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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 94)

Riddma Newbie
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
A lovely update thank you so much x x

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jazzerette IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
@Maaneet...I really love how Maan handled Geet and the sense of shame she was subjecting herself to. She will come out stronger from it, Maan has no doubt about it ...and so do we. 

@Naini-Rishabh...loved the four parts so far. The small progresses they are making...the one-step-forward-one-step-back routine...the past and present contrasts albeit the similarities. Wonderful!! 

And...loved both the songs...they are part of my current "dance-away" playlist.


Edited by jazzerette - 17 July 2011 at 4:16am

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Saams IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Sorry dear for not coming up here for past few weeks..I had been really caught up with some work.I had joined up for a new job,so I was pretty busy trying to cope up with the new office.I hope you understand.

well,coming to the updates,it was all so beautiful.Actually,I was a bit surprised to see Dev entering the scenes.But then I loved it when Rishab ended up punching him.hehe.

Last parts had put more light on to the inner feelings of R-N.I hope nothing would stop them from nowon.

Okay dear,I have ended up giving my first longest comment on this ff.Please forgive me for not showing up earlier.Insha Allah,next time onwards I'll be regular here.

with love
Sam

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ayu14 Senior Member
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Wow so many update back to back
I didn't even get time to blink once between ur updates
I loved it to the core
Especially how geet and maan's present made Naini reminiscence her past with rishabh
The way rishabh is trying to get back Naini in his life
Being there for her and yet giving her space
I hope things go well for them now
Especially when Naini has accepted the only way she was surviving till now was on the knowledge that he was there somewhere near to her
Do continue soon
Ps I love ur ff though it's not the first time I am stating it
But what surprises me is that I have never ever been so much interested in any other characters of any ff it was only maan and geet that held my attention but rishabh and Naini is the only exception where I wait for there story too...

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hamini_yash Senior Member
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
wow reading so many updates seems to be a dream Question . that too about naini and rishab.
anyways i liked everything you wroteThumbs Up, poor naini. why is she bottling up her feelings like this?
Its too much pain to even imagineCry. Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry
Rishab is truly short temperedAngry, god his response scared meShocked!!!!!!!!!!!
please update more

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for another one.
Naini is trying her level best to run away from Rishabh's thoughts and piercing gaze.
Guess the club's deafening sound did  the trick,
Rishabh subtly trying to impress her was so sweet.
He was also so desperately trying to draw her to him.
Little did he know that she was super ready and desperate more than him.
Naini nicely escaped with her animal shelter friends.
Guess that was not too good an idea after all.
Rishabh was so jealous and possessive.
He thought she did it on purpose Shocked.
No wonder he was so furious and dragged her out giving one solid punch to her friend.
Wonder what Naini has to say and how she is going to make up.
Waiting for the next one.
Hope i commented before you woke up Big smile


Edited by Ramhari - 17 July 2011 at 9:34am

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tanya_vi Goldie
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged

Wow what a fantastic treat for me!! I was away for the weekend .Came back now. Took a peep at IF and voila!!so many updates from my favourite writer!!yaay!!!DancingWhat more can one ask for..

Anyways dear,read all the updates in one go!! Fabulous work!! One more push..that's all what Naini needs !! Loved the way Maan took care of his wife...I'm happy that their story got the required closure...Very very interested in Naini and abhi now..
Love the way you portray their emotions dear..You are truly very special.Smile

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Part 3- I loved the update! Everything around her was reminding N of R. I loved the way you described N's emotions. Maan and Geet are so cute. lol I want to know what happened in Geet's old room! And whenever N and R are going to get
together. It's going to be craziness.

:)

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