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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 93)

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
2 in a row...well that was surprising! 

Nice one...glad to know Rishab is not pushing his Naini and taking it all slow...hopefully things will settle down, they all do but when is uncertain ! 

Sometimes reeling the time and activities slowly makes the difference as you can ponder over intricate details n even your emotions and feelings towards a certain issue!

Lovely part...

Take Care.

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
both the parts were very well written...
i real;ly loved the account of their first kiss...the uncertainties of the relationship...the beginning of a new found love...the reluctant acceptance...all was incredible...
very beautifully brought to forth...
the second part help rishabh break some barriers and reach closer to naini...
the best part is he is doing it very subtly and not on her face by discussing it or engaging her in one convo regarding it...
i am really impressed with how rishabh is trying to work on his past mistakes and work on their relation...also want to mention that the pace here is so apt...neither slow nor fast...
i feel its moving a perfect pace...and a very sensitive and wise approach...
really i am awed to see how the story is moving and getting better beyond my expectations...
waiting eagerly for more progress...plz continue soon

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Both the updates were beautiful.

Thank you for the back to back updates.
Rishabh stalking Naini just like in their good old days giving her space was too good.
He is trying his level best silently to get her back.
Their childhood love story was super sweet.
Rishabh's continous stalking and concern were so beautiful
Loved the way he taught her to kiss.
Their confessions of love was also very sweet.
may be reliving those moments made naini stop by the coffee shop.
The whole animal shelter scene was beautiful.
Naini was so involved and engrossed in the birthing process.
Poor thing couldnt take  it when the pups were lost and mom in distress.
Rishabh was silently supporting her  all the time.
His complement near their bulding was beautiful.
He didnt accompany her in and gave her her solitude again keeping up his promise.
I dont think it would be long before naini would land up at Rishabh's flat given his silent efforts.
Waiting for the next part.
 

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Thanks a lot for another one.
Naini seems to be getting more and more desperate.
Adding to her woes is the sweet routine of our own love birds.
It was wondeful to see Geet back  blushing.
All of maaneet's sweet moments made naini go back to her own with Rishabh.
I too still remember her first saree experience when she was so lost not knowing how to drape it.
If i remember well she also found the saree carefully kept in rishabh's cupoard.
I am so obsessed with Rish naini now.
Loved the way naini was cusing herself while reliving those moments.
She so wants to get back too but since Rishabh left it all on her she has got to make the first move.
That is quite difficult given all the khurana pride and the hurtful situations she has gone through too.
Still i feel its not long before she goes down stairs .
May be she should try the fire exit like Geet did on Newyears.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks a lot for the saturday treat.
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
4 parts back to back...
hasini you are on a roll dear...
what a way to celebrate the weekend...

i loved the 3rd update to core...
the way you used the maaneet relationship for naini to retrospect and walk down the memory lane...
also help her understand their relationship...increase her need for love and for her companion...
loved the maan and geet moments...
the update truly celebrated love and bonding...

the next was even better...
her instincts noting only her love in the crowd..
she telling herself that she has finally managed to appreciate somebody else before reality dawns on her and she chides herself that how can she even think that she can be away from rishabh...
what play of emotions ...awesome...
then inside the lounge...loved naini rishabh and snow ...
and then the dhamaka...
loved ut...finally the last string is pulled and i feel rishabh will now take charge...or will this might trigger naini to finally speak up...
eagerly waiting for a heart to heart convo from both...
plz continue soon


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