the promising pre-cap.
Originally posted by: mystique_girlwow yaar...fabulous update...liked it too much...
Maan is really a hero - you have made his character so balanced and strong - he is intelligent, confident and has a great presence of mind - i just hope he had the right balance of emotions - but I know he will thanks to youGeet is a smart girl...i like her too...just today's modern woman...lovely update...waiting for one more...maybe tomorrow?π
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